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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

U r welcome😆😆
Edit chesa..check again



Surya.. ☺️.. all hot hunks calling me super.. ☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: IgnatiaAkdha11

Nice chapter, too too long, and funny time between joja.. After at all I loved totally this chapter thanks for pm and waiting for next. But would u tell me chapter 1-30?? I'm shocked I was read this ff from chapter 31... And pls more romance for joja. Hehe



Chapters 1-30 have links on 1st page... please check index.. Romance progresses slow in this story.. please don't expect Hot stuff 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti



Surya.. ☺️.. all hot hunks calling me super.. ☺️

Yes..☺️I thought of adding Hrithik too but forgot😆
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Posted: 10 years ago


thank u Mittal..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Yes..☺️I thought of adding Hrithik too but forgot😆


hotness will be overloaded then 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhutanu

Oh loved it janhu and love you love you for this wonderful update... Even you are like jalal late update dekar thadpathi ho our apne adaa se mind-blowing update likk kar humare muskaan wapas lathi ho... And humare saari shikve katham... Truely love you dear...😃❤️😳


thanku Tanu.. happy that u liked it.. and the delay was not deliberate... I had project tensions
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am late
Jahnu u gave update..
Still I have to read it.
First thing I alwayss check first is the last part..omg
I think something something is there at the end as Jalal said u have to come to my arm at the end..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

Jahnu first of all naaku chala chala kopam ga undi ni paina update late ga post chesi nanduku but at the same time I want to give u a bonecrushing hug for this update becoz it was worth waiting. Ok nenu elago ivvalenu kabbati pls pls pls bavagariki cheppava hug chesukomani on my behalf 😉
>> Mauli.. 😆.. I know every one is upset with my delay.. but I had no choice.. thanks for excusing me so soon.. about the hug... I felt it and here you go.. I'm returning it

Now coming to update it was superb fantabulous awesome blossom update. I won't say this one is the best till now becoz then again I have to take my word back after reading next chap 😆.
>> Aww... happy that u liked it dear..

So mohan disclosed the secret between him and jodha to Abdul and Abdul was really surprised after knowing that, including the don 😆 though he already had an idea but still he wanted to hear that from her and he tricked her to blurt that it his own way.
>> He wanted to know the secret in his own way.. he couldn't believe his idiot hid things from him..
Such a devil he is 😆, poor Jo was trapped in his words and unknowingly admitted her involvement ,my naive jodha failed in front of her cunning shrewd boss 😆.
>> he's smart in his moves.. she's bound to trap..
Hmm so she is hurt now and why not jalal kaam Hi aisa karta hai 😡.
Aww she wanted him to praise her ,hug her and what not 😉 but this stubborn man did nothing of that sort infact he hurted her more.
>> he reserved it for later.. he has no haste..😉

Abba badepappa and pedamma such a sweet adorable personalities. The more I read about them ,the more I fall for them, selfless ,loving parents.
I really loved the trio conversation. Blaster chef ,pehli baar suna hai 😉😆,

>>adoring couple.. they complement each other..
finally he made up to her house to apologise 😉 good going jalal 👍🏼.
He reached jodha's residence with an excuse of having important work to be finished on urgent note.( pyar mein kya kya karna padta hai)😆.
Her casual attires are always a treat for him 😉.
>> True.. girls look cool in casuals.. 😉.. when he erred.. he also has to correct na.. 😆
"Should I change?" viewing her reflection in mirror, Jodha thought. "Tiny sleeves, three forth skirt... more skin show to him than ever. Is it ok?" A shy smile crept on her lips reminiscing his gaze hovering over her feet. "Who else has the right to see you than Jalal? Ahah em confidence Abba 😎
>> 😆.. ante kada.. who else has the right? 😉
Saradhiji ok played a cupid here ,he offered them the desired privacy though unknowingly 😉.
Again he tricked her with his silence ,poor Jo she had to take his name .
Aww I loved the way he tried to explain her that whatever he did ,he did for her out of concern and revelation really surprised her.
And the way he tried to bring back her smile ,I just loved it.
>> Saradhi ji is confident that Jalal and Jodha are matured enough to be left alone without surveillance. 😆
Never ever dare defying me, else I'll sweep you off the ground. You will not have a place to stand neither in this company, nor on this Earth... Till yesterday you're THE BOSS, today I'm your BOSS... Ha ha ha I'm BOSS OF THE BOSS... ha ha ha... Oh my God!!" .
This was the best 😆
>> Thanks darls.. 🤗
Now my fav part ,the whole laptop fiasco was like a treat for us to read and their not so awkward situation ahem ahem ,the couches there r really really lucky for jalal, I agree with him 😉😆.
Bangaram u nailed the chap with the last part
His gentle kiss on her forehead and feathery kiss on her eyes hmmm (eto vellipoyindi manasu) 😉.
>> Aww... very glad u like and enjoyed reading the last part.. BTW.. eto vellipoyindi manasu is one of my top 10 favorites.. 😉
My lovely idiot... Run as far as you can", leisurely standing up he chuckled. "One day... YOU HAVE TO RETURN TO MY ARMS.. AND BE THERE FOREVER!!".

Superb ra ,I really enjoyed reading each and every bit of the chapter .
Continue soon bangaram
Thanks for pm:-) :-)
>> Whenever u call me bangaram I feel like a pampered kid.. thanks for the pampering Mauli.. .. will try to keep entertaining u the same way..


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Edited by hemakeerti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Looks like the devil wore Prada until Saridhiji's house and then devil died, readers cried and no inky pinky kissy

Comments later 😆

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