Akdha OS~~~ The Last Words~~~

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The Last Word
Prolouge:-
"I am sorry..ham use jyaada din tak zinda nahi rakh paayenge..she is suffering the last stage of cancer..we tried our level best but her health is deterioting day by day...had you come earlier ham use bacha paate.." These words were continuously ringing in his mind..
"Rukaiyaa ye tumne thik nahi kiya..aaj ye jo sab ho raha hai sirf tumhaare vajah se...main tumhe chodunga nahi"

Will he be able to live without the most precious thing of his life..will god listen to his love and prayers or will snatch away everything from him??
I know it's very sad so I'm ready for all joota chappal and tomatoes
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice..😊 pm me when u update..
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nice start continue soon pls pm me
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hey dr
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nice prologue plz pm me when u update
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Prologue is interesting. Update soon 😛
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The Last Words
On a beautiful night when the full moon is allowing its light to the whole world equally and everyone is enjoying, two souls were crying their hearts out...
"You know jalal that i am alive for only a few days, still you are not moving ahead.. Don't you understand that we are not meant for each other??
" enough!! I can listen to your rejection but not this.. Please don't leave me.. Please don't.. 😭"
"Jalal please.."
"I am going"
"Where??"
"I'll tell you later"

Rukaiya mansion-
"I am so happy today...breaking news breaking news
The love interest of great jalaluddin mohammad is sadly going to give away her life... The cause is the great Rukaiya who changed her reports to normal viral fever and no one got to know anything.. And now when it is too late... Ha ha ha..poor Jodha..ch.ch.ch.."
"Thud" a sudden slap on the dirty face
"Who the hell..Jalal tum..mujhe pata hai tum dukhi ho magar maine bas Jodha ko help kiya swarg ke sidhi chadne par...don't worry.. Sab kuch thik ho jaayega...aakhir wo bitch"
"Rukaiya...bas bahut hua inspector sahab le jaiye ise.."
"Jalal nahi please.. I don't deserve this please"
"Serves you right"
Hospital-
"Jalal kahan gaye the??"
" ek bahut zaroori kaam pura karne ke liye..rukaiya ko sazaa dilvaane ke liye."
" khair..use uske galtiyon ki saza mil gayi..ab mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai..mere marne ke baad please move on.. Shadi karlena.."
"Kya!! How can you expect this?? Are you out of your mind??
" Jalal.. You have been waiting for me since 2 years and have proposed me more than 10 times.. But what did you get.. Nothing.. Always a no... But today i confess.. I really love you.. Really love you..."
Jalal was more than happy... But he knew this happiness was short termed...
He had proposed jodha many a time but always had to face difficulties... Jodha always had a answer ready which was a no because she was worried about he brothers and sisters who were younger than her and thus never confessed her feelings..
"Jalal mere bhai behenon ka khayal rakhna..."
" iski naubat hi nahi aayegi..tumhe kuch bhi nahi hoga.."
"Magar jalal.."
Before she says she feels soft, wet lips on her...they both have a passionate kiss and say a silent but tearful goodbye...
" jodha main tumhe ek suhaagan banake vida karunga..."
And saying these words fills her forehead with sindoor..
Jodha closes her eyes in happiness...
" jalal mujhe chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye I'll always love you..always.."
Jalal gives her a hug and by the time he breaks it his life had already taken his departure and went away far..he just had his body left...he cried a lot... But finally was happy that he fulfilled her promise.. By marrying someone..the most precious one in his life..
every night, he saw jodha's soul and talks to her and in the morning she disappears...
After some years, jalal also died with Jodha's photo in his hands and his last words were Jodha..
They couldn't be together on this mortal place but lived happily together there were no one could separate them...

I know bahut sad hai magar i wanted to share this story so all joota chappals accepted.. By the way i wrote it once only..thought of not dividing it into 3 parts..



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I am crying! Very heartfelt story! Cnt explain in words!
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intetesting do pm wenever u update

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