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Pba123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

A very nice update

Everything is going pleasantly

But by taking zakira's side she may irk jalal

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jhansi_chowdary

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

wowww very nice update di
jallu's teasing session is awesome but jo was very harsh to him no worries sab kuch theek ho rha hi itni jaldi nickname "theeka mirchi" but it is vry nice but atlast zakira hope she doesnt destroy the relation which is started now only
thanks for pm di
now going to HFL

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meera

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Wow!!fabulous update di👏👏 i liked akdha part vry much tha dialouges the way ur writing was awesome di 😉 and update soon di.

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Rutuja Deo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Sammyyy...🤗

aww amazing update... finally things are settled down slowly betn them..M soo happy...😊

but don't forget Push-Pull beech beech mai.. 😆

Zakira twist hmmm.. let's see kya hota hai.. 😉

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_SJM_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

UnRes 😳

Hey Samy 🤗

Great chapter😃 It looks like Jodha is melting a little bit😳

She was about to leave from there, when he caught her hand. She turned around to look at him.

Jalal (smiling) - Apology accepted

She gave him a slight smile, and began preparing for college.

I like this part the most 😳

Jalal - Why are you so bothered by what I think? Weren't you the one who blatantly ignored me? Or is it that you actually care about how I feel?

Jodha (frowning) - Don't you be under that impression, Mr Mohammed. I just...

Jalal - I think you are probably trying to put up a faade of how much you hate me, but secretly, you can't help but seek my attention🤣🤣

Jodha attention seeker😆

Plss update soon 😃

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Edited by _SJM_ - 10 years ago

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Hermione Granger

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

u doing vry good n thnks for pm

Edited by haya_gorgeous - 10 years ago

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ramya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Nice chapter next time pls pm me.

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Very nice update samy.finally jajo r coming close 😉 haina.poor zakira lets see how jo saves her .update soon dear.thnx for ur pm 🤗

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alinakhan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Wow sam wonderful update 👏👏👏

Jodha ki bolti bandh.😆😆

Kya attitude h lol sahi jarahe h 😛

Jodha ka sorry.😲 I was like um i dreaming. 😕😳 Chalo achi shuruwat hui . Sukanya was v funny. 😆 She reminds me of something😛 n u knw what i mean 😉😉😉

All their nok jhoks were gud👍🏼

U have written v well sam 👏⭐️

Loved d update ❤️

But y it was short re. 😡

U knw how much i love dis story😎

Great job sam👍🏼

Keep it up n pls update soon 😳

Love ya 🤗

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meenakaliswaran

@meenakaliswaran

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Hi buddy

Thanks for the PM

wonderful work both ur

every character is blended well

jodha is coming to make her mind with all

But oh god what have happened zakira is in trouble now who is the behind this crime.

will jodha find him and get him behind the bar?

this is also jalal trick like in suriya to make jodha feel hurt?

Are Adham plan is he the culprit?

oh god u made us blabing till ur next update!

this is the good skill of writer and u made it

but pls make ur update next time little soon so that i can keep clam without irritating u to update yar

so cool update 😳

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