Akdha ff -WE ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER chapter-4 teaser on pg-12 - Page 2

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nice concept liked d charctr sketch and prologue update soon
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Nice prolouge n cs
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Nice prologue and characters.. Good to see Drs. In this ff.. Continue and update soon. And pls pm me.
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Congo...mast prologue & character sketech, jaldi continue karo please ,,,😊
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Nice prologue and character sketch
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* CHAPTER - 1* "JK,JK,JK.JK... the crowd was cheering and clapping.Two cars were engaged in a race ,BUGATTI VEYRON vs FERRARI LA FERRARI.With in no time the red ferrari crossed the finish line .All the people rushed toward's the person who was unbeatable and the winner of the race.The winning guy came out of the car with his oakley glasses .He had a kind of face that stop's every girl in their tracks.His lips were pale and thin and his nose slender and rounded,a prominent jaw curved gracefully around and the strength of his neck showed in the twining cords of muscle that shaped his entire body,strong arms,bold thighs and calves , a firm chest and abdomen. His gelled hair with little spikes in front.He was Adonis among other men who each pale in comparison. One look and both men and women swooned at the sight of him no matter their sexual preferences and one word passed from his lips had even the striaghtest of men flushing shades of red that no one ever knew as naturally possible adonis. and on top of all the smirk on his face made him look devilishly handsome.With a loads of attitude he walked toward's the one who dared to challenge him ,no no who thought to challenge him."So dude as per the condition, u should handover the keys to Kevin right?".The person gave the keys and stood with his head down.A smile of trimuph appeared on his face-"Look at me dude".The person slowly raised his head but didn't dare to look in to his opponent's eyes. and said-"U won Jalal.""I know I will win this ,after all I m born to win,remeber onething shareef NEVER MESS WITH JALAL AND MAKE SURE NEXT TIME U WON'T EVEN THINK TO CHALLENGE ME" and by the way what u said I used to win the races as my car's are faster right, but what happened now shareef.U know what jeetne keliye ek cheej ke bahuth zaroorat hota hai aur usse kehte hai dham.jo tumhare pass nahi hai.,and now if u plz give my Veyron car keys i have to give a party 2 my frnds."and takes keys away and leaves to the club to celebrate his victory. ******************* "Now it's time to party guys"shouted Jalal.and all of them cheered and came to dance floor to dance.All the people enjoying themselves,while the wining person sat away at the bar counter having his Vodka."So Champ ab kya soch rahe ho."said another guy joining Jalal."Nothing Abdul".Just then a girl came and hugged Jalal from back."Hey baby, I m feeling so happy for u r victory." and kissed his hands by taking in to hers.Jalal turned towards the girl and kissed on her ear and wishpered "Is there any reward for wining the race or only compliment's?"She blushed heavily,he took her away to some private place and kissed passionately untill he was out of air to breath."Jalal ,I love u baby."the girl said while kissing his bare chest which is exposed as the first two buttons were open. "Me too Tanya" and again kissed on her lips."Jalal it's almost a year that we have been dating,so what do u think now,should we continue our relationship"said Tanya with hope full eyes.JALAL-"I already mentioned u Tanya that, this is just timepass to which u agreed.TANYA-"But Jalal u said na that u love me".JALAL-"Oh!Really, I think that i was using this from the time we started dating."TANYA-"Lekin, Jalal don't u have any feelings for me"He just jerks away and in a angry tone -"cut the crap Tanya ,be practical and from now onwards there is no more relation in between us" and goes inside towards Abdul -"Dude come ,we should go now." and both of them leaves in Jalal's car . ******************* "Jalal ,what happened? Tum itne gusse mein kyun ho."asked Abdul as he sensed that something is wrong. JALAL-"Yaar Abdul, lagta hai Tanya ka dimag karaab hogaya."ABDUL-"Hey tell me what happened buddy."Jalal tells the convo happened between him and Tanya.ABDUL - " Jalal , If u don't mind ,kya mein tum se kuch pooch sakta hoon? "JALAL-"yaar ,yeh kya hai mein tumhe kuch poochu,just ask it man."ABDUL-"Bura mat maan na ok".JALAL -"No yaar, why do i feel bad.Ask what u want to?"ABDUL-"Jalal tumne itne saare ladkiyon se dating pe the na, toh ... toh..."JALAL-"Shoot it Dude".ABDUL-"kya tumhe kabhi bhi kisi se bhi pyaar nahi hua?".silence prevails in the car.After some minutes of silence Jalal speaks-"No,buddy.aaj tak i never felt such feelings for any one in my life,not even for Tanya, though I had dated for one long year."ABDUL-"Jalal ,say what u want to say clearly".JALAL-"U see budy tum mere bff ho,u know everything right ,then there is no need to say anything."ABDUL-"But I want to hear that from u r mouth Jalal."JALAL-"All the girls whom i have dated only wanted my money.They didn't really love me ,they love my status and my reputation.Aur mujhe woh chahiye jo mujhe pyaar kare mera status ya property nahi.Aur aisi ladki toh aaj kal ke generation mein kaha milta hai dude."ABDUL-"who know's Jalal tumhari zindagi mein bhi aisi angel jo aaye,jo sirf tujh se pyaar kartha ho."(scroll down)
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Continuation ... JALAL-"I don't want the girl who loves only me but also my family.she should be just like my mom Abdul." Abdul just sends a silent prayer,while Jalal's phone rings.JALAL-"yeah, we are on our way .don,t worry."ABDUL-"Koun hai Jalal?"JALAL-"aur koun mera bhai nahi nahi mera caretaker." ****************** "lo khan pakad ke sorry mang rahe hain na ,ab toh maaf kar mere bhai"pleaded Jalal."No ways bro aapne mujhe race mein nahi bhulaya ok,but aap toh party mein bhi nahi bhulaya,I m hurt by u r behaviour bro"said another guy. JALAL-"Yaar Mirza,kya party party laga ke bhaita he tu,mein khud vaha bored hoke yaha ghar vapas agaya hoon".MIRZA-"Bro, pinch me."JALAL-"what, Mirza r u mad?"MIRZA-"No bhai, the great JMK ko aaj pehli baar party mein enjoy nahi kiya,this is 8th wonder bhai."Jalal smacks his shoulder's and says"woh Tanya ne mood karab diya hai Mirza.,ki Jalal I luv u ,blah blah.".MIRZA-"So bro,then u might have broke up u r relation na,agar apne nahi kiya na plz kijiye."Jalal chukles and asks"Mirza tumhe itna accha kyun lagta hai jab bhi mein girlfrnds ke saath breakup kartha hoon toh."MIRZA-"because mujhe aapke girlfrnds aur aapke beech mein football ki tarah nahi ban na padtha hai."Both of them laughs.MIRZA-"by the way bro kya aapne dad ko inform hain na, ki u r going 2 India tmrw."JALAL-"No,Mirza.I don't think there is no need to inform him."MIRZA-"But bhai...Jalal cut's him in middle and asks Mirza to go and sleep.******* NEXT DAY... "Jalal listen to me beta". "No dad mein aapki baat nahi sunnevala hoon"said an adamant Jalal while dragging his luggage to car.HUMAYUN-"U can do u r internship in London itself no,what is the need to go to India and u even u didn't think tell me about this."JALAL-"No dad,I have decided to do my internship in India aur mujhe yaha apke saath nahi rehna hai,mera dham guth tha hai yaha apke sath rahte".HUMAYUN-"Jalal what r u saying.do u have any idea."JALAL-"Sach hi toh keh raha hoon na dad, u don't care for us ,apko sirf apki business ki phikar hain,and why do u show love on us,anyways forget it.I should go now."and drives away.While Humayun just see's his son going away from him and was about to fall but Mirza catches him on time and make him to sit on sofa.HUMAYUN-"Agar aaj tumhare mom yaha hote toh shayad Jalal India nahi gaya hotha Mirza."MIRZA-"don't worry dad ,bhai ke saath Abdul bhai is also going na,"HUMAYUN-"Why does he think that I don't love u guys'.Why doesn't he understand ki I have only You guys."Mirza consoles him.HUMAYUN-"Kyun chale gaye ho Chaya (Jalal's mom)hum logon ko chod kar.dekho Jalal mujhse kitna nafrat karta hain."MIRZA-"No dad ,bhai loves u alot."HUMAYUN-"I just pray ki mere bete ki zindagi mein aisi pari aaye jo usse utna hi pyaar kare jitna unka mom kartha tha." ******************* Jalal-"Damn it, yeh abdul ko mein zinda nahi chonduga".He was cursing Abdul as he didn't arrived at air port and noteven responding to his calls.He was totally frustrated,just then Abdul comes and hugs him-"sorry dude late hogaya ab chale".JALAL-"i will see u after wards".and both of them fill the formalities and boards the plane. As usual Jalal starts flirting with the girl who is next to his seat.ABDUL-"Dude,tum aaj itna kush kyun hai?"JALAL-"Don't know Abdul I m feeling so happy bcz finally going to stay with buajaan and don't know why I feel like something is going to change my life Abdul."Both of them smiles ,not knowing what there in future. PRECAP:guess it.itne samjhdar toh hongi. DO COMMENT AND LIKE.
Edited by dharaangel - 10 years ago

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