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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys... First of all A Independence Day to you all..
Here's the chapter 7... Hope you like it...😊

Chapter 7
Soon they finished their lunch. Jodha took him to some nearby places and then headed back to their home. She didn't forget to purchase the famous 'misal' for everyone. Jalal turned towards Jodha and said "I must say Jodha Mumbai is a great city and even you guided me nicely. I hope you'll come to banglore soon. Though I am not as expert as you but still i can show you some of the good places.." "Sure Jalal. But right now my first priority is my career. So as soon as i get a long break I'll visit you. Hamida aunty is also tellin me since a long time but i dont get time and whenever i get i come here." "Hey by the way Jalal, i hope you are accompanying us in the function tonight." Jodha asked as a confirmation. "Which function Jodha?" Jalal was confused. "Are you don't know! Tonight me, moms and my friends are going for celebrating navratri as we go every year. I am the special guest for the night. I thought hamida ma must have told you." Jodha surprised. "Oh... Ammi didn't tell me anything. Anyways i am not intrested in any function. You people enjoy I'll stay at home." Jalal gave a not bothered look. "Are Jalal pleasee. Atleast come to watch the celebration. You should watch it. You don't dance but at least come to see. Pleassseee..." Jodha gave a pleading look an kept on irritating Jalal continuously by saying please and request. Finally Jalal gave up and agreed for coming with them. Jodha was feeling content and at the same time excited too but didnt know why.
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At night
Hamida and maina were ready for the celebration. Both of them were wearing a decent looking saree. Jalal wore a of ivory coloured pure Silk kurta , having simple embroidery with accented silver colour , subtly highlighting the intrinsic beauty of the kurta. Jalal was looking virile in that dress. His perfectly sculpted torso, clean-shaven masculine jaw and his shoulder length copper coloured hair and specially his chocolate brown orbs made him look more even more desirable.

Jodha came out wearing lehenga choli. She was looking a typical indian goddess. The lehenga was of off-white coloured with the bottom having heavy borders and silver coloured delicate flowers over the lehenga. The blouse was of red velvet and the sleeves were decorated with red and green floral design. And the dupatta was of similar green colour. She wore a delicate waist band which was increasing the beauty of her slender waist. The danglers were kissing her milky neck. Her mang teeka was hanging loosely on her forhead with the silver bindi just below it. She left her curly hair open. She applied mascara on her doe shaped eyes and pink lip gloss on her bow shapped lips and wore a neck piece on her bare neck. She was looking dazzling hot in that ethnic wear. Any man could die with just a glimpse of her.
Jalal turned towards her. He was captivated in her charm. He thought " ive never seen such a beautiful lady like her. She is even more beautiful than a celestial nymph." Jodha too saw him and she too was captured in his charisma. Their eyes locked for a moment. Both of them came out of the spell when they heard Hamida's call. They headed towards the gate.
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IN THE GROUND

Jodha had already introduced Jalal to moti. Jodha was the centre of attraction for the night since she was the special guest. Surya didnt come as he had to go somewhere else. But Moti and Jodha were enjoying themselves to the fullest. While Jalal was entertaining himself just by watching them. Hamida and maina were seated on the otherside of he ground where the singing program was being held. Jalal had again explored a new talent of Jodha i.e. DANCING. She was an amazing dancer. Her every move was clean and looked as if it is well decided. The way she arched herself, the way she moved herself, the way she moved her hands, every step she took, everything was like a professional dancer. She was already looking stunning and on top of that her sleek moves made her look even more beautiful. Jalal came to the present world when the music changed. He looked around but Jodha was nowhere to be seen.

He looked towards the back stage and found her fulfilling her thirst. As soon as she was satisfied she came towards him. She reached to him and smiled. Jalal to smiled as a response. "So, how are you finding this celebration?" Jodha asked Jalal. In the meantime Moti also reached. Jodha told her to join the group.then she again turned towards Jalal and again asked him the same. "It's nice. And I must say you are really a very good dancer. this dress is increasing your beauty." Jodha heavily blushed at this comment of his which didn't go unnoticed by the handsome hunk standing in front of her." R u blushing?" Said he pointing towards her cheeks." You look cute while you blush." Jodha again blushed. To avoid futrther questions, she asked Jalal whether he would join them or not. To which Jalal replied" everyone would run away if I start dancing. Jodha was laughing at this statement of his.
Soon it was time for them to go back to house. Jodha had really enjoyed her visit to the ground. Even jalal came to know a lot about jodha in these days. Her new found HUNARS by him were a long lists. Soon they reached home. Jodha and Jalal both were totally exhausted. Jodha changed to the night wear and threw herself on the bed drifting into a deep slumber thinking about the sweet complements she got. Even jalal slept thinking about his new friend cum a girl full of talents. In jalal's words 'HUNAR KI KHAN'..
Precap: Jodha's birthday
Sorry for the mistakes. Hope you enjoyed the chapter... Please hit likes and comments..

Edited by 155pari - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Outstanding romantic chapter continue soon eagerly waiting for nest chapter pm me make it fast don't be late thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
me second yipee😃
jo blushing😳

update soon,thanks for pm
Edited by zuytre - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
happy independence day... to u too...
superb chapter dear...
joja r look awesome...
I like d precap to... update soon nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Outstanding romantic chapter continue soon eagerly waiting for nest chapter pm me make it fast don't be late thanks for pm

Thankyou...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice Update pari..
Awe loved their attires.. And I imagined parijat in them.
Jalal was again dumbfound of her beauty and hunars..dancing.
He complimented her for her Dress and dance and she Blush blush..
Amazing dear.. I enjoyed reading the chappy.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
joja in indian avtaar
jodha dancing and jalal watching her
continue soon
thnkx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
happy independence day to all my frnds
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb chapter dr..eagerly waiting for the next chappy..update soon..tks for the pm dr..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice chapter buddy plz update soon

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