AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 5- Chap 18-20

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#611

a lovely update pri di...
thank God jodha is saved...
jalal is finally taking her to Mumbai...
loved the update completely...
jodha's pain of having to live without her son and jalal's pain of not being able to love jodha, not being able to sooth her hurt soul is very well depicted...
nd last of all waiting for jodha's meeting with rico...
so update the next chapter soon...
nd thanks for the pm di!!🤗

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nankulkarni

@nankulkarni

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#612

awesome
awesome
awesome
finally jodha is safe
waiting for next
update soon

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#613

fantastic update...
i hope jodha accepts jalal...
continue soon...

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Krina

@cuty1997

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#614

it's totally awesome update dear.👏

finally jodha is safe and going Mumbai.😊

jodha is very strong mother also.waiting for when jodha meet Rico.😊

i hope jalal get his jodha soon.😛 and jodha also forgot jalal for his did with her.😊

thanks to pm me dear.😳

waiting for your next update😃

update soon.😉

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edkv

@edkv

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#615

hey dear thanks 4 posting our much awaited update 😃 will comment later after reading 😳

Edited by fairy216 - 10 years ago

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ssna

@ssna

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#616

Wow

dat was awesome dear.

finally mother n son going 2 meet.

d coffee part was cool

I just hope jalal keeps his hand off jodha aur he will get killed by her.

I like when jalal talk 2 jodha when he is angry I mean we get private moments too.

but when he talks softly I dont like may be in your story jalal is a very storng n rough character datsy.

How about u put some romance in it I mean jalal doing flirting with jodha n our poor jodha cant say anything dat will be grt fun 2 watch.

I wont say dat u give d next update of desire soon

u know na I m so kind hearted

so so now give d update of your other story. lol

chal chal pull your laptop n start d update.

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#617

hurrre akhir update mil hi gayi par next chapter ko jaada late mat karana 🥳 and nice chapter.
hey jodha kab tak aise hi rothi rahegi.thoda use bhi jalal ki feelings ka ahesas karao.main chahati hu ki jodha bhi jalal ke true love aur care ko samajhe in sort ab dono ki love story ko hate se love ki taraf aage badao😳 and plz update soon because i am waiting😳