FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 8 (Chap 32 20/10/2015 page 1) updated

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sunitha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: harshu27

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hema plz update soonish 😭😭

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Maryam

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Posted: 10 years ago

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UPDAATEE PLEASEEE 😭 😭

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

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finnally update mil hi gya...

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#314

me first 🥳

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diksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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wonderful , superb part 2 chap 31.. Jalal is real DEVIL😛... Poor Jo😳☺️

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
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finnally update mil hi gya...

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woah!!! so...finnallyy the most awaited day came...😆

it ws just superb amazing wndrfull...n all tht i could say to praise it... would b less...👏

firstly whn mohan told about jo's involvement...i ws jumping on my bed reading tht...🤣

n god whn abdul told jalal about it ...

jalal trickd jo...he always does tht...😉

the way u detailed hr peddamma n hr badepapa's bond with hr...their love...the fun they hd together seriously di...u r awesome...👍🏼

And the bond we share..." Jalal repeated her own lines in firm conviction, "...encouraged me to take a decision GOOD FOR YOU ON YOUR BEHALF!!

these were the lines tht took my heart away...❤️

"You see the consequences of defying me?" carelessly tipping my chin down, you roar. "Never ever dare defying me, else I'll sweep you off the ground. You will not have a place to stand neither in this company, nor on this Earth... Till yesterday you're THE BOSS, today I'm your BOSS... Ha ha ha I'm BOSS OF THE BOSS... ha ha ha... Oh my God!!"

n aftr this i ws laughing like hell...🤣

n to forget their awesome romantic moment they shared on tht couch which is lucky fr jalal...😉

and the masterstroke ws this di... 😃

"One day... YOU HAVE TO RETURN TO MY ARMS.. AND BE THERE FOREVER!!"

m crazily in love with writing , with ur ff diii...😳

loved it frm the core of my heart...😊

thnk u sooo much fr giving such a mindblowing update...😃

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IgnatiaAkdha11

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice chapter, too too long, and funny time between joja.. After at all I loved totally this chapter thanks for pm and waiting for next. But would u tell me chapter 1-30?? I'm shocked I was read this ff from chapter 31... And pls more romance for joja. Hehe

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melovesja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#318

speechless dear👏

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madhutanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#319

Oh loved it janhu and love you love you for this wonderful update... Even you are like jalal late update dekar thadpathi ho our apne adaa se mind-blowing update likk kar humare muskaan wapas lathi ho... And humare saari shikve katham... Truely love you dear...😃❤️😳

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#320

Jahnu first of all naaku chala chala kopam ga undi ni paina update late ga post chesi nanduku but at the same time I want to give u a bonecrushing hug for this update becoz it was worth waiting. Ok nenu elago ivvalenu kabbati pls pls pls bavagariki cheppava hug chesukomani on my behalf 😉

Now coming to update it was superb fantabulous awesome blossom update. I won't say this one is the best till now becoz then again I have to take my word back after reading next chap 😆.

So mohan disclosed the secret between him and jodha to Abdul and Abdul was really surprised after knowing that, including the don 😆 though he already had an idea but still he wanted to hear that from her and he tricked her to blurt that it his own way.

Such a devil he is 😆, poor Jo was trapped in his words and unknowingly admitted her involvement ,my naive jodha failed in front of her cunning shrewd boss 😆.

Hmm so she is hurt now and why not jalal kaam Hi aisa karta hai 😡.

Aww she wanted him to praise her ,hug her and what not 😉 but this stubborn man did nothing of that sort infact he hurted her more.

Abba badepappa and pedamma such a sweet adorable personalities. The more I read about them ,the more I fall for them, selfless ,loving parents.

I really loved the trio conversation. Blaster chef ,pehli baar suna hai 😉😆,

finally he made up to her house to apologise 😉 good going jalal 👍🏼.

He reached jodha's residence with an excuse of having important work to be finished on urgent note.( pyar mein kya kya karna padta hai)😆.

Her casual attires are always a treat for him 😉.

"Should I change?" viewing her reflection in mirror, Jodha thought. "Tiny sleeves, three forth skirt... more skin show to him than ever. Is it ok?" A shy smile crept on her lips reminiscing his gaze hovering over her feet. "Who else has the right to see you than Jalal? Ahah em confidence Abba 😎

Saradhiji ok played a cupid here ,he offered them the desired privacy though unknowingly 😉.

Again he tricked her with his silence ,poor Jo she had to take his name .

Aww I loved the way he tried to explain her that whatever he did ,he did for her out of concern and revelation really surprised her.

And the way he tried to bring back her smile ,I just loved it.

Never ever dare defying me, else I'll sweep you off the ground. You will not have a place to stand neither in this company, nor on this Earth... Till yesterday you're THE BOSS, today I'm your BOSS... Ha ha ha I'm BOSS OF THE BOSS... ha ha ha... Oh my God!!" .

This was the best 😆

Now my fav part ,the whole laptop fiasco was like a treat for us to read and their not so awkward situation ahem ahem ,the couches there r really really lucky for jalal, I agree with him 😉😆.

Bangaram u nailed the chap with the last part

His gentle kiss on her forehead and feathery kiss on her eyes hmmm (eto vellipoyindi manasu) 😉.

My lovely idiot... Run as far as you can", leisurely standing up he chuckled. "One day... YOU HAVE TO RETURN TO MY ARMS.. AND BE THERE FOREVER!!".

Superb ra ,I really enjoyed reading each and every bit of the chapter .

Continue soon bangaram

Thanks for pm:-) :-)

Edited by avika444 - 10 years ago