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Posted: 10 years ago
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HI, HELLO... SO HERE IS THE UPDATE OF *STORY OF US*...

BUT BEFORE YOU ALL READ IT LET ME TELL YOU THAT THIS STORY IS INSPIRED FROM THE SHOW HUMSAFAR WHICH WAS AIRED ON ZINDAGI CHANNEL, IT WAS A PAKISTANI SERIAL OF 23 OR 25 EPISODES...THE LEADES WERE FAWAD KHAN AND MAHIRA KHAN...THIS SERIAL WAS A BLOCKBUSTER IN PAKISTAN AND IT WAS LIKED BY INDIANS TOO...

I M PLANING TO START AN AKDHA VERSION OF A VERY POPULAR PAKISTANI SERIAL CALLED ZINDAGI GULZAR HAI AND THE LEADS OF THIS SHOW WERE FAWAD KAHAN AND SANAM SAEED...I WILL LIKE TO SAY THAT ACTING OF PAKISTANI ACTORS IS JUST MUAH!! THEY DO IT SOO PERECTLY...UFF!!!..

SO ENDING MY SPEECH HERE ...AND COMING BACK TO THE UDATE...


Today was the day of marriage, marriage of Shehnsha Jallaludin Mohhamad Akbar and Rajkumari Jodha Bai...

Both Jallal and jodha were experiencing this for first time (it means Jallal will have only 1wife and that is jodha)

Kaki sa : jodha agar tumhari masa aur bapusa ajj yaha hote to kitne khush hote...

Jodha was sitting in the front of a big mirrior...she was wearing a heavy red colored chania choli with heavy working on it (plss forgive me...this is my weakest part...dresses and all..huh!!!)

Jodha in a sad tone replied : kaki sa, yadi masa aur bapusa yaha hote toh baat hi kuch aur hoti...ajj mera vivaha ek aise insaan ke sath ho raha hai jisse mai janti tak nahi hoon...agar agra me mai kisi ko janti hoo to wo humayun kaka sa aur hamida kaki sa hai"

Kaki sa "jodha, ab wo tumhare kaka sa aur kaki sa nahi rahe ab se tum unhe ammi aur abbu bulagi...aur tum naraz naa ho...dekho hamida jiji aur humayun bhai sa tum se kitna prem karte hai...tumhare masa aur bapusa ki akhri eksha (wish) thi ki tumhara nikah Jallal se ho aur unhone esse pura bhi kar diya"

Jodha "hume shezade jallaludin se milna hai, wo bhi abhi"

Kaki sa "lekin kyu"

Jodha "apne vivah se pehle unse kuch baat karni hai"

Kaki sa "lekin jodha, vivah se phele kaise mil sakti ho"

Jodha "kaki sa hum apni maryada (limit) ko nahi bhulege...kaki sa kuch bhi kariye lekin hum unse milna chahte hai"

Kakisa "theek hai, lekin tum dono ke beech parda hona chahiye "

Jodha "ji kaki sa"

JALLAL'S KHEMA

Humayun and Jallal were sitting in Jallal s room, he was helping jallal with in jewelries and all...

A maid arrived and said in a respectful tone " shehensha (humayun) aur shezade (Jallal) ko pranam...rajkumari jodha shezade se darkhwast karna chahti hai ki app unse unke kheme me mile..unhe apse nikah karne se pehle kuch mangna chahti hai"

Jallal "theek hai jaisi apki shezadi ki marzi" and the maid left

Humayun "beta wo job hi mange usse de dena...wo bahut massum aur saada hai...usne bahut hi kam umar me apne walid waliden ko khoya hai...tumhe meri kasam"

Jallal "abba apko humse iltija karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...mai apka beta hoon apa har hokum manoga"

Humayun "hume tum pe naaz hai beta''

Jalla "shukria abbu"

IN JODHA'S CHAMBER

On the one side of curtain jodha was sitting and on the other hand Jallal...

Jallal "to shezadi jodh, kya mange hai apki" he asked it in a polite tone.

Jodha " humari 2 mange hai" she replied in a calm tone.

Jallal "farmaiye"

Jodha "pehli : hum apna dharma vivah ke baad bh nah badlenge"

Jallal "aur dosri"

Jodha "wo..wo..."

Jallal "dariye mat shezadi" he replied in a polite tone.

Jodha "hum chahte hai ki agra me humare kaksh me humare kanaha ka mandir ho"

Jallal in a soft tone said "hum apki ke jazbato ki kadr karte hai aur apki mange poori karne ka apse vada karte hai aur jaane se pehle ye baat kaihna chahege ki apkii awaz bahut meethi hai..agar apko yaad ho to jab hum bahut chote the tab ek bar amer aaye the...acche se to nahi yad ki uss din kya kya hua lekin itna zarur yaad hai ki uss din apne aur humne mil kar chupan chupai (hide and seek) bahut kheli thi...

Jodha "a.a.aaa. hume nahi yaad...shayad..ummm yaad nahi aa raha hai"

Jallal "koi baat nahi" he gave her a million dollar smile and left.

AFTER SOME TIME

The rituals took place and were completed perfectly...(shortcut method... Lol..)

Now they were a couple a royal couple...everyone were praising their match..

Hamida "subhanallalha!!!! Kya joda hai tum dono ka , khufa kare tum dono zindag bhar khush raho"

Jallal looked tpwards jodha and smiled but jodha didn't even looked at him , she was looking at the ground , he can see her worry on her face.

Jallal to jodha in low voice "kya hua apko jodha? Ap theek to haina?

Jodha "ji"

Jallal to himself "maybe she is missing her parents"

Everyone was happy, except 2 : rukaiya jallal's childhood best friend and mahamanga his badi ammi (rukaiya and maham are same as they are in the show but rukaiya is not jallal's wilfe, jodha is his 1 and the only wife)

Maham to rukaiya "dekh rahi hai shehezadi, Jallal ka nikah hogaya wo bhi kisi aur khatoon se"

Rukaiya "maham, hum haar maane walo me se nahi hai, is jodha ko to aisi mat milegi ki, isski duniya tabah ho jayegi"

Maham "hum apke saath hai shehezadi" she said it with an evil smirk...

All the rituals were over till now and the most important ritual , ritual of crying also took place...then Jallal ,jodha and all other people started their journey...

After sometime

Humayun "raat bahut hogayi hai, ajj raat hum yahi rukege aur baaki ka safar kal taih karege"

As per humayun s oder the tents were ready...

Jallal and jodha's room was decorated with red roses and other light pink and white flowers , beautiful candles and lamps were also placed (this is also my week section means everything which seems to be girlish is difficult for me)

Jallal was excited for his first night...he went to his respected chamber, he saw his wife was sitting on the bed, her hands were hugging her legs , and a big pallu covering her face...

Jallal went close to her next to her, he kept herhand on hers and asked "kya ap is niah se khush hai" he asked it in a calm tone.

Jodha "ji,,ji..j..i."

Jallal "hum jante hai ki ap iss nikah se khush nahi hai lekin hum apko batade ki hum humesha apke sath rahenge , dookh mein bhi aur such me bhi"

Jodha "wo..hume apse kuch kehna tha"

Jallal "ji kahiye"

Jodha "sabke kaihne par hum apse vivah karne keliye taiyar to hogaye lekin.. wo..hum..me"

Jallal "hum samjh sake hai apki baat ko, jabtak ap nahi chahegi hum apko nahi chuenge, apki ijazat ke bina apke kareeb nahi aayenge"

Jodha "sh..shukri..aa"

Jallal "ap itna darti kyun hai..."

Jodha "nahi..to" she said it in a worried tone...

Jallal "job hi ho...hum apko batana chahte hai ki ajj bhi aura age bhi hume 1 hi hojare me rehna hai , to ek dusre par aitbar bhi rakhna hoga, matlab hum eek hi palang (bed) par sona hoga" he said it in a polite tone.

Jodha "j...ji..."

The end...

Now don't kill me for this short upate...mere exams start hp chuke hai..phir bhi I am giving update...I a try to give long pdates...

PRECAP : jallal shirtless at night...

After some days

Jallal to jodha " app humare sath humari pasandida jagaha chalna chahegi"

Jodha "agar app chahe to"

Jallal " hum to yahi chahenge ki app har kadam pe humaresaath ho, har safar me humari humsafar hoo"

Ummm, I want to say sorry to you all for not replying your comments...sorryyy and renu jaan I loved my new name tooo much utapam" wow! Such a tasty name...ab mai khud ko hi na kha jau..lol..

Yess yess I know, I have not written English translations...no time...exams, exams and exams...

Love❤️

Maddest person on the earth Arunima 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
nice update
cute couple
update soon
pm me too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Hey Arunima..all the best for your exam dear:):):)
nice user name..
now coming to the update..firstly thank you so much..jodha is and will be jalal's only wife..awesome chapter.. wow . tum kitni acchi Hindi dialogues likhti ho...yeh maham and ruks 🤬
precap ..shirtless jalal...hmmm.
ab exam ke baad fast fast update de dena;);)
Take care:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
OH GOD...😳
WHAT A MIND BLOWING UPDATE CUTIEPIE...👏
LOVED THIS AKDHA...😳
AND JALLU ... AWWW...😳
HE IS SO CARING...😳
UPDATE SOON AND THANKS FOR THE PM...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: avika444

sweeties dono ek saath de do 😉


ISNE TO DE DIYA PAR MERA WALA MEIN TIME LAGEGA THODA...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Hey utapam ...khud ko mat kao...ice cream ko kao...always escaping...
N I loved this update because ruk is not his wife.
I always like to read 1 woman man jallu
Cuttest couple...
Cont after after 4 march lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: renuganesh

Hey Akanksha before u comment here go n comment on ur thread...where r u escaping these days?
Ya Arunima kept u a good name 4 u KAAMCHOR



BAS THODI BUSY HOON CHOCOLATE...
MERI BF NE MUJHE KAAM PAR LAGA KAR RAKHA H...
STORY UPDATE KARNA H.. PM BHEJHNA H... ETC ETC...
AUR PHIR MUJHE KAMCHOR BHI KEHTI H...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: renuganesh

Hey utapam ...khud ko mat kao...ice cream ko kao...always escaping...
N I loved this update because ruk is not his wife.
I always like to read 1 woman man jallu
Cuttest couple...
Cont after after 4 march lol



WHY???
MUJHE KYUN MAARO...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mushat

Hey Arunima..all the best for your exam dear:):):) SHUKRIAA
nice user name.. AGAIN THKSS
now coming to the update..firstly thank you so much..jodha is and will be jalal's only wife.. I ALWAYS WANTED THAT😃

awesome chapter.. wow . tum kitni acchi Hindi dialogues likhti ho...yeh maham and ruks 🤬
precap ..shirtless jalal...hmmm.
ab exam ke baad fast fast update de dena;);) I HAVE 4 STORIES TO HANDEL AND 1 IS GOING TO COME😆
Take care:):)

@ BOLD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

OH GOD...😳

WHAT A MIND BLOWING UPDATE CUTIEPIE...👏 THANKSS ICE CREAM😃
LOVED THIS AKDHA...😳 MUJHE TERE WALE ZAYADA PASAND HAI
AND JALLU ... AWWW...😳
HE IS SO CARING...😳 YUP!!!
UPDATE SOON AND THANKS FOR THE PM...😉 UPDATE SOON? CHOR KE MUSE IMANDARI SUNE WALI BAT HUI, TU UPDATE MANG RAHI HAI🤣 AND PMS UFF!!! I HATE TO DO THAT

@ BOLD

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