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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict



Di 🤣
My comments are very spontaneous.. 🤣 unlike proper ones. :( 😆

Yeah OMG update 😆

O : Ordeal of creepy Ramesh was a delight to watch

M : Mesmerising was the care for each other by Jo n Ja

G : Galat was on the part of Jahnu Di.. to have ended update at absolutely wrong place.

In your style 😉 🤣 Though I poorly failed.



Wah wah ! Kya baat hai.
At least influenced one person to write acrostically. 😆
Too good.[:D/]
Btw comments r meant to be spontaneous re. Keep them coming 🤗 [:D/]
Edited by Deepasub - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict



Di 🤣
My comments are very spontaneous.. 🤣 unlike proper ones. :( 😆

Yeah OMG update 😆

O : Ordeal of creepy Ramesh was a delight to watch

M : Mesmerising was the care for each other by Jo n Ja

G : Galat was on the part of Jahnu Di.. to have ended update at absolutely wrong place.

In your style 😉 🤣 Though I poorly failed.


It was a good attempt Nancy for a beginner!keep up the good work! We need more entertainment when Jahnu goes on"vanavasam "
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepasub



Wah wah ! Kya baat hai.
At least influenced one person to write acrostically. 😆
Too good.[:D/]
Btw comments r meant to be spontaneous re. Keep them coming 🤗 [:D/]



Thank You Thank You 🤣 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks Rose 😆 yup.. exactly! Need more of all such fun..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jahnu needs to create the new thread soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago

It's a splendid update Jahnu ...👏enjoyed it to the core reading it again and again😉 I am not that expressive to express😕 my feelings.
No words is left to say ...as my friends had already given lengthy comments which conveyed all my words..😃

Enjoyed a lot and indeed satisfied with the punishment gave by Jalal to that moron Ramesh.. and a fair justice to his beloved in his own 'DON' style.

jalal got a flash of jo in front of him when he heard the word wife

padhke Dil garden garden ho gaya..⭐️❤️

aww loved the way she showed her possession by setting his stuff and jalal recived her pamper

Jo and her blather theories.. loved it...


"This comparison is killing me. I can't be at peace till I surely know what Jalal has for Aaliya. Aah... who asked him to hug her?? He can console a weeping woman even without embracing!! Gosh he hugged me with same hands. Had I guessed it, I'd have taken turmeric water with me to thoroughly cleanse his hands before touching me!! How about taking him straight to Banaras and drench in Gangajal?? I too will dip thus liberating my body from Ramesh's ugly touch and HIS' from Aaliya's touch,"

baapre her jealousy 😆

he pulled her.. with their breaths hardly inches apart.. hayye mardala..☺️ one day he is gonna surely kill me by such panick attack to her😆

I... love..." his lips teasingly murmured imposing her breathe to accelerate and pupils to widen, "...the fire in your eyes when you are outrageously piqued Jodha. With a slashing glare and stiff nose, were you ever told how demonic you look like?" His twisted gibe bedewed the seeping tension in the nerved lady but his poking smirk made her dart a virulent glim. Her wrist in his grip mightily moved to set itself free, but to her dismay, it only tightened more. "Now that your angel is back, of course I do look devilish,"

Jalal is very smart..he irked her more and she smartly retorted back😊

jalal's praises for aliya increased the height of jealousy in jo😆

she donated rasmalis out her jealousy and anger..🤣 and it hurted him and he realised about this gesture of her.he is quick in realising the things.😆

Dr. shobha Naidu.. wow jahnu u are very clever to bring her at this time to break the ice between them...And Sathyabhama... hats off dear... jo truly fits in her shoes.. her anger, adamancy, jealousy and over possessive love towards jalal

so in future we may hope for Jodha's Sathyabham avtaar in his life and on the stage too😉

at the end jo got her clarification which relieved her stress..

Hritik's part is hilarious..😆 and she gave hint of marrying a divorcee😉

another DEAL.. what is going to come in future.. what she will ask.. hope she utilizes it in proper way. and i know my jo is too smart in this😆

so in October many event are going to come..

  • jo"s parents death anniversary..
  • Jodha's Birthday.. which she didnt celebrated last time due her parents demise..
  • and trip to japan. it's s certainly bring them more closer and may hope for proposal of jalal😉

Jo's dream made me emotional.. she is so attached to her family.

and it sent our jallu to heaven.. got an un expected kiss.😳

The sudden movement of her head, her stammering lips celestially crushed against his cheek and loitered for a moment arousing an exigent blaze in the besotted man. Benumbed by passion, his head involuntarily angled thus pressing his rough contour deeper against her soft lips. In flick of a second, the captivated man managed to steal a staunch imprint of her lips on his cheek. ".. diminishing utility states that..." her chanting lips swiftly brushed past his parted lips while she drastically drifted in seat. The kindling fire was just fuelled to zenith and conquered by desire the desensitized man lowered his head onto her!!

lines from my friend:

Idi chala anyayam.. Jo and Jalal ni emotional ga chala daggoraga tisukonivastar and vallu aa emotions ,feel ayelopu valla madya china distraction tiskochi malli dooram chestav. Ni twistki Hats off.

and the jo's chanting mantra of law of diminishing utility state that ' every increase in the given level of stock leads to to decline in the level of satisfaction'. but it proves wrong for pbd fans jahnu.. as ur updates are increasing our curiosity is increasing.. and fully satisfied by reading again and again.

u always end at wrong point..😡which make the readers more curious and desperate to know further.. and we start chanting our mantra of update soon..

love you for this lovely update Jahnu..⭐️ and dont take much time to update next part. 😉or else we start chanting our mantra of update😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved reading your reviews Geeta (di? 😆 ) Amazing amazing. But one set of comments from you had me in a deep thought.One where you mentioned abt Oct.. Baapre... parents' death anni.. her bday.. Jalal's trip... Fathoming all these words had me in a serious thought.. Where is the story heading to? What an insanely irresistible stage we have come across! It feels like we are on an unpredictable roller coaster ride... relishing each and every moment that comes up...God! becoming more amd more obsessed with the story and its plot.. I hope you guys will agree with me! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Loved reading your reviews Geeta (di? 😆 ) Amazing amazing. But one set of comments from you had me in a deep thought.One where you mentioned abt Oct.. Baapre... parents' death anni.. her bday.. Jalal's trip... Fathoming all these words had me in a serious thought.. Where is the story heading to? What an insanely irresistible stage we have come across! It feels like we are on an unpredictable roller coaster ride... relishing each and every moment that comes up...God! becoming more amd more obsessed with the story and its plot.. I hope you guys will agree with me! :)


Exactly dear..but I Know story is heading towards marriage..😆
These all are our predictions.. But dont know how our pbd maate is going to bring all these events in to light.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hiii wat a wonderful chapter...evry chaptr I read u literally transfer me in 2 sum dreamland...marvelous...omg wat a punishment Ramesh hs gt it wuld b fun 2 see wen he wakes up and bcums mad trying 2 recall wat xactly happnd wid him previous night 😆 awsum jalal 2 gd 👏 jodha darling is sinkin in her jealousy world btwn wen are dey confessing der luv its high time dey confess it...varna nxt time I mite end up seein jodha holding a rose in her hand and plucking petals saying he luvs me he luvs me not... 😆 so b4 her grey cells strts thnkin more hopefully jalal shold confess his luv fr her thou she gt her doubts clrd regarding aliya bt jodha's grey cells are hyper active dey cn alwyz make her trhink on sum othr way... 😉 😆 der love banter ws really funny...I really ws laughin wen she said abt hrithik roshan 😆 it ws way 2 hilarious jalal mst hav gt a mini heart attack... 😆 bt d last part steal all d show of d chappy...oh my my bina maange hi jalal ko kiss mila bt unluckily jodha is nt aware of it...I wuld really luv 2 see her reactn wen she wakes up...hw wuld she react shy, embarrassed or sumthng else 😳 jalal mst hav gt a sweet shock which he mite be thnking 2 remain in dat state forevr... 😳 so octber tk kya hona hai btw wen r u planning 2 opn up goa rahsya...it hs bcum a suspense and thriller luv stry fr me... 😆 and ya plzzz do giv der confession part asap cz bt d time we gt d confessions 2 see half of dm wil b dead cz of der romance... 😆 thou I wil luv der romances bt badly waiting fr der confession...nywz overall fantabulous chappy...cnt gt enuf of it...plzzz do update soon...dnt delay... 😉 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
hai di. once again it was wonderful amazing update. you are just beyond anything. love you for giving us this story... jalal's punishment for ramesh was unimaginable. I didn't even imagine in my wildest dream that one could give such punishment to anyone. that ba****d deserved that. and jodha is such cutie pie . l love her. and I got the clue from one of your comments that jalal is neither going to kiss her nor propose her soon . I m sure whatever you have imagined , that will b best of everything. because you are such a blessed writer. what I have left to say is di update soon. what to do di your story is such that I cannot stop myself from being selfish di. thank you for such a beautiful update and standing applause from my side because you deserve that. love you and take care and start writing for next chapter

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