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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ...rio...

Awesmee chappy Hemu di!!!just wow...i lovd the trial of unlocking the door of jodha nd caught red handed 🤣 yeh ladki v nah!!nd the msgs r soo chweeettt...nd who the holy shit is this Ramesh???how dares he to propose jodha..nd the Divi-Jodha part...everythng is beyond perfect...nd jodha's dancing..i also love dancing...jodha wants jalal's love and attention nd vice versa..nd i think soon it will b cleard to the both...nd the bargain of bharpaai for jalal's mobi 🤣 thankz fr d pm..love u..


Hi Prithi.. 🤗.. Ramesh is Jodha's colleague.. and how'd he know that she isn't made for him.. he gave his try.. 😆 .. Jodha wants Jalal's love?? where did I say that madam.. glad u enjoyed all the parts thoroughly.. 😉.. love ya.. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: prathi025

Amazing update hema

Texting n desperately waiting for his replies...admiring each other ...so many developments
The perfect guy she imagined is Mr MD??



Hi Prathi.. thanks for liking.. of course it has to be MD 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: rs_fun2

Hey Jhanvi,

Loved the chapter... Looks like "aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai"... Really the liked the way Jo tried to get into MD's cabin and he gave her the key! Put a big smile on my face... She really floored him with her dance and the to-be-sasur too 👏

Ramesh proposal was out of the blue but a needed event to help her take the next step to confess her feelings (hope that will not take too long)

Their SMS session was very bold and flirty in its own way

All in all, a great read and let me leave u with something for u to ponder upon:
update chapter 20 soon ... Puhlease!
😆



Hi Rachana.. 🤗.. haa.. aag is augmenting with every update.. 😉.. of course.. the tune, the steps and the girl.. all are perfect package.. 😉 .. yeah.. that proposal is gonna be a catalyst.. 😉..
SMS convo.. unexpectedly informal one.. when one has no work at office such things only happen.. 😆..
chap 20 soon.. sure.. sure.. 😆😆..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
👏👏⭐️
Awesome update Jahnu!
Love the turn of your story.

What a chit chat of love bytes. Too cute.
Detail comments later dear😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


Hi Nishat.. how r u doing.. thanks for your comments dear.. goa wala song is long way to go dear.. 😆
and if Jodha sings that in official dining and Jalal recognizes her, it'd look like "Yaadon ki baarat" song situation.. 🤣.. ramesh proposal is to act as a catalyst re.. it has to be there 😉


Di...I m fine :):)
bus todhi thi di busy with studies..
9feb se exam hai na...
yaadon ki baarat
🤣
di mujhe Ramesh naam se problem ho raha hai woh 5 star wala ramesh mujhe yaad aa gaya
🤣 I know it's weird...
habba ka meaning batao na ..woh Jo said na ...habba ..he is not angry with me...mujhe south Indian kuch dishes ke naam
..and ille means No itna hi south Indian ati hai woh bhi chennai express dekhne ke baad
. 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: mushat


Di...I m fine :):)
bus todhi thi di busy with studies..
9feb se exam hai na...
yaadon ki baarat
🤣
di mujhe Ramesh naam se problem ho raha hai woh 5 star wala ramesh mujhe yaad aa gaya
🤣 I know it's weird...
habba ka meaning batao na ..woh Jo said na ...habba ..he is not angry with me...mujhe south Indian kuch dishes ke naam
..and ille means No itna hi south Indian ati hai woh bhi chennai express dekhne ke baad
. 🤣


habba isn't a word dear.. its Thank god kind of expression.. actual word is abbaa.. I added a h to it.. 😆.. Ramesh.. Suresh.. that ad naa.. 🤣 .. how long are ur exams?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Deepasub

👏👏⭐️

Awesome update Jahnu!
Love the turn of your story.

What a chit chat of love bytes. Too cute.
Detail comments later dear😉


Deeps ... did u read it all over?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
I didn't know about that tune from takshak but came to know from the link u provided...
it's reall a lovely tune!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


habba isn't a word dear.. its Thank god kind of expression.. actual word is abbaa.. I added a h to it.. 😆.. Ramesh.. Suresh.. that ad naa.. 🤣 .. how long are ur exams?


wohi add ...Zara socho ek hath mein 5 star leke Jo ko propose kar raha hai 🤣
ohhh...I got it now... ek word shikh gayi mein...
exam ...Mon ko hons ke 2 papers
Tues ko general ke 2 papers and thurs ko ek aur general ke 2 papers:'(:'(:'(:'(
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Read it 3 times already.

Res

UnRes on Page 12.. 😛
Edited by sam_0506 - 10 years ago

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