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Deepa

@Deepasub

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

@ kalgi thanks dearie for the tips on posting pics from ipad. It finally worked. Though it's a 3 step process, at least works for now.

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@old_charm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Yaar ek toh I have lost interest in the show.. and that has affected my writing too 😭 Plus... itna likh liya hai that feel a bit saturated with writing on JA!😕 But yeah.. in future I'll can surely write OSes.. 😃

And I 've seen ur likes on my ADHY posts.. thanks re.😃

i understand , due to the crap who they call natakiya rupantar many have left😭 it has greatly affected our wonderful writers of IF even after this , there is no improvement from their side 😡

but still i want you to please continue your ffs , if you can please don't abandon them , it would be much better if you end them in few chappys...😊

i still remember your OS ban gaye ho tum mera khuda & an ss memoirs of her...😳

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Deepa

@Deepasub

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

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Yay! Waiting for next update.
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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
😆Hi Hema... Love U sweet heart for such awesome chapter😛 I loved every bit of it...
>> Awwe.. thanks Bhavii...

U R Jodha and Jalal both are master mind... Tom and Jerry fits perfectly for them...😆
>> he he.. 😆

Badepapa and Jodha's conversation really touched my heart... I love how respectfully Jodha took permission before resignation... and His each and every advice really very practical. U know this entire story seems like real...
>>I love this line.. I love it when u say the story is close to reality.. end of the day it's a story, but I want to keep it as close to reality as possible.. 😉.. yes badepapa is a gem.. 😊
😊 How Jodha accepted change is really wonderful... I am feeling so proud of Jodha... even after loosing her family... her self confident is not moved even a bit... I loved the best part she didn't react immediately and resign... she wait for the right time... She waited for her success ... I loved her witty act.
>> yes dear.. she couldn't make the accuses true by resigning on the spur of moment.. she had to wait for right time.. 😉

Omg... I am so impress with Raj... He is really manipulative... the way he made up rule and lied really commendable... best part he didn't even informed Jalal why Jodha wants to quit... Well done Raj... Yaar I am falling for your Raj😆 How old is he???😆
>> he's forty plus.. 😆

I loved how you have written Jodha's nervousness ... and Jalal's calmness... No doubt he came to office in few hours but the way he reacted really superb...
>> thanks da.. 😳😳

Finally Two strong headed... mastermind ... came in front of each other...
>> haa.. finally.. 😉

I love the way Jalal asked her questions... team money ... long hours... etc... oh god... he is tooo witty... Oh goood... After all this accuses the way he respond as if nothing happen 😲 didn't even apologies... too frustrating...He should have apologize for all this accuses... but he is ego is too big...
>> It's not even ego yaar.. I've generally observed.. most of the managers never admit their mistakes.. they twist and turn words to convince employees.. they seldom directly apologize..

but Jodha is not less... How quickly she came up with further studies... and Jalal cross questions where what. and everything but he will not admit his mistake... he wants her but at his terms and condition... Gunda... hehhehe😆
>> ha ha.. 😆
he is giving her option leave without pay... 😲 Jalal is really something... I am running out of word... chalak kutil dimag... hehehhe... but Jodha used her last weapon... Getting married... finally Jalal gave up... but I can't wait to know what will happen next... Amazing Hema... Yaar U R wonderful writer... I visualize each scene in my mind... superb...👏👏👏

>> Thank you for the beautiful comments dear.. will update soon.. 🤗

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict
BTW... Jo is such a witty smart lady.. Love her.. management management bolkar poora bill faad diya Jalal ke oopar !! 🤣

ha ha.. in Lashy's words.. ishmaart girl 😉

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Rashmi81

@Rashmi81

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Amazing chappy dear.I am speechless.

The story is becoming interesting day by day and at the end of the day we readers are left wanting more.

But when we ask for the update so innocently from you with puppy eyes or like Anjali's innocent kittens ,at that time you are full of Nakhras.😡

No wonder the female protagonist here is the mirror image of the author herself.

So the email of Jo was resignation,Hmmm.. the circumstances under which she typed it ,it is quite understandable.

And then she waited for the right moment too .. now this is an issshmart move.

I am kinda loving this guy,Raj.Hope in future he becomes a dialogue facilitator between these two and Divya might help him.😆

Jodha is a lavangi mirchi.( lavangi mirchi is that small and thin green chilli we get in India and they are very hot ) Poor Jalal ,uska Kya hoga Aage ? 😭He is going to burn his mouth again and again because of her.

But she is just adorable.

And Jalal felt something in his heart when Jo told about her so called marriage ...Kuch kuch hota hai ,it seems.

But if Jo tells everything to Raj then is Raj going to keep it to himself ?

Isse Jaane ke liye hum intezar karenge agle shanivaar ka.

Jahnu meri jaan ...you are sweet rasmalai .

Now update fast and I can't wait .

Edited by Rashmi81 - 10 years ago

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Rashmi81

@Rashmi81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
Rashh...

😆😆 I know it's weekend night.

Lage raho munnabhai.😆

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mishtidoi

@mishtidoi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Rashmi81

😆😆I know it's weekend night.
Lage raho munnabhai.😆

😲 🤣

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Rashmi81

@Rashmi81

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: mishtidoi

😲 🤣

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

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What goes around, comes around... doesn't it?😆

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