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when will u update u said u will update soon
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Awesome story..
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heyyaa guyzzz
you got two options...
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CHAPTER 14
Jalal throws himself on the chair and starts crying...
he looks vulnerable...
Jodha leaves but turns back to see him... Jodha being our Jodha can't tolerate him like this so rushes to him...
Jodha" tum rote hue bilkul ache nahin dikhte"
(you don't look nice when you cry)
Jalal notices that her eyes are also red..
Jalal" tum bhi.."
(you too)
Jodha" ab ye kya hai? wo dhokha main kabhi nahi bhul sakti... aur tumhe aise dekh ke ek pal to lagta hai ki tum sach mein badal gaye ho... magar tumpar bharosa karna mere liye bahut mushkil hai... wo raat main kabhi nahin bhul paungi..."
(what is this Jalal? I can never forget that betrayal... and looking at you I feel that you have changed... but trusting on you is very difficult for me... I can never forget that night..)

**FLASHBACK**

Jalal gets up and sees Jodha crying...
he gets tensed and gets up
Jalal" kya hua Jodha?"
(what happened Jodha)
Jodha,"tumne mujhse jhooth bola..ye dekho... ye saare nishaan"
(you lied... look at this... these marks)
Jalal gets tensed and gulps down his saliva...
Jodha starts laughing and says...
"kya hua? itna kyun dar gaye??? main mazak kar rahi thi yaar... ab jao naha ke aao..."
(what happened? why are you scared?? I was just joking... now go and have your bath)
and she leaves..
Jalal sighs..

2 months pass...

Jodha is very happy with her life...
then one day... no one is with her.. she feels dizzy...
she thinks to do a check-up...
after the check-up..
doctor" c'mon Jodha... smile... you are pregnant..."
Jodha"what??" she almost hugs the doctor...
she wants to inform everyone but then thinks to surprise them...
she calls up Jalal and says" aaj zara jaldi aana"
( come early today)
Jalal"kyun"
(why)
Jodha" maine kaha isliye"
(I said that's why)
Jalal"ok jaan"
(ok dear)
Jodha smiles...

she thinks to visit her parents...
she goes there and as she has an extra pair of keys she opens the door...
Jodha"aaa"
she sees her family members are lying down with blood all over... she tries to wake everyone up... she call the ambulance...
she is in the hospital and is about to call Jalal when doctor call her and tell her that Maina wants to see her..
she goes inside...
Jodha" maa..."
Maina" sab thik hai na?"
(everyone is fine right?)
Jodha" han maa.. acha hua main time par aa gayi..."
(yes maa... thank God I came on time.)
Maina" Jodha idhar se chali jaa"
(Jodha leave this place)
Jodha"maa??"
Maina" Jalal acha ladka nahi hai"
(Jalal is not a nice guy)
Jodha"maa!"
Maina" beta usine aisa kiya hai hamare saath.."
(dear he only did this with us)

Jodha comes out from the hospital and heads for Jalal"s office..
she reaches there and sees Jalal with Shareefuddin...

she hides and listen to their talks..
Jalal" shareefuddin tumne kaam kiya"
(shareefuddin did you do the work?)
Shareefuddin" han bhai.."
(yes bro)
Jalal" bas ab Jodha ek bacha de de... uska katl karke mai hamesha hamesha ke liye mukt ho jaaunga.."
( now just let Jodha give birth... killing that baby.. I'll be free for ever)
Shareefuddin" han bhai..."
(yes bro)

and they head their way to the car...

Jodha turns but by mistake a vase fall down...
Jalal turns... He is shocked...
he shouts" Jodha"
Jodha starts running...
Jalal" Jodha ruko.. ruko"
(Jodha wait)


after that Jodha was nowhere to be found...
she left India and settled in Paris with her friend Moti...
in due time... her complications in pregnancy increased... during the surgery... doctors had said that it's either she or the baby who will live..
she chose the baby but due to God's grace both were saved...
after that all her life was her baby, her Salim...

**Flashback Ends**

Jalal" kehte hain na Jodha... kisike jaane ke baad hin uska mol pata chalta hai... mujhe bhi tabhi pata chala tum mere liye kitne kimti ho... I am sorry Jodha"
( It is said that we only value our things after it is lost..I also knew your value after you went... I am sorry)
Jodha" abhi tumne mera bharosa nahin jeeta... Jab jeetoge tab maafi bhi paaoge..."
(till now you haven't won my trust... the day you win it, I'll forgive you..)
and Jodha leaves...
Jalal" main tumhe mana hi lunga..."
(I'll pacify you for sure )
and smiles...


PRECAP:- Last chapter...



joota chappals all allowed... I didn't get any idea to bas likh dala... sorry for the bakwaas...
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Posted: 9 years ago
heyaaa guyzzz finally updated...
this was the longest chapter I updated...
so no complaints...
any confusion... please feel free to tell me
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awsum chappu

how can even ja think of killing his own child

update asap
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yipee second

superb chappi dear
how could jalal do that with jos family
to kill his own child
their must be some confusion I hope
continue soon
and do pm me too
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wow its amazing chptr..
but jalal..how could he think to kill his own child..
update soon nxt part..
tnxx for the pm

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