Akdha FF- |Married To A Stranger...| Chapter 2- Page 16. (8.1.16) - Page 9

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Anu baby ... my choti bandariyan 🤗 ... lovely isstoryy my dear ... i want to know aage aage kya hota hai but filhaal its res 🤣

Originally posted by: ...Arushi...

@ green

Originally posted by: harini1482002

Congo butter

Thanks ya!🤗

But wait did u say me e u started a new one ?

I guess I pmed you, I pmed everyone..😆

N yeah.. sry fa being late but no cknw now

Okaay😆

Kinda pissed off with schl ka kaam

School is... (I am trying to quit swearing and become the goody good again, so yea, I am not saying the word😆)

Anyway I read it n loved it

Thanks yaa!❤️

Love ya more thn the concept even tough I love it butter

Love ya too! This story is gonna be a fun ride!😉

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

Oh my freaking god!!!😲😲 Its like been ages since we talked!!!!😲😲

Varsha diii!🤗 Choti Bandariyan missed you sooo much, like more than to the moon and back!!

I still can't believe you commented on my story, I mean yay!!

God, I love you so damn much!❤️ I mean this comment will really keep me going!😃 I am so happy you liked it, and I can assure you, Jalal will be the suave type here! (me-) and Jodha, well, she's gonna be amazing!!!⭐️ Its totally different from my other stories, like in every way, and as Aisha had asked me to, I have to make it the best of me.. so yea, I feel honored to have you comment!😳

Even your res is perfectly alright as long as you are there to support me, leader of Banjaaras!😆

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Awwweee meri bandariyan ... me too miss u a lottt ...!!! n yes its been ages since we chatted n had fun ... n ofcourse my choti writes so well ... i am so proud of you darling ... n dont make us wait centuries for an update 😆 ...

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

Okay! So another great story by a wonderful writer. When you told me that you want to start a new story, I was so excited that I didn't care what it will be about. I just knew that like every-time, you won't disappoint your readers. 🤗

Okay, so let's be honest.😵 It's sometimes hard for me to comment on your stories.😆 The reason is simple that your life as a writer has been blessed with a kind of professionalism. I mean you are such an incredible writer, that it is hard to find words that will match your 'great' writing. 🤔

But it's true that before an 'awesome' writer, you are an incredible friend to me.🤗 Thanks for your kindness, your patience, and the many hours you have spent chatting with me.😉 And of-course, your wisdom, humour and your good-hearted nature. ❤️

So I think it's enough about you.😆 Now, we should come to the master piece - 'Married To A stranger'. The title itself is so interesting, that you can't resist yourself from reading the story. 😎

So, coming to the very first chapter of your 'fourth' story. 😆*Really!!*

First of all, I want to thank Lew, cause of him Jalal left London.😆 And of-course his girlfriend - Rebecca Ross. (great name)😆

"It was just a spark between you two." Woah! Guy. What a line, I mean I read the chapter thrice for this particular line. I don't know but it attracted me.😆

And wait. I loved the way you described Rebecca. Blonde hair, deep brown eyes, perfect but evil. I mean that's something interesting. 😆

And now, the female lead of the story. Okay! So disturbing someone's sleep is something really bad. No?😆 But it's okay if after that you will get a pizza! But not of dominos. I like Pizza hut.😆 .

And the reason behind this celebration is something really erm, weird? I mean break-up. This story is really different. I mean just look at this Jodha.😆 And she taught me something new, i.e, 'International Drinking Day' I mean great.👏😆 I don't know but the guy seemed really sweet and innocent to me. Making fun of him, isn't something good, right?😆

"I ended up laughing on his face" I agree with Erica, that was so rude. Heartless girl!😆

And I love her sarcastic replies. I mean that is really fun to read. 😆 Gosh, specially this one - "But I find it insulting if such idiots like Fred hold them, and worse, give them to me!"🤣

So it's nice that both girls like Ed's song, despite the fact that I don't like him. But I just can't disagree that 'thinking out loud' was like something Wow! ❤️

But Jodha is correct, no one can beat 1D. They are incredible ❤️ But wait..wait!! Finally Fredrick Carter is here. But before this, his name is gross. Like truly.😆 Maybe that's why Jodha broke up with him. 😆 But the nerdy guy was on the verge of tears. I mean that's so...rude? 😆

And of-course, she did a great job by not singing 'Nobody Compares'.😆 And let's take a moment to appreciate Jodha's blue eyes. ❤️😆 You know blue-est of all.😆

"Do the entire race of humanity a god damned favour and go and drown in some lake or whatever..!" - Woah!😲 Girl calm down. But I somewhat liked her. Maybe her anger is something that is you know kinda...?? 😆

God! What happened to me, I am liking 'harsh' girls?!?😲 But Fred really tried to kiss her?😲 Wow! That's something filmyBut wait! Do nerds really do the dating and kissing stuff?😆

"it was a fact that she didn't think twice about blackmailing anyone" Again! One more thing to admire how cool your jodha is. Wait...wait! What's wrong with his stutters? I mean why Jodha's so irritated by his stuttering?😆 "What's it about her? Why does she never say what she feels?" What's this supposed to mean?😲 I mean Erica is confusing me.😆

And now my favourite person - Edward! ❤️ But wait. Jalal ka bhai Edward?😲 Matlab had hai!😆

"he aimed for a hi-five with Jalal, who apparently took no notice." I told you naa, I loved this line. 🤣 I don't know what to say about Jalal. You should reveal more about him, I mean Edward's a hit for sure. I mean if you ever thought to introduce his girl-friend in this story, then remember her name should be Aisha. 😆

"Yeah, I guess so. Wooho!" Gosh! This was funny😆

"Jodha turned around, walking backwards. She loved to do that!" Even I love doing that. You copied me?😲😆

Hey! I love Erica too. I mean the stutter one of the group😆 Wait! Whose Christie Waters now? Gawd! There are so many characters.😆

"Fred was all, You're so cool, Jo. Wish I could be like you.." Gawd! That was again so rudee!😆 Second break-up since the semester started.😲 Woah! Way to go girl.😆 Oh sorry technically, it's three. You are so technical Anushka!😆

Okay so the chapter ends, with a mysterious Augustus! Who the hell he is?😆

But, really the chapter was fun to read. Once again you proved that no one can beat you.😎

But if I am best then you are best-est. I mean you are great. I am just waiting for them to meet. And of-course the day when he comes to see her.😆 That will be so fun. I am just thinking about their first meeting. 😆 Gosh! And this is your fourth story! 😲 How's the feeling, afraid? But don't worry! Remember you told me that everything will be fine. I am saying you the same. 😆 But wait! In the next update, I want to know about Jalal. His nature, interests..etc.etc.etc.😆

I don't know why but I am very much excited about this story, maybe more than 'the deal'. I don't know why I am so excited but like you know, you have to make this 'the best'.

And yes! update regularly. And by that I mean all your four stories. Wow! That's incredible, four stories ❤️ It's so fascinating.😆

I am expecting a lot from this story. And I know you won't disappoint me.🤗 You are an extremely talented girl, and of-course I am fortunate to know such a wonderful person. (Cheeky?😆) But as I have told you before, you are first and foremost a friend to me. ❤️ You are truly a blessing in my life. 🤗 Thank you for starting this awesome story.

But wait! You should appreciate my effort to comment here first. 😎I mean I am really one lucky girl, who got the privilege to comment first in Anushka's story.😆

God, and adding to this. I unressed this soon!😲 That's shocking but it's a proud moment for me.😆

Erm! I don't know if this is my biggest comment or not. But I enjoyed writing this comment.😆 Maybe because I took 2 hours.😆

Okay! So I am now going to update 'The Deal'. And yes! Bye! 😆

Take care, eat well, sleep well, and write a hazza OS soon.😆