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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Soon😃 In a very short time my dear😃

& when is that short time going to end...😉

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kat1rine

@kat1rine

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

awesome super duper update... after reading this chapi am scared of jalal nd jodha both... jalal not realising his love or jodha is not ready to know jalal inocence... eager to read more update soon nd do pm

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Hey Bhavi Di ...🤗

Finally most awaited update is here.

missed ur update Di.

How are u Di? Get well soon.

What an amazing update it is .. big round applause👏 I loved it❤️

Poor Jo and jalal.. Their ego and self respect is so big that they failed to reciprocate their feelings for each other.. And tried hard to crush each others ego.😡

I felt really bad when she returned his flute..😔

And in turn he made her cry whole night.. 😡

And what the hell he did he kissed that Ruqi to make her jealous and hugged her tightly.. Ahh jalal I hate u for this

Btw even he felt bad for doing that to her just to satiate his bruised ego he did this.🥺

In his anger also he didn't fail to look for her safety😳 confused soul😆

Jo cleared the misunderstanding of chotiammi to the kid and made him realise that she was mere a maid.. And even after knowing that she was a maid he hugged her.. Its so touching scene Di.

Pls Di clear this misunderstanding of Jo for Jalal.. And drop the mission and make him realise his feelings for her and reveal the truth of Radha as a Rajkuvari.

Thanks a lot Di for this wonderfull update..🤗 Eager to read next part. Update soon.

Edited by geeta.M - 10 years ago

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rs_fun2

@rs_fun2

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Hi Bhavini... Part 1 was super as usual... Loved the way you portray the emotions of JaJo... And the story is getting more and more interesting...
Hope u get well real soon
Take care

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Amazing update di...
Get well soon di...
poor jodha nd jalal they love each other so badly but for them there ego is at a very high position... really felt bad on d return of there gifts to each other...
upon that ruku is doing her best to bring down jodha...
but jalal even care for her in his anger to I like that...
poor little rahim got to knw about jodha as a maid but also his love for her did nt change...
thank nd love u for this wonderful update di...
waiting for next part di...
thank u for pm...
before that di get will soon... take care. ... love u...

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lovejodhaakbar

@lovejodhaakbar

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Iam speechless... Too much emotion from jalal and jodha..even the whole characters ..i am waiting hows they gonna achieve their goal...thanks dear..

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harsh

@sirat.kaur

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

mindblowing ch
ehen will ja realise his love for jo??? so emotions in ch from both...
update asap
eagerly waiting for next part...
don't be late dear...n thanks for pm.plz update yr other stories also.

Edited by sirat15 - 10 years ago

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Finally you update di...

It's Superb update. Eagerly waiting for next part.

Take care di, and should not be imposed if you have not completely healed.

And i'm never bored reading your story again and again.. It's entertaining 😊

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#140

di!!🤗
superb update!
loved it :)
jalal radha nok jhok k baad jalal radha fight!!!
I felt sad for radha seeing her crying and jalal is trying to make her jealous by kissing ruqs...
I loved how he's concerned for her and took away ruqs for the three hours during which radha was to work for her :)
I loved jalal's wild dream!!
I loved everything in this chapter!!!😃
update part 2 soon! I'm waiting to read it :)
nd thanks for the pm di :)
love u di!❤️
p.s. How are you now?😊