akdha os~ Her crazy boy ~last part updated pg31(13/10/2015) - Page 29

Originally posted by: futus

very nice, emotional n touching ending dii.it was really fabulous. ...dii I have a request that can u plzz give epilogue of this story also plzzz...if u get time...plzzz...I really like ur writings ...they r all lovely n beautiful. ...btn wanted to ask why do u call urself as one of broken heart. .. 😆 😆

thank u soo much dr🤗mm i will consider about it dr..okay..😳hehe thank u again priya🤗Oo because JA was end na so im a broken heart😭

Originally posted by: futus

diii I also have a complain why didn't u pm me this time??? 😔 😔

Oo soo sorry swertheart..i couldn't send the pm at that time but sahil sent pms on behalf of me

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Finally u update ur another one love poison last part it is very interesting and very nice update ur other stories nest chapter soon make it fast pm me thanks for pm

thank u soo much dr🤗Yeah sure buddy

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Forget to tell u update the epilogue of this story soon make it fast please don't be late pm me make it fast

ok i will consider about it

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

superb update dear. ...
ooo god jalal had to face so much for his father. ...
its was to emotional reading this part ...
nw everything is fine. ...
that's so good... nd thanks for d pm...

thank u soo much dr🤗Yeah now everything is fine 😳

Awesome chappy dear...its so emotional..u make me cry...anyways anth bala tho sab bala..
Nd thanx 4 pm sahil

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

as always awesome sweetyy dii...

now this is called happy as well as beautiful ending...

bt it ws such an emotional storryy dii...

dii i think u r in love with emotional stories thts why only most of ur stories r suprr emotional...bt i love thm...

n love evn more...🤗

no thnk u fr the pm...no one sent me😭...

aww thank you soo my little devil🤗😆haha😆im glad tht u loved them😊hehe love u swertheart❤️haha then welcomes too😆i think u r not in sahil's buddy list..thats why you didn't get pm😛

Originally posted by: erning_w

You make me cry Savi..

Part before his surgery.. you describe the situation is very well.. really heart touching. It's like there is me..

And the good one is when Jo's mom accepted her love to Jalal. It's the best bless for both.

And finally the surgery is succes. Happy for JoJa

It's really Superb update and too emotional

Thank's for make this beautiful story Savi ^_^

And... Plz update your other story too dear... ;)

And for Sahil thank's a lot for the pm :)

oh I'm soo sorry for making u cry dr😔oh realy a big hug for this lovely comment dr🤗thank you soo much..your every single word is mean me alot..😳 it was my pleasure dr..yeah sure..I'll update thm too😊

Originally posted by: Abi23

Lovely ending for a lovely story
Thank u for this beautiful story

thank u soo much dr🤗it was my pleasure😳

Originally posted by: melovesja

Very well written os superbly pen down their emotion. jalal's pain from childhood and when jo read his diary she feel his pain his feelings and jo's feelings for her crazy boy and top of that in the last part their feeling , eye talk and whisper jo pour her love and jalal wants to touch her and jo's faith in god and ja's promise and maina's sudden que. abt jo's rejection of proposal and lovingly give her approval for this rista all in all 👏

thank u soo much for this lovely dovely comment dr🤗your every word is mean me a lot dr. thanks again..