~Revenge~ Thread-5 (THREAD CLOSED) - Page 55

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

OUTSTANDING update... emotional one ...
Thank you so much didu!!
must say you have great potential at writing neetu..
Really??😲m floored

you mislead me with Jodha's traumatic condition..i thought something bad happened with her.. and Jalal in shocking state..
something happened to the main lead then the guy Will help her...blah blah... it's so common... so thought of something new 😉

got relieved that ..it was Dadi's death..phew..Aww poor Jo .. she lost the only person who loved her unconditionally.. now Jodha's pain .. affecting Jalal.. for the good... U have written .. her tramatic state... brilliantly
👏
was just feeling bad while writing this... so it just come out of blue... Thanks once again didu... M glad you like it

My eyes moist many a time reading this one..almost every time for Jo but this time for Jalal too.. he was mellowed.. truly feeling bad for him...
he is affected too didu... for the motherly warmth and affection he has carved for... dadi gave him... so its big loss for him too...



He can't her tears... he wants to see chirpy Jo.. back... he cried his heart out... poor baby..

after all he too is a human... he too needs a support... But he tried his best to hide his pain... failure at last came to him


Precap really really interesting..

Next update will be more interesting😉

Thanks for the arthfree update neetu😉
Loved reading this long update.. morethan 2300 words.. keep it up dear..

😆 Arth maybe next chapter me dikhe... vese I don't want my readers to throw chapplas and juttas on me for bringing arth!!🤣


Love you my lil devil sissy 🤗
Love you too my dearest didu!!🤗❤️

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Thank you! thank you! thank you! so so much didu!! for the looonnngg comment!!
You have a big share in motivating me with others... I really love to read your comments!!
Thanks for being my dearest didu...
love you a lot
muaah❤️

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

Really i was hell scared when I read last chapter...
I thought u had some shocking things in ur mind for next chapter as u said u want tragic end... I thought very bad things... my god but I am very thankful to u,... u don't write what I had thought...😊😊thanks dear ... I thought arth would have done something wrong wid jodha... my god bhagvan ka shukr he... ki aisa kuch nai huwa...

Thank you so much didu!!
😆 Hehehe... mera mind kab kya soch le... ye uska owner bhi ni jaanta🤣
what you had thought di??😉
Arth ki band naa bja deta Jalal🤣
not bhagwan kaa... mera shukr manao😆

Thanks a bunch for the comment di!!😊

Originally posted by: melovesja

Very emotional update very well written their pain at lost of their only family her dadima ,his worry for jo ,care and support to her. nicely saw his agony when he feel that lose his chirpy jowho is only life.

thanks for give this super turn to story and change your decision to happy ending

Thank you :)
M glad you like it!!
Yeah a happy ending for my lovely readers!!
Thanks for such a lovely comment!!

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">kya yaar</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I was expecting an interesting and hot chapter but u gave emotional update😡</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I can't see any signs of SR in this story now.. and from where that dadi come from that too at this time??😡😡😡</font>

🤣 emotional update hi niklate hai is lil brain se 😉
Dadi to chali gayi or aap unhe bich me laa rahe ho??😆
SR eeks... I m really scared of writing such things!!😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Btw u wrote this chapter beautifully😉</font>

Thank you payal di :)

Originally posted by: yashika.angel

Awesome update...

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chapter was very nicely written neetu 😊</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">when jo was not telling him the reason then she was getting on my nerves too like jalal😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">u beautifully write their pain dearie but 2 months have passed now.. she should try to come out from all this</font>

Thanks a bunch didu😊
M glad you like it
🤣 Let Jalal know what are ill effects of being a 'adarsh' hubby...
she will come out soon!!😊

Originally posted by: savindi.db

oh baby dont cry..i will surely unres aftr i update my stories darlingg..

unres kro naa didu!!!😭

Originally posted by: ISHANI222

so beautiful chapter...that's what it was..

brilliantly written.

l o v e d it to core.

specially when jalal says jodha to talk to him... it was so emotional.😭

update soon...a nd thank 4 the pm.

Thanks a lot :)
M glad you like it :)

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

update krrooo naaa jjaaannn!!!!!!!!!!!!!

after 8 jaan!! hwz u??