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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#241

I am really sorry dear, but here you'll have to face The Beast Jalal, rather than always sweet one... 😔

It being the dark and revenge based story needs the hero to be villain kind... But don't worry, I'll try to make him as soft as possible... 😃

Originally posted by: swriter
Hey buddy do update fast and plz don't make jalal our villen plz i know it is revenge full dark story but still he is our hero ok plz update next chapter fast buddy

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Amazing first chapter priya
U described every bit in detail 👏
Loved ur narration...
Jodha n Jalal r childhood friends.. very interesting
What happened with her six yrs back 😕
Reveal it soon..
Expecting Jalal in next update
Thanks for pm
Keep rockong dear

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Thank u so much dear... 😊

I am glad u liked my work so much... 😃

I hope I didn't bore u much with all the detailings... 😆

Will update next part ASAP... 😊

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
Amazing first chapter priya
U described every bit in detail 👏
Loved ur narration...
Jodha n Jalal r childhood friends.. very interesting
What happened with her six yrs back 😕
Reveal it soon..
Expecting Jalal in next update
Thanks for pm
Keep rockong dear

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Hi Priaa,

Just read the story ...nice plot ...loved it ...nice writing style ..loved the details ... looking forward to chappy 2...

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Thank u Prema... 😊

Was really looking forward for your review...

I am glad you liked it... Would post ASAP... 😃

Originally posted by: rexniko
Hi Priaa,
Just read the story ...nice plot ...loved it ...nice writing style ..loved the details ... looking forward to chappy 2...

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Piyu didu🤗
I know mera kuch nhi ho sakta... every time late to comment... 😔
Koi naa...
Coming to update
Wow start di...
I told you before also the way you describe scene is fabulous...
Firstly I thought that guy as Jalal...
The siblings bonding was too good...
I love that flash back part... my lil cute joja...😉
Waiting for next update...
so update soon...

So thanks for the pm

Or haan congratulations didu 🥳. Finally aap golden Goldie ban gaye... eeeps

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Thank you so much baby... 😊

Was dying to read your comment... 😃

You made my day... ⭐️

Love you bacha... ❤️

Originally posted by: Monucute
Piyu didu🤗
I know mera kuch nhi ho sakta... every time late to comment... 😔
Koi naa...
Coming to update
Wow start di...
I told you before also the way you describe scene is fabulous...
Firstly I thought that guy as Jalal...
The siblings bonding was too good...
I love that flash back part... my lil cute joja...😉
Waiting for next update...
so update soon...

So thanks for the pm

Or haan congratulations didu 🥳. Finally aap golden Goldie ban gaye... eeeps