TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5) - Page 25

Originally posted by: abhi786

Wow Rasika wonderful update dear with a excellent sword fight most surprising & shocking is their first kiss 😲
>>Thanks Abhi...🤗

Jo doesn't want to show her talent in sword fight against Jalaal so that less chances to escape 😆 but Shivani was so eager that JO should kill Jallu , IS THAT EASY 😉 ...
>>Of course it is not at all easy...😉

"How about a single good reason that you have started liking him?" 😎

JO will not accept this MOST important reason her heart unknowingly accepted him, she doesn't want to break the trust he showed on her, even though her mind says she might fail if attempted also..
>>The confusions will be there at this phase...when they are in denial mode..😳

Jalaal is so keen on observing JO which sword she picks her grip fingers & all, while JO heart already skipping seeing him in warrior attire 😉
>>He is a shrewd man...he underestimated her once so he will not repeat same mistake again...😃

Why is Jalaal giving advices to JO on broad swords ? does he want to teach sword skills also or wants to become her master 😃,
>>Maybe because first time he found a girl who had interest in swords...😆

JO baby is listening as obedient student 😆
>>She was...😳

Jalaal really enjoying this fight with JO a equal opponent 👍🏼

"How much time are you going to observe me and do nothing?" 🤣 Being still and doing nothing are two very different things." 👏

He might be drooling if you wear that Princess dress, but he is making note of every movie keenly..
>>And he can still drool over while observing her...😉


WOW Rasika you have written so wonderfully the sword fight, how Jalaal is impressed, & Jo stopped it right time ..A true warrior knows when to fight and when not to fight'
>>Thanks dear...😃

Jallu WON it, but is impressed with her sword skills also keen to know mystery JO that she could be assassin to kill him...

"I am standing in front of one, right now" 😆

Ayoo Jalaal, JO baby can't be assassin dear, you want to know everything about her, why so interested in her ? 😎
>>Well, she is an assassin...but did she come to harm him is to be decided...if so why she is waiting till now???... I am thinking from Jalal's POV here...🤔

The First KISS is surprising he did to prove what he can do to her 😲 and also continue to mock her "I mean that, in future, when I want to bend you to my will, I'll simply kiss you into compliance. You're terrified of it."😆

It is not fear I feel, but merely lack of interest." 🤣

Ayoo JO why you said it dear.. NOW he ready for another KISS to prove her wrong 😆 Chance Pe Dance 😆
>>Yes Jalal did a chance pe dance...😆

What a passionate first kiss where both forgot WHO they are enjoying as a lovers

Rasika waiting for next one, will anyone see them ? Will these 2 atleast accept to themselves that they fallen in love ?
>>Will update soon dear...I hope you will get answers to these questions soon...😳

Originally posted by: ...rio...

Donno whoz guilty?btw exciting teaser

Originally posted by: NikkiReed

Awesome update... Loved it...
>>Thanks Nikki...🤗

Update soon...
>>Will do...😃

The kiss was described in a very extraordinary amazing way... Just loved it
>>Thanks dear...😳 Glad that you loved it...

and pls Continue soon...sorry for the late cmnt...
>>No problems dear...see even I replied to you this late...😆

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Hi Rasika.. loved, loved the update..
>>Thanks Hema Di...😃

Fire and ice.. deadly combination.. ☺️☺️☺️
>>It is deadly...😉

.. story is taking a beautiful shape..
>>Thanks again...😳

I thought you'd not put in kiss scene.. but you beautifully blended it into flow..
>>Oh yes...you have read the novel right...there are a lot of things that I skipped though...😉 and added some of my own...😆 so it has become a Khichadi...😆

eagerly waiting to read further 🤗
>>Will update soon...🤗

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

Rasika, plz update soon...