JJ FF ~ Frozen-Lemme fall in love with you ~ chapter 1 @ pg9 22.05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: avika444
Rio pls make sure u will continue the stories u mentioned .
and coming to prologue its very inyeresting dear.
pls pls pls continue this one pakka and try to update regular

yep I will ;) love ya avika di! Wo nhn!hav xms sn nt regular!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: avika444
thanks for pm
continue soon

hehe! U r wc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: avika444
and forgot to say
love u so much dear

🤗 love ya!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: harini1482002
Zayn '- u yaar!!
Thks fa the dedication
N I'm in love with this title too
It reminds me of Frozen it's one of my fav
Please. ..try to continue this Love ...warna ...i will kill u😆
But really I thought it ...tht u change stories like dress
Loved the prologue ...love ya...
N ys remember everyone know that I'm crazy thn u r
Frozen heart? Jo n frozen heart?
Is it a historical one yaa modern?
U didn't say anything

perrie darlin' 🤗 OMG Will u kill ur own fianc?? Frozen this word is also frm a 1D song the story of my love n the animation! Me 2 crazy! Crazy boy ki crazy girl 🤣 this is a secret!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Chapter 1
"Aaah!" a shrill cry echoed in the whole ROSE mantion! The elderly lady ran towards her daughter's room riding on the stairs followed by her elder daughter Jim who was reading a magazine and her husband who just returned from jogging! The next moment they saw that her younger daughter's friend,David was shievering on the floor and her daughter was in the corner of her room still shouting! "What happened Jodz??Why is David shievering?" Jim asked trying to touch Jodha who was still afraid n their parents called the ambulance! "Don't touch me..Jim don't! I just touched him and don't know how it affected!noo..don't touch me.." Jodha screamed like a maniac!

FLASHBACK-

"And then I wanna travel from China to my home.." said the young girl chirpily before landing beside David on the bed who was busy staring at her! "Woah!You've big plan!SO can I too join you??"David said while moving closer to Jodha! "Yep you can!I would love too!"Jodz replied while staring at David's lip which was now coming towards her slowly! Jodha closed her eyes to feel her first kiss with the guy whom she loves!She kept her hands on his face but suddenly David started to shiver and blood came from his nose! Jodha screamed loudly as she saw that her touch made David like that,he was screaming! The next moment her parents entered the room and they too got shocked!...
Flashback ends

Jodha's dad,Layer put the phone on it's place which was from the hospital-"David has gone to coma!" Jodz cried out loudly-" I didn't do it intentionally!I just touched him...!" Her parents and Jim looked at her with teary eyes-" She's become!We can't now help it! We have to let her go!!" Jodz panicked listening this when her family cried out! "No mom dad Jim! I swear I didn't do it! PLEASE don't do this!" Jodha pleaded! "What have I become??WHAT??" "YOU'VE BECOME A MUTANT JODHA! Now we can't help anymore!" "NOOO!!" Jodha landed on the floor when her family sobbed-"WE'RE SORRY JODHA!!" Jodha ran out from her house in her 3 quarters jeans n a long blue t-shirt with a hoddie,crying badly! For her family's wellfare!! Far away from her family!!!

Edited by ...rio... - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

hey guys surely u have heard of MUTANTS who have special powers! Some r born with those n others have em laters! Itz totally fictional!! Have u seen or read X MEN series?! I just got inspiration from that!! I really love X men! N therez no stories abt mutants so thot to start one! What powers jodz have will reveal later! N Jalal is coming in nxt chap!! I thot to update b4 my xms!! So here it goes! Please leave ur views n like! I am xcitd abt the story! I have diff plans! It will be diff than movie!so pls.. Lemme knw abt ur opinions! 🤗 LOVE YA ALL