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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Beautiful and cute love story Preet

Awesome upate👏

I am touched with their innocence.❤️

Jalal MU jodha.. And Jodha was hurt and mad on him..and she was right at her place.😳

It happens most of the time..and happened with me as well.

Most of the times the Innocent get punished and the one who did mistake survives from the wrath of their teacher..my student came and asked me and was guilty for punishing an innocent in front of whole class.🤔

Loved the way pacified his innocent personal heater by singing song..and apt song for that situation.😃

And her gift is mind blowing..it reminds him her presence all the time.❤️

And his conversation with varun is funny..😆

Now how they are to live their separation.

Its hard to see them separated.😭

Continue soon dear.

Update next chappy ASAP.

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#422

awesum update preet.
really so sweet n simple.
ja guilty for scolding geet without any fault nd jo also angry on him .
u really described both their pov amazingly .
love it.
ja eagerly waiting for her call nd when felt some peace when he got her call.
nd the past part was his way to mannofying her.
both r in pain thinking of their separtion.
jo gift the last card ws so awesum .truely showed her love feeling for him.
nd ja is also eager to gift her the ring as his memory.
really enjoyed reading it.

update soon...

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#423

nice chapter update the nest chapter soon pm me thanks for pm

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Preet its such a sweet update dear
Poor Jo was hurt as jalal misunderstood her and scolded her without any fault of her
But really liked the way jalal pacified her by singing song
Hayee he can sing too wow how romantic
Loved jodha's last gift too
The card with kissess and I love u
Update next part asap
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

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Preet

@rishbala3018

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Thank you so much everyone for ur lovely comments, I will reply to you all very soon.
Love
Preet.

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#426

di the update is too cute
m in love with your ff
their relation is becoming stronger and stronger day by day...
Thanks for the pm
update soon di

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#427

lovely chapy dear... it ws 2 gd...jodha ws really angry and upset wid jalal her anger ws justified cz it wsnt her fault and widout knwing d truth jalal shouted at her... bt li luvd d card whch he ws told 2 opn up wen he is alone... 😉 u hav penned dwn der emotions v beautifully... 😳 m luving it der bonding is bcuming stronger...its interesting 2 knw hw d stry unfolds...update soon...thnx fr d pm... 😳

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KanJmaskis

@KanJmaskis

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#428

Osm chappy di last card idea v beautiful ...jo kissed all over the card ...loving😛😛 ...enjoyed fully their love and jo 's maddness and the most loving part ja sang a song fr her aww soo cute jallu 😳😳...bt this damn 😡😡 separation pain is killing both of them inside 😭 😭...there separation days will be very tough with their cravings 😭😭...Make some idea to connect them much more possible 😃😃 Update soon di

Edited by KanJmaskis - 10 years ago