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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 6

Pari's prov

It was an awesome day except the new of Rajat coming here, what will I do, at any cost he shouldn't find me out. My thoughts were broken hearing the sweet voice of little angels of my life.

"momma..., momma", khushi was calling me standing near my bed trying to climb up, while I saw khushan helping his sister to climb up, no doubt he was going to be a wonderful and a protective brother

"yes baby", I said sitting up and pulling her to my lap, kissing her cheek.

"I am not baby, I am 3years already", she said cutely pouting, crossing her hand near her chest.

"o god, momma is sorry big girl", I said holding my ear, while khushan climb on to bed.

"momma... khushi is still small girl then me, I am big then her", he said standing on bed showing his height.

"oh yeah my baby boy also have become big now", I said pulling his chubby cheek.

"momma I am also big girl see", my baby girl standing next to her brother.

"yes baby, you both have become big, ok" I said smiling at their cute talks.

These two angels make me forget all the stress and worries.

"O, big boy and girl time too bed", I said making them lye on bed and I slipped next to them, when they both cuddle to me, I smiled kissing them on forehead.

I sighed thinking tomorrow is going to be a big day.

Next day

I dropped my babies to day-care.

I got to hide from Rajat today, yeah your thinking right today Imperial company and our Building designers company are sighing the contract, well I don't know for how all, all I know is , I should not come face to face to Rajat, what will I tell him, what if he didn't like my presence there and cancel the contract or maybe he won't mind as I am not the only women in this life, is he having a girlfriend?, did he marry again?, will I be able to see him and again and act as if nothing happen? O god till how long I have hide? He will definitely find me out? Should I tell him about him being father? What if he take my twins away from me? . Oh no I will never tell him, but wait he has rights to know and my babies have rights to know about their father? But will he accept them? O god why are you putting me through this, I want my babies to know about their father but not like this, if he didn't accept them my babies will be heartbroken, no I can't afford that, I will tell them only when they become old enough to understand and then if they want to be with their father I am not going to stop them, but not now.

I stopped my car at office parking and made my way towards the office entrance.

It's going to be a big day, I sighed nodding my head

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 7

Rajat prov

I thought today I am going to meet my Angel and explain her, but no she didn't even give me a chance to speak to she just ran instead after the meeting, I could feel she was nervous, but I was amused to she wasn't shocked I guess she did knew I was coming, it's stupid of me I couldn't meet her personally and now repenting it searching her address in this big city of Newyork.

Ok I will search her, whatever it take to find her, I will do everything in my power to search her, to make it up to her, I should not have let her go

flashback

I enter into the office premises and I was welcomed at the entrance to the chairman of the company Mr.Alex Walters.

"Hello, Mr. Tokas", he said forwarding his hand.

"Hello", I said and shook hand.

He started to introduce his staff, which I was least interested, well, yeah, I wasn't interested in any of this, my eye was searching for my Angel, but she was nowhere to be found. My started to roam to every corner but was of no use and Mr. Walters called someone..

And she was looking as angelic he was, she was grown to a strong independent women, her curves look more prominent, she had a strange glow on her face, confident and yet I could feel she was nervous of something.

I could feel my lips go wide and that is when I found myself smiling at her idiotically, my thoughts were when Mr.Walters guided me to conference.

Meeting was finished and the agreement was signed with few terms and conditions , well, I really wasn't concentrating on what was going on, I had asked my friend cum my assistant Arush to look after that on beforehand, as I knew I will not concentrated when I will be seeing my princess, my angel after so many years, and there was sitting watching her, actually staring her, I cannot believe my eye, she was actually here, sitting in front of me, O gosh she is hell beautiful, I wanted to hold her in my arms,O my god I must be looking like a pervert now..

Well, thanks to haven's as the meeting finally finished after nearly an hour or something.

Thanks to haven's once again, when Mr. Walters asked Pari to take me to my cabin, as I had informed him I need a separate cabin before, finally I got some time to spend with her.

I could feel her mutter something but I couldn't hear what she was saying, I chuckled seeing her irritated and why me? Face.

"Well, can we leave", I asked breaking her thought.

She motioned me to follow her, she was so quite all along the way, I knew she was angry, what was I expecting her to run to my arms , after what I had done, I am such a a***hole, finally we reached the cabin.

It was good, actually wait it was of my taste, from the painting of walls to my the pen on my table and I instantly knew who had arranged the cabin, off course my angel had done that, only she knows my likes and dislikes, and the arrangement shows how well she know about me, maybe she still likes me, loves me somewhere deep inside her heart, in that case I will never let her go, is should apologise her,

"It's now or never rajat do it now", my inner self yelled at me.

"Sir, I hope you like the cabin, if you need anything call me, I will take your leave sir", she said in her low angelic voice looking anywhere not me

How much I love her voice, but she called me sir, what the crap, I want her to call my name and say loud looking into my eye, she is my wife for God sake,

"Control Rajat, control", I said calming my nerves , breathing deep in and out, and before I could say anything she was out of my cabin.

Shit, shit, shit it's so stupid of me to let her go, but wait she will be here, I can meet her whenever I want.

After settle down, no actually preparing myself to apologise, I called for her, but instead of her some other women came,

When I asked about pari, she said pari left, taking leave

"ok, you can go now", I said

She looked at me weirdly but she left and that's what matters to me. I was disappointed, but why she left so suddenly, hope she is doing good and not in any problem, but I don't understand why my heart is getting restless, maybe I have to find out how is pari, I guess she is in some problem and hence my heart is getting restless, finding its owner is not near it, I felt a strange pain in it, god keep her safe I silently prayed.

But still I need to find her, I immediately called Arush and told him everything and asked him to find her address, I have to meet her before it got too late, I am already 4years late, I will not let to her to go away this time.

Flashback ends

And here, I am in front of her door




ok frnds i guess it's too much to read 7chappies all together, i will update whenever i find time so i am giving more updates at a time, i am quite busy to update regularly, so please bear me. no proof reading done so please excuse me for mistakes done, you can read my stories on wattpad also @Archana_Nayak .

well likes and comment must be done otherwise no updates from next

thank you

los amo a todos

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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Oh my god .. 7 chapters together 👏👏 .. Really love the story ... Update asap ... Nd thank u for the treat of 7 chapters altogether .. 😃😉😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
After a long u updated
Bt its worth to wait .
Nd 7 chptrs all together 😉 superb.

All chaptrs r mindbowing. 👏
Love all the chptrs.
Amazing story.
Ja betrayed jo .nd finally jo decide to leave him as she dont want his character shadow on her children.
AFter she left ja realized what sin he had done.
Her importance in his life, how much he love her nd she knowing about his betrayal love him so much.
He feel guilty for his mistakes for hurting her.
And finally he traced her .he want to apologize her n want her back in his life.
While jo completely unaware about his intentions is in dilemma what will his reaction to see her again, should she tell him about the kids, will he accept them?

Ja finally decide to confront her n reached her home to talk to her.
So eager to know what will his reaction when he comes to know about khushan n khushi nd will jo forgive him?
Eagerly waoting for it.
Update soon...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
wow acchu..dhamaka update 7 chapi's in one shot... lovely all emotions penned it so well becoming mother to betrayal, separation, hiding, searching for ur love finally they r face to face... hw wil rajat react now...wen he get to know about twins...little once r so cute... pari fear of loosing her kids is common hw wil she face him now...rajat reached at her house hope she didnt shifted to some wer else... pls pls pls continue soon & eagerly waiting for their first interaction after 4 years...wil be waiting for ur next pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Really nice and creative storyline!! Can't wait for next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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After a long long wait..u updtd dear...
n tht also 7 chaps togthr...wow...superb acchu.
love u dear fr this.
updts wer awesome ,amazing...totally loved it.
ja betrayed jo but she kkeeping quiet but whn she cam to knw she is pregngnt she took the most imprtnt n difficult decision of hr lif..leaving him.
N aft hr leaving ja undrstnding hr position in his lif n thn serching fr him n aftr 4yrs he found hr in newyork...n in meamwhile time jo deliv two beautyful twins compltd hr studies n now foing job...n now aftr4 long sepration thy cam face to face...evrything was written superb dear...
jo pain aftr betraying by ja n fr tking decision of divorce n leaving him whn he was totally brokn n begging fr hr cumbck..n hr struggle she do to settle hrslf n taking care of baby by doing job...n ja pain whn he gt to knw position of jo in his lif n his feelings n his restlessness n helpness n his worry n his detrmination to find pari n gt hr bck...all was written vry beautyfully dear...
i knw u giv soo mny chap togthr but acchu yaar u stop on a wrong tim now we will kept thinking...wht will happn next n will thy meet...will he gt to knw abut his babies...oh god soo mny thing ...not fair acchu...please try to updt soon...please.
really enjoyed reading it...
waiting fr nxt updt ...
updt soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for all chapters update nest chapter soon make it fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Oh my god .. 7 chapters together👏👏.. Really love the story ... Update asap ... Nd thank u for the treat of 7 chapters altogether ..😃😉😛

thank you..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

After a long u updated
Bt its worth to wait .
Nd 7 chptrs all together 😉 superb.

All chaptrs r mindbowing. 👏
Love all the chptrs.
Amazing story.
Ja betrayed jo .nd finally jo decide to leave him as she dont want his character shadow on her children.
AFter she left ja realized what sin he had done.
Her importance in his life, how much he love her nd she knowing about his betrayal love him so much.
He feel guilty for his mistakes for hurting her.
And finally he traced her .he want to apologize her n want her back in his life.
While jo completely unaware about his intentions is in dilemma what will his reaction to see her again, should she tell him about the kids, will he accept them?

Ja finally decide to confront her n reached her home to talk to her.
So eager to know what will his reaction when he comes to know about khushan n khushi nd will jo forgive him?
Eagerly waoting for it.
Update soon...


thank you

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