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This is the 1st time that I am writing any os
So plz ignore my mistakes n enjoy...


Jodha n jalal study in same collage.This is their last year in collage. Jo is most beautiful girl in college n ja is most handsome boy(no need of telling this).jo n ja r best friendsn they secretly love eachother.

Jo's father n mother doesn't like her.they only love salim(Jo's brother).
Ja's mother had divorced with her husband.she n ja manages all work of JM groups n has only one wish to see her son married as soon as possible.

ja is looking for jo when he sees jo sitting in garden.ja immediately understood that Jo is upset because of her parents.ja slowing go towards Jo n sits beside her n aks"thinking about me?"
Jo "in yr dreams"
Ja"OK come with me.period is about to start n I don't want a lecture from proffeser about blah blah"
Jo"I don't want to attend period"
Ja"OK then we r going to shopping"
Jo"y"
Ja "arreh yaar forgot tommorow is my cousin brother marriage"
Jo"soory I forgot.but I don't want to go anywhere"
Ja"ohh hlo main tumhe bata raha hu puch nahi raha hu(ohh hlo I am telling u to come.I am not asking u)
Jo"OK baba let's go"
JJ reached the mall...Jo comes out of car n ja parked the car.
Ja takes Jo to jewellery shop.Jo is confused.ja smirks seeing her confused.ja aks Jo to select one ring.Jo"y ring n fr who?"
Ja"my bro wants to gift a ring to her would be wife so he asks my help n i know ur choice is very good"
Jo"OK"
Aftersome time Jo selects one ring.it was beautiful with a diamond in centre.ja asks shopkeeper to pack it.Jo do some shopping for ja.ja drop jo a little far from her house as he don't want her any problem.
Next day Jo make some excuse n goes to place where marriage is happening but she forgot to take address. So she calls ja n asks him the address.Jo hired a taxi n the place. The place was very beautiful.when she enter the place she sees nobody. She thinks that she has comed to wrong place n was about to go when she listens ja voice.she turns n sees ja standing at centre.ja sees Jo n was spell bound by her beauty. She was looking an angle in green n pink lehnga.her hairs were opened. Jo goes near ja n asks many questions but he was just staring at her.after getting no response she shakes him then he come to reality .Jo asks him that where r everybody.ja places his index finger at her lips n comes near her ear n said her not to say anything. Jo was amazed seeing ja doing this n let me tell u she was enjoying all this.ja bends on his knees.takes her hand in his n kiss on her hand n said"I LOVE YOU will u marry me"
Jo was happy after listening his loves for her n tears start coming out from her eye.ja got tensed n says"I am forcing u say yes.if u don't lov...before he could complete his sentence Jo smashed her lips on ja.ja was first shock but starts enjoying the kiss.both were kissing each other like there is no tomorrow. After some time they break the kiss.Jo touches her forehead with him n said"I LOVE YOU TOO JALAL.More than anything. "Ja was more than happy after listening this. Ja kissed Jo very hard...n makes her wear the same ring which Jo had selected.
In car
Jo" so this was yr surprise.u made me select ring for me without me knowing about it"
Ja "yes because I want to give u surprise but there is one problem that yr mom n dad will never agree for this marriage"
Jo "I know"
Ja"what will we do now?"
Jo"jalal frankly I don't have much attachment with my parents. I am not emotionally attach with them.I will not be having any problem if they will not be in marriage "
Ja"r u sure i means after all they r yr parents"
Jo"no ja n my nani(grandmother) is coming na.she matters to me more than my mother."
Ja"OK my ammi has talked to maulvi n pandit n they said after 5 days is best date to marry."
Jo "u had planned everything"
"Ofcourse I was knowing that my jaan also loves me"
"Who said I loves u??"
"What r u saying?? "
"Just joking baby"
"Don't ever joke like that"
"Awww my baby"

After 5 day they were married happily n lived happily even after .Jo parents doesn't attend the marriage but then also JJ were married with everyone's blessings.

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Taklema thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yeppee me first🥳
awesome n very cute os dear👏
i also liked the surprise like jo😛
Edited by Taklema - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo on ur first OS
Nice one
Liked the surprise
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Os
Very cute story...
Jalal gave jodha a very Beautiful surprise
Congo for your first os..
Edited by jodhaandakbar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing os
jst simple n sweet luvd it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os sirat.
Awesomely written👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice and cute os sirat😊
Congo for ur first os dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for 1st os

lovely os & loved it...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow..very nice os dr..congrats for ur 1st os..write more and more..
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Originally posted by: Taklema

yeppee me first🥳
awesome n very cute os dear👏
i also liked the surprise like jo😛

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