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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#381

super hot romance update payal...
it was sooo nice to read it...
🤗

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Am I too bad at writing os shruti that whenever I write a os someone ask me to write more of it?😆
Sorry I can't continue this one now as I have many ongoing stories😳

Hehe 😆

Okay then😡😆

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Am I too bad at writing os shruti that whenever I write a os someone ask me to write more of it?😆
Sorry I can't continue this one now as I have many ongoing stories😳

He he😆

Okay then😡😆

U r not bad at One shots😲Take ur words back😡

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#384

Payal my jaan🤗🤗🤗
Another hot and sensuous os dear ☺️☺️
Jalal and his passion for his lady love sent shivers down my spine .
He broke up his 4yrs relationship for jo hayeee
Pls payal pls tell me the girl he dumped was rukkaiya😆
Poor girl was so afraid of her boss that she always suppressed her feelings for him and our hot blooded angry young man was depressed becoz of her cold behaviour towards him.
Finally they broke all their barriers and became one😳😳
And the song was cherry on the cake yaar totally apt for the situation:-) :-)
He felt guilty for taking her virginity without her consent but the desperate soul could not control his desire for longer as he is a free bird now😳
Loved the ending where jalal promise to be with Jo forever and will unconditionally love her till eternity 😃😃
Just amazing payal :-) :-)
Really really loved it😃
Thanks for the pm

Edited by avika444 - 10 years ago