Akdha ss: Beyond innocence chapter6 Updated on pg1 (21/11/2016)

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#621

why u hv to stop here payal di , oho i desperately want to read next...

my condition is...

anyways , nice chappy finally jalal managed to convince her for lunch date , his childlike excitement on his victory & jodha she is melting am so excited for upcoming chapter , plz continue soon...

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durgachintaada

@durgachintaada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#622

thanks for the update and pm

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iinfiq

@iinfiq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#623

amazing as always

I wondered if you write something, I guess you write on that easily, without much thingking, as your writing sooo nice and beautiful to read.

keep on writing buddy

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harsh

@sirat.kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#624

nice ch
ja convinced Jo fr dinner date...wow
update soon

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#625

wow interesting progress...trial room scene was nice...continue soon & do pm

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#626

beautiful!! best thing is u decided to update.plot and concept is different tempting to explore more.update soon.thanks for pm.😉

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#627

res
unressing soon 😆

payal 🤗what a fantabulous update dear
romance in trial rooms ,i just love this concept of urs yaar 😉
so the attraction is mutual 😳, neither jodha nor jalal can resist each others charm as a result they r falling for each other unknowlingly .
i m in love with this bold but at times shy jodha 😉
wow so finally jodha agreed for a lunch date with jalal and he was so happy
eagerly waiting for next part dear
continue soon
thanks for pm

Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#628

Lovely chapter payal!
Jodha and jalal finally r friends...
Cute one!
Thanx for he pm... 😊

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sho123

@sho123

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#629

finally u updated payal 😃
about chappi its terrific
ja full on latto on Jo
and Jo too is melting in his charm
ya Jo agreed going with ja
thanks for pm
do continue soon 😊