Akdha SS || Fir$t Kis$|| updated part 4 @ page 3 4/04/2015.. Pms later - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"How dare you are to kick my Jalal!! Don't you dare to do it again!!" Jodha gasped the letter which was given to her by someone..She didn't want to do that.. It was a mistake..She sighed!!!! "JODHA SINGH!! Hey!" Jodha heard a deep voice and looked at the source! It was none other than Jalal! And Jodha noticed the blue spot under his palm which was nw waving to her and she again sighed.. " Listen I am sorry..I didn't do it intentionally!!" "WAIT! What are you talking about?! The kick? Oh my God! Thatz ridiculous!it was timy and li8 and..." Jalal couldn't go ahead cz he noticed the tears in her eyes! His heart was stabbed and he didn't know why he was feeling like that! "oh sorry Jodha.. I didn't intend to hurt you.. Btw.. Let it go.. Can we be friends?" Jalal forwarded his hands towards Jodha.. Jodha astonishingly looked at him and without saying a word she ran away!! "HUH? Wonder girl!!! Interesting!" said Jalal striking his hands in his shoulder length chocolate brown hair and smirked very hotly!!... " here you go kitty!" said Jodha by giving food behind the school ground to a kitten which was her all time favourite.. " eat that now.. I will bring more tomorrow!! Bye!" by finishing her talkings with her best friend, she started walking towards a area while zipping her school bag! " Jodhaaa!" Jodha almost jumped and screamed "aaa!" and then she shut as she saw HIM again.. Jalal was leaning against a wall.. He jumped and come to her " Easy girl! Itz me!!" "oh! Sorry!" "You don't need to be sorry! Listen ( by stretching his brand new Iphone 6) can we exchange??" said Jalal cutely! Jodha thought to herself-" exchange? My mobi with his?? Nooo..never!!" Jodha said loudly-" Nooo!" by taking her phone to her heart! " Oh no no! I didn't say to exchange our mobi's! I said to exchange our no!!" "Oh! Sorry!" Jodha said embarassingly!!!" do you have some pobs that u keep saying sorry in small matters?"Jalal said jokingly!" no..i mean..n,.." jodha mumbled embarassingly! "ok..Leave it! then can we exchange??" Jalal said very hopefully...
Edited by ...Sonia... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
beautiful rio!!
u call this kachra... It's very nicely written...
continue soon thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
hey sonia interesting start.. pls do pm whenever u update pls pls pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Rio 🤗
Beautiful update dear
Loved surya's character .
Crazy for girls
🤣
Hey Jo kicked jalal hahaha.
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
lovely... jalal took jodhas reaction lightly😛 great... continue soon & do pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved it...it's too beautiful
thanks prithibi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice chapter continue soon pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Mujhe nhn lagta ye 4 ya 5 chaps mein khatm hone wala hain 🤣 u guys r making me to write the story for more chapters as i cnt write much in a chap 🤣 sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice updates plz pm me to on next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is really good
plz pm me from next update

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