Originally posted by: lovespari
hey prii dii...
super awesome updates dii...both prt was awesome...luvd both prt.
u write both prts amazingly..m must say u r amazing in evry update u r managing very well to keep people make hell confusion but yet curious interstd n eagr fr othr updates...fantastic dii teally amazing.
ja n abdul prt was really nice n little touchy..poor ja he suffering n thing is he is nt want to frgt anything but remind n i think he is more suffring bcz jo is involvd with tht incident...i hope m right..do tell me.
n the lines u said abut pains..was beautyful n really true..love those lines.
jo n mrs. briganzaa prt was soo sweet...aww..jo is such a nice n helpful girl..hw this innocnt n pure girl cn do anything wrong fr which she is suffring n guilty fr tht...i dnt think tht she wuld hd done anything wrong...
dr sheetal a doctor cum friend of jo..luv thr prt..she is vry nice prson n too much wrried fr jo n want to help hr to cum out frm it as soon as possible..jo is lucky to gt her in hr life..i think mybe scnd prsn of hr life who undrstnd hr inner turmoil n suffering n want to remove all this aftr vivvan..oh god dii...please..please..tell wht had happn in past tht jo n vivvan related n guilty fr tht...wht hv thy done any clue dii...now m hell curious..
oh dii..who r thes cute little bunnys..hehe..thy r shoo cute..hey dii the girl is harshali naa..the lead chrctr of bajrangi bhaijaan.aww she is luking soo cut n vry small..luv thm both..want to kiss thm..aww..jo was going to gt punishmnt..hehe...n ther punishmnt was really tasty dii..me also want..hehe...oh god ja is also cum..while reading i hv doubt tht ja will cum here but aftr last line my doubt is clear...oh god now whtt..frm whm she is hidding n to whm he is searching frm yrs r now cum face to face...oh god ab kya hogga dii...vry bad dii u stop on vry wrong tim...hw cn u do this to ur little shweet readers..now hw cn thy mange to liv oh noo m gtting restless frm now only...dii now u hv to update soon..okk..pleaseee
accha tell me hw jo ja both associate with same NGO but thy didnt came face to face or meet with ech othr bfr..thy always cum to meet thm naa..thn hw cum thy nt meet n hw is thes childrn n hw ja jo meet thm...uff again soo mny ques n no answr or no clue abut it...diii
waise thank u soo much fr thes two amazing update..really enjoy n luvd reading it...lovely
waiting fr nxt...n really hope u will update soon..hainaa dii..
thank u fr pm me...
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