Akdha FF:when i first saw you chapter5 updated on page 13 (18/3/2016)

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Monika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

This ones for chapter 1

Wow i loved the description of the college

It makes me wonder what will be the scene of my college

Well i guess something is fishy about the guy karan

Umm i found jalal quite mysogynastic

Well its my Spidey sense working overtime😆

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Monika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#702

Chapter 2

Well again an amazing chapter

I like the way you decribe each and every look on all the characters face, it makes the readers like me imagine the scene and comprehend the story more profoundly

Now change in my opinion jalal is not a misogynastic person...

You have written the story philosophically(i mean the other meaning i.e wisely )

And finally they met soon not like other stories

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Monika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Chapter 3

Again wonderful chapter

I found the guy surya quite creepy

And i like one more thing about this story is that in majority of the stories they make jodha extremely poor and i dont know why i hate that

And i am looking forward for seeing love blooming between the two

Your story is sounding genuine that is why i am liking it

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: moni_06
This ones for chapter 1
Wow i loved the description of the college
It makes me wonder what will be the scene of my college
Well i guess something is fishy about the guy karan
Umm i found jalal quite mysogynastic
Well its my Spidey sense working overtime😆

Thanks for commenting moni.. 😃Glad u liked the description of college.. It took me while to imagine my college days and write that part😛

mysogynastic???😆

He's not re.. you will get to know how"ladkibaaz"he is, in coming chapters..😉😆

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Monika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#705

Chapter 4

Ok so we have jalal dying for a missed call

Though how much he lie he likes jo

I found them nicampoo dancing on a girls missed call

Well i found the chapter a bit short but anyways it is nice

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: moni_06
Chapter 2
Well again an amazing chapter
I like the way you decribe each and every look on all the characters face, it makes the readers like me imagine the scene and comprehend the story more profoundly
Now change in my opinion jalal is not a misogynastic person...
You have written the story philosophically(i mean the other meaning i.e wisely )
And finally they met soon not like other stories

Thankyou so so much dear🤗

Glad u are liking the story..😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: moni_06
Chapter 3
Again wonderful chapter
I found the guy surya quite creepy
And i like one more thing about this story is that in majority of the stories they make jodha extremely poor and i dont know why i hate that
And i am looking forward for seeing love blooming between the two
Your story is sounding genuine that is why i am liking it

Creepy...😳

Me too like this jo dear and not that 'bechari and sanskari'..jo😛

Well in all of my stories,jo is not that goody goody 😆

Thanks a lot dear😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#708

Originally posted by: moni_06
Chapter 4
Ok so we have jalal dying for a missed call
Though how much he lie he likes jo
I found them nicampoo dancing on a girls missed call
Well i found the chapter a bit short but anyways it is nice

That's actually most of the boys do these days.. 😆

you didn't like that scene??😲

Thanks for commenting dear😊

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Monika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#709

Chapter5

We have jo getting annoyed because of jalal

Now i agree i was Seriously veryy wrong he is not at all misogynastic

Haha well all the avoiding parts and everything was ecstatic

I m loving this ff payal

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Monika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

That's actually most of the boys do these days.. 😆
you didn't like that scene??😲

Thanks for commenting dear😊

Who said i did not like the chapter

U know if one of our teachers call us a nicampoo we find i u know (swaggy) so same thing i called the trio nicampoo this means a swaggy chappy😆 i dont know if u r getting it right