TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5)

First Previous

Page

105

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Rani1965

@Rani1965

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#951

Good update. Really loved it.
Pity Bakshi, still facing the same problem with Sharifudin.
Love Jodha and Jalal. He really cares for her.
Thank you for the PM and waiting for your next update.

Quote

Ndi81

@Ndi81

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#952

thank you for update 😉😉😉 cant wait for the next chapter

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

devikamahankal

@devikamahankal

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#953

fantastic update dear

poor Bakshi, she is in pain here also😭

jodha's dreams - princess misses her mother😔

next dream was fantastic❤️

is the crown too heavy for my queen haye

whats in store for us?

which decision JODHA has to take?

n why didnt Adka sahab say anything to jalal

about MM's proposal to Jodha?

he knows na that both jalal-jodha love each other

waiting for next update eagerly..

Quote

Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#954

Awesome as always Rasika

All the dialogues and monologues were amazingly written.. U sum up all the emotions in one single sentence..like Bakshi's POV... watching the scattered beads.."just like my life'..

Jodha was trying to comfort the guilt ridden Prince with her words.. more for her own sanity.. A lot of changes has happened with passing time.. She was no more a victim of his wrath.. and he was really cool to her defiance,,Jalal unknowingly questioning Jodha which they have to answer in the nearest future... Looking forward to read more ..thanks for the pm

Quote

Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#955

Rasika🤗

Loved it darling! Poor Bakshi😭 and Creep Sharif😡 We could see new dimension of relationship between Jalal and Jodha. Caring side of Jalal😳😃 and a great debate for choosing between the choices 😆I thoroughly enjoyed my reading dear.😳

Update soon dear

Quote

diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#956

chap 5 part 4

so it's HB who sent Atga Khan to know Jo's mind...HB wants Jo to be shehenshah's queen? why? how much she know Jo?

anyway, our sweet lovebirds r experts in playing puzzles.. and nobody likes to back off.. so perfect equals in everything...

I m loving both these strong headed characters, Rasika... waiting for their love confession...

and for u my dear, 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

amazing story wonderfully scripted...

update soon...don't like waiting much

Quote

Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#957

awsm chapter di...
Poor Bakshi...😔
creepy jerk shareef😡...
Love is brewing between the would be love birds ...
Waiting for their confession didu...
That would be a treat to watch oops read 😉😆
Thanks for the pm didu...

Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

Quote

.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#958

fab chappy di
shariff is really annoying😡
jodha soothed him he was relaxed after talking with her
liked caring jalal he was so concerned about jodha😛he accepted dt he behaves different when it comes to Jodha
loved JJ's their convo
when will jalal realize that he loves Jodha...??😕he wants to get her naa and he is adamant about it
plz di i want love realization and firstly jalal should realize his love for Jodha
plz update soon

Quote

Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#959

Amazing update Rasika👏..thoroughly enjoyed reading dear😊

Here also this cheapuddin troubling his wife😡

Poor Bakshi... So helpless in front of her husband.

Assuring herself that one day he loves her...

And at the end compared her life with scattered beads on the floor..felt really pity for her😭

And loved Jo's dreams..in first she missed her mom and felt home.😊and second is fantastic.. Seeing her future..wearing a crown of mughal empress.😳 hope this dream comes true soon.

And jodha tried to pacify the guilty jalal ...and her words worked like magic soothed his bruised heart.😳

Now these two love birds are connecting emotionally..

Love to see their progress in this battle of mind and heart.

Continue soon dear..

Waiting for the next chappy.

Update soonish.