Akdha shots-The lover Part 6 updated on page 104 (22/02/2015) - Page 67

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Nice update Payal😳

Surya's anger is justified,who would keep calm when their would be wife is taken away just before marriage??But he hit Jallu

Hope Jo explains him abt their love.

Thanx for the pm.

Take care dear😊

Originally posted by: harshu27

superb update...d wait ws worth it... 😉 d chappy ws quiet sensual... 😳 agr tum bath ke bhi scenes describe karti toh sab log koi aur hi land me rehte dreamy land u see 😉 wapis lana mushkil hota 😆 aww surya hit jalal want 2 knw hw d truth is reveald...tke care gt well soon dn giv an awsum update... 😉

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Awesome Update morning romance wah so hot...loved it...ja is so caring went to prepare breakfast... ja filled jos forehead... is surya so strong to trace jj so soon... poor ja got punch...continue soon nd do pm

Originally posted by: ...Ishika...

Unres!😳

O my god payal Dii what a chappy just muaaahh..😳

Their morning romance was so sensual and hot☺️

Adamant Jo doesn't want to wake up at all and our jallu waking up his wife with his own manner😆

You skipped bathroom scene Dii but I can imagine if u haven't than what will b reader's state😆

I really love that part when jalal filled her parting with vermilion😳 and than he says - "now you r looking beautiful" possessive hubby haan 😆

And than he went himself to prepare breakfast for them aww so lovely😳

But but but got punched by surya

He traced em' so soon not fare..

I hope he will understand their pure love and will not come in b/w them *fingers crossed*

And and payal di u know I remember everything u said me na first u will updt lover and than temptations! So get ready for posting one more hot os😉

And haan most important thing first you get well and than update ohkk take care Di!🤗

Love you infinite ❤️

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

superb update
loved their morning romance
u did right thing to skip bathroom scene
surya jalal face off
update soon
thnkx 4 pm

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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Originally posted by: Geetbaala

Hey hey Payu..🤗 While reading my face was like this☺️

Geet🤗 Really?😆

Its midblowing👏 u had beautifully penned their hot and sensual morning romance. Loved it.

Thanks a lot dearie😃

Jalal naughty in bed and Jo too.

Yes😉

Haww u didn't add bath tub scenes..😲 As u mentioned earlier..u were not going to make it steamy 😉😆

toh chalega..but next time want steamy one..

ok dear😆

How dare Surya punch My Jalal on his nose..aww poor my Jalal's nose was bleeding..😵 jalal should give him left right tightly.. Poor Surya even it's not his mistake.. Anyone can react in same way when his bride runway right under his nose with another man..😆

Right.. 😆

How he will handle him now?

What happens when her parents come to know about Jo's whereabouts..I am little scared about it.

full too enjoyed reading dear.

Thanks for this lovely update..baaki ka ye ke umhaa ❤️❤️⭐️

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Glad u enjoyed this chapter dear.. thankyou so much🤗

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

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Originally posted by: zuytre

Superb update

Waiting for jalal's reaction

Thanks for d pm

Originally posted by: GurKaur

Wow!!!! Amazing chapter...
Every part is very nicely written.
Enjoyed it a lot. Get well soon!!!
Take care...