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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww Loved it dear. Wonderful piece of writing. Please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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only Two shots?? I just see an intro of Jodha in this update and you have only one more update and epilogue?? I mean THAT'S IT?? 😲😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Najma dii!!! Lovely update!! 🥳 super cute!! Am frm TN didu.. So kno nothing about mumbai train travels!! But its soo goid to hear ur version!!! N.. Who is jalal.. The one at whom jo nodded.. Or d one to whom jo told tym?? May be.. Both ma guesses r wrong!! Continue soon diduu.. Thanks a lott fa d pm🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiii najma read ur other ss based on Benazir track dat ws also lovely cumin 2 dis ff I likd d concept v cute update actuly my native plce is Mangalore bt I ws born and brought up in Mumbai so I knw all d plces v well offcourse of d main city nt suburbs ya and Central station whch u mentiond I usd 2 stay jst 1 station aftr it Grant road actuly nw m in Bangalore cz of my job bt keep updating wonderful chap 😉 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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jalal is the guy her eyes met with!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Najma ,
Such a true description of Mumbai and it's lifeline ...it's locals.While reading it ,the whole picture came live in front of me .
Great,keep it up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

only Two shots?? I just see an intro of Jodha in this update and you have only one more update and epilogue?? I mean THAT'S IT?? 😲😲

Jaanu.

Chill baby. When I started, I intended two parts. Now, let me see how long this goes. Not too long. Maybe another part longer? Ya. So chill. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27

hiii najma read ur other ss based on Benazir track dat ws also lovely cumin 2 dis ff I likd d concept v cute update actuly my native plce is Mangalore bt I ws born and brought up in Mumbai so I knw all d plces v well offcourse of d main city nt suburbs ya and Central station whch u mentiond I usd 2 stay jst 1 station aftr it Grant road actuly nw m in Bangalore cz of my job bt keep updating wonderful chap 😉 😛



Thats wonderful! Then you could tell me something about how things work there... Please, would you do so?😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thats wonderful! Then you could tell me something about how things work there... Please, would you do so?😃


ya y nt sure wil let u knw I dnt hav ny prob 😉 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27


ya y nt sure wil let u knw I dnt hav ny prob 😉 😃

Gossip actually. Do put in a word sometimes. Here only. That will be enough. Thanks dear!

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