Akdha shots-The lover Part 6 updated on page 104 (22/02/2015)

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: avika444

Love u too payal 🤗
And don't worry about commenting on my thread
U just take of ur health dear 😊

😃

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Hey Geet and shruti..
I was writing next part but I am not well.. Have cold and fever so couldn't complete..
I am almost done with it.. Will update till 5.

Take care of ur health first..if it is ready than update otherwise will wait.😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: Geetbaala
Hey Payu..u weren't well baby..?
So sorry I wasn't knowing abut it..
How is ur health now?

plz don't say sorry Geet..😳

i am feeling better now😊

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...Ishika...

@...Ishika...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

updating in 5 minutes dear😛
yes I am feeling better now ishika😊
Me too wanted to get well soon😭
this stupid cold and fever irritate me like hell 😭

Yippeee bale bale

Do update fast Dii

Heheh I can understand your problem😆

But do take care of yourself dii

And I'll again say get well soon 😉

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: Geetbaala
Hello su🤗

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: ...Ishika...

Yippeee bale bale
Do update fast Dii
Heheh I can understand your problem😆
But do take care of yourself dii
And I'll again say get well soon 😉

😆

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#597

res😳

Unress 😉

Marvelous update Payal.. Early morning romance was simply sensuous That was such a romantic tease ☺️ U nailed it dear. U did the right thing by.not including the bath tub scene .. it would have side track the story line.I was expecting Jodha's family's reaction in this chapter.. expected danger came .. nd punched on Jalal's nose.. huh can understand Surya's reaction .. Jalal snatched Jo from right under Surya's nose😆 I am angry with Jallu Y was he so recklessly opened door for that museebath he would have been more careful😡 Now, I am really scared for Jodha's safety. What will Jalal do now. Have faith in u payal hoping for positive end of this fiasco

Mere dil me aaj kya hai tu kahe to mei bataadu TERE MAANG PHIR SAJAA DUN😆😃Mujhe SINDOOR SCENE padthe waqth yeh gaana yaad aaya 😳 Loved it 👏👏👏

U have to give the BT Scene i donno how u will manage but U have to do it 😡 else will stalk U😉

Waiting for the next .. U take good care nd thx for pm😃

Edited by shruthikarthik - 10 years ago

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#598

Main bhi ress pls
Will unress soon:-) :-)
Unress
payal🤗🤗
Superb mindblowing awesome blossom update dear
Just loved it sweetheart .
I loved this naughthy avatar of Jo who was testing his husbands patience 😆 .
Lazy bones was so adamant to open her eyes while her darling husband was trying hard to wake her up in his own teasing ways 😳 .
I liked that part where Jo asks jalal about her appearance and he simply says no hurting her to the core but late he takes vermillion and fills her parting . 😳
This is the best scene payal .muaah .u skipped the BT scene :-( :-( no problem hotness was already overloaded :-) :-) and we loved that:-) :-)
He wants to prepare breakfast for his lovely wife aww such a sweet husband yaar 😊
Omg omg finally the day came ,Surya traced them out
He reached their house and punched hardly on jalal's nose
His anger is justified yaar but punch right on his face 😭 .
Now what will happen ? Hope he understand their love 😕
Thank god he traced after their SR 😉 😆
Continue soon payal
Thanks for pm
Love u❤️

Edited by avika444 - 10 years ago

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#599

Nice chapter eagerly waiting for nest chapter for reaction of akdha for surya punch try to update fast pm me thanks for pm take care of ur health buddy get well soon