~Revenge~ Thread-5 (THREAD CLOSED) - Page 49

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

So emotional update.

thanks deep😃
Bt i really thankful to u that its not arth nowhere in the scence.

arth ko bich mai laakar mujhe mere readers se maar thodi hi khaani hai!!😆
First i thought that ja saw arth n jo in some compromising pistion thatswhy he was hell shocked bt u changed the track unexpectedly

huh!! You know intelligent me!! *raising my imaginary collars*🤣 just kidding...😛
Bt j really felt very bad for both jo ja to loose her dadi who is only family for them now.
Jo totally shattered while ja heart wrench to see jo like this.

yeah it's heart wrenching but this will bring our akdha close😉
He felt do helpless n alone .
He missed her bubbly jo who speak with him freely fight with him angry on him.
He want her bck

My poor jallu😔 yeah he is missing her badly

.finally his patience broke n break down in front of her.
Jo to open up with him after a long time.

finally barriers of emotions got broken!!
Hope they shared their heart nd move on in their life with neq memories
U penned it down really well.eager for nxt update
update asap

thanks once again deep...😳

Will update asap

Originally posted by: Geetbaala

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Neetu come baby first I will give u tight hug🤗

Howz u?

Finally u updated and bigger one.. 2500 words😲👏

U changed the track completely.. But I like this track dear.. Humesha Jalal ko sunat rehta tha ya phir gussa karta tha..

I loved his caring side.. His love towards Jo.

It an emotional update... But loss of her only parent can't be filled by anybody.. Only time heals the loss ...with love and care of Jalal.

Neetu now dont go into vanavasam dear.. Update regularly.

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

awesome update

a very emotional one...

death of daadi shocked akdha😲😭

both r in terrible state especially jodha

ended at very wrong time😡

continue soon

thnks fr pm

Originally posted by: Prachi0409

Baapre

Itna lamba... I can't believe it...

Sacchi... Hats off to you..

Emotional update😭

Thank god that arth is not there😃

Meri beti ab next chapter jaldi update karna..ok

Kabhi kabhi maa ki baat sun leni chahiye..

Jaldi matlab max to max 2 weeks😆

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

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Neetu dear!!

This hug is for the long update and for deciding to give a happy ending😳.I was fed up with ur I'll try song😡😆

Bindu di🤗 chalo finally my hard work paid off😉

Very emotional update dear😭😭.

You've penned down their agony very well👏👏

thank you so much didu😳

My guess went terribly wrong🤣

koi naa... keep guessing😆 I love your gussess 😆

I'm feeling bad for Jo and Jalal😭😭😭.Dadi was the only one they had

Jalal's condition is worse than Jo's as he needs to act strong for her and hide his pain.Poor Jallu😔😔

I always hated Jalal for his behavior,but now I just love him for being such a loving and caring hubby❤️❤️.

jallu is more lucky... uh huh uhh!! Now m jealous of him😡...

koi naa jitna love krna hai abhi karlo... next update devil will be back!! Tab love krna😉😆

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Two months have passed and still Jo is in trauma😲.The last part was touching with those dialogues,Jalal finally opened up.

Hope Jo understands his pain and tries to be normal again.

hope so!!😉

Precap is very interesting dear😳😳

Update sooon plsss,waitinggg

I have so many things in store!!! A bomb too... let's see how it's gonna blast!!!😉😉

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Amazing update neetu nd it was to emotional to...
thank you so much Rakshu di
ooo my god I was shocked after seeing d length of d update. .. loved it...
mee too shocked...😆
ooo god I did nt expect this that dadi is no more... I have written it very well hw jodha is facing her emotions r different nd when come to jalal he is facing nd fitting with his emotions...
one should be strong enough to hold other this is what we call relationship right???
hope jo come out of it soon I knw it is very difficult to bare d loos of the person u love the most... but she should come back to normal for jalal ...like d have jalal controlled his anger. ..nd d way he is taking care of jodha...
uhh huh uh huh everybody loves Jalal... But who made Jalal like this no body loves her!!! m seriously jealous of him now
update next part soon ...thanks for this update neetu...