Akdha FF:when i first saw you chapter5 updated on page 13 (18/3/2016) - Page 52

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Just read you ff...wonderful!!!👏👏👏

Not only it is heading towards a beautiful love story, it is also a live picture of teenager students just became adults,who have just passed out scl and going to clg. Everyone of this age can find him/herself inside all the characters while reading...👍🏼

I like Jodha as a spoilt brat. Somehow it had been emblemed in my head that Jodha will have to be the perfect,the best and the most good one in all the stories. Your story broke that idea and I am liking it very much...😳

Continue soon...⭐️

Originally posted by: 155pari

adorable chapter but a short one...

finally jo called!

update soon...😊

thanx for the pm...😃

Originally posted by: swetiii

awsum

wow
joja are frnds

ja had some gf
& broke up.
& now playing with jo's emotions


no...
plz give jalal's pov also

update asap

Originally posted by: avika444

Res payal

Will unress soon pakka:-) :-)

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

Gud one..
FInally after a lot of struggle jo finally give hr no. To jalal..
N trio who were deseparately of her call cant stop themselves doing a small bhangra after getting her call 😆
Bt what the hell Ja said about her..that he is not serious about her ..is he going play with her feelings...

Originally posted by: sho123

really a superb chappi payal
love the way u describe jos confusion regarding whether to miss call ja or not
to give her number to him or not
then jas excitement after finally receiving jos miss call
continue soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: lovespari

payal...🤗

Nidhi 🤗
super fantastic update dear..

Thankyou dear😊
ja was soo much excited n eager n we r also aftr ur thrd update😆 u md us wait soo long haan..very bad😭 but tht call turn out to be ja long lost friend Amit😆 oh god payal reading ja reaction aftr every cmmnt of abdul n maan n reading maan reaction aftr every glare frm ja was very hard to stop my laugh🤣 tht was amazing payal..

Thanks a lot nidhi.. glad u liked that pat dear😆
n othr side jo was soo confused to wht to do gv him call or nt...😆
aahh..aftr long restlessness n too much wait finally jo gv call..oops sorry missed call😆
now ja hd jo no. N fr tht thy celebrate😕😆 u actually alive a picture payal this is wht actually now a days boy bhv lik thy gt an Oscar 🤣

he he right!!😆
ohh...so tht cmmnt on ja Ex n i thought😆 wht really fr ja jo is TIMPASS i nvr thought tht..i thought he like her i will nt say love but i thought he like her...hmm..let see hw r u going to unfold this story..whts in future...

>>> You will get to know in coming chapters why jalal said so😉
oh now frm jo pov...nice interesting payal😊

yup😛
waiting fr nxt update..😃
update soon n thank u fr pm

Originally posted by: lovespari

😆 my mind..i guess who again gt confuse due to ur confusing tzr payal😉🤣
but aftr reading chap all clear now😃😆

Originally posted by: Bthakur

Superb update.

Update soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome chptr dear
cont soon

thnks for pm