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Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

completely different concept...update the chapi soon & do pm dear

This is my first try in writing... I have never tried writing stories before this...

Thank you all for showing this much interest in my story... I will try not to fail you...

So here goes the first chapter of my story:

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CHAPTER 1

~~ZINDAGI KAHIN BHI THAMTI NAHI~~

Jodha's Residence:

"Tring tring"... the sound of the doorbell broke her sleep. Hastily getting up, she stifled a yawn and looked at the clock placed at the bedside table. It showed 8:00 am.

"Oh my God"... exclaimed Jodha, "kitna der ho gaya". Quickly taking her dupatta and placing it around her neck, she almost ran to the door to see who it was.

"Kahan rahe gayi thi tu, Jo?", even before opening the door completely, Jodha heard Moti's voice, coming from the other side of the half opened door.

"Bas thodi der zyada so gayi thi. Vo kya hai na, kal raat ko sone main thodi der ho gayi thi", replied Jodha, not meeting eyes with her bestie.

How can she lie to her best friend?? A friend who has always been by her side since the last ten years, trying hard to protect her at every moment, every step of her life. How can she lie to the person who knew her almost in and out, who can even read all her thoughts.

Today also the same thing happened. Even before casting the first glance on her friend's face, Moti understood there is surely something wrong with her best friend, and it did not take her much time to figure out what can be wrong. After all she knew everything about her friend's life. Jodha had confided all about her past, her troubles, her sorrows to Moti. She told everything to her, except the name of the person who she thought was the root cause of all her problem, and also the name of her child.

Yes, she is a mother, or better to say that she was a mother who was deprived of having the love of her child, who was deprived of all the feelings which a mother gets when she watches her child growing in front of her eyes and today was also her son's birthday.

But what is there to talk about the feelings of a mother, when she could never understand how it feels to be loved by a husband, to be always protected by him??

"Kahan kho gayi hai tu??? Dekh meri taraf, idhar dekh", almost pulling her friend's face towards her to meet her eyes, Moti continued, "kyun abhi bhi tu us insaan ko yaad karti hai, jisne tujhe itna dard diya, jisne teri issemal ki bas apni pyaas bujhane ke liye??? Kyun abhi bhi un dino ko yaad karti hai tu?? Bhulne ki koshish kar use aura age badh apni zindagi mein. Piche murkar dekhna ab bandh kart u."

"Kaise piche murna bandh karoo main?? Mera baccha , vo to mujhe kabhi apni zindagi mein aage badhne nahi dega. Tujhe pata hai Moti, jab usdin us insaan ne mujhse mere bacche ko chin liya, main ek maa hokar bhi kuch nahi kar payi thi, sirf royi thi apni kismet par. Main undino ko kabhi bhul nahin paoongi Moti". Stuffing the ends of her dupatta in her mouth, in an attempt to muffle her cry, Jodha said," tu andaar aake baith, main abhi taiyaar hoke aarahi hoon"..

"Thik hai jaldi aa, aaj naya boss aane wala hai office mein, aur tu to P.A. hai na, suna hai unhone tujhe P.A. ki post pe rakh di hai, jaldi taiyaar hoke aaja." Almost shouting after her running friend, Moti replied.

Almost running to her room, she locked the door from inside and went to the cupboard. Taking out a black and white check shirt and a black skirt, Jodha managed to get ready before breaking down on the floor crying furiously over her fate.

She still remembered that day.

Flashback:

"Due to the mother, Jodha Singh's financial instability, the Court hereby gives Salim Mohammad's custody to his father, Mr. Jalaluddin Mohammad. The court is adjourned for the day." The judge's verdict made Jodha break down crying profusely over her fate.

What an ill fate she had with no one to support her or to give her a shoulder to cry upon. Jodha was an orphan living in an orphanage of Manali when one fine day, her step father took a liking to her and adopted her as his own daughter. The only person who loved her was her step father.

But today as the court gave orders of here separation from her child there was no one by her side. Her step parents left her being afraid of the bad name she was about to bring to the family by being a divorcee. She had absolutely no one whom she can call her own, she had no place to go. She straightened herself, consoling her heart, saying that Salim is in good hands.

" Dekha Jodha, aaj tumhari beta, vo bhi mera ho gaya," carrying the six months old Salim in her hands , Ruquaiya walker over to Jodha.

"Dekhliya mera kamala, aaj tumhari shauhar aur beta aur jagah vo sab meri hai."

"Ruquaiya, sach kahu toh aaj main puri tarah se haar gayi hun. Tumne mujhe tod di, mere dil ko tod di, par mere bacche ko mat todna, uspar rahem karna", saying this Jodha went out leaving her son, her life behind her with Ruquaiya.

Present:

A knock at the door broke Jodha's thoughts accompanied by Moti's impatient voice.

"Arre jaldi kar Jo, hume nikalna hoga".

"Ha bas abhi ayi," Jodha replied.

Walking to the dressing table, she quickly combed her hair, lined her doe shaped hazel eyes (slightly fluffy due to continuous crying) with deep kohl, applied lip gloss. Taking the handbag and opening the door she said, " Chal Moti".

"Ha chal", Moti replied as Jodha locked the door behind her, with a promise of never to look back.

Jalal's Residence:

"Tringgg"... hearing the front door bell ring, Ruquaiya opened the door wide for him, welcoming him with her usual morning smile and almost dragged him to the dining table.

"Here Jalal, take your tea". Handing over a cup of steaming Darjeeling tea to him, Ruquaiya dragged a chair and sat opposite to him with her own cup.

"Jalal, aaj bhi subha subha jogging pe jane ki kya zarurat thi?? Aaj toh Salim ka birthday hai na, uske saath to thoda time spent kar sakte the", Ruquaiya complained to Jalal with a puppy face.

Getting up early, going for jogging and then gym, this has been Jalal's usual routine ever since Jodha left him ten years ago.

"Kahan hai Salim?? Abhi bhi so rahe hai kya??", came the concerned father's husky voice after a brief pause.

"Nahi", sipping tea from her cup Ruquaiya replied," washroom mein hai. Uth gayi hai vo. Par tum toh use wish kar sakte the na subha utha kar. Kitna khush hota vo".

"Ruquaiya, vo main thoda"..., "Bas Jalal ab bohat ho gaya", cutting him in between, Ruquaiya started, "beeti baato ko bhul jao, Jodha ne jo kiya use bhulne ki koshish karo Jalal. Apne zindagi mein aage badho".

Jalal's face hardened at the mention of Jodha's name and watching that from the corner of her eyes Ruquaiya went on, "kitna khush hota mera beta agar aaj uske birthday par uska mom aur dad uae ek saath wish karte toh".

"Bas Ruquaiya, vahi ruk jaao", yelled Jalal almost at the top of his voice, and then continued in a terrifying low tone," ye mat bhulo ke tum sirf kehne ke liye uske mom ho, uska asli ammijaan koi aur hai, aur tumhe vo jagah kabhi haasil nahi hogi".

Seeing Ruquaiya almost at the verge of crying, Jalal came to his senses and realized what he had done.Running fingers through his brownish, slightly long hair he tried to cool himself.

Phewww... here goes the first chapter of the sory...

I know I am a pathetic writer and all rotten eggs and tomatoes are accepted...

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