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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Love U 😛 , i was crying by the end

Thank you🤗

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: lashy

Darling those lines in blue are given the most rejoicing lines award.. it's a never before and never after moment.. I didn't say they are the best in expression or intensity.. they are the stress busters.. 😆😉
and traffic light turning green is a symbolism like everything is back in place, this time for good and for better.. 😳

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: lashy

Yesh... that was one part all three times that I read... never had to edit... like the whole scene just came out naturally...

Both men in trouble... both men (ok one mainly) kept apart by ego... but both brought together by the 'one they care's' plight!

Not much said or exchanged... but what was said changed a lot of things!

yeah.. very natural, very poignant, yet poised.. inspiring words from Bhagwant.. 👏👏
that moment I felt Jalal got an extended family apart from his ammi.. once everything is back to normalcy Jalal is no less than 4th son to Jo's father..

Jalal walks into Jodha's life with hearts of love.. Jodha walks into his life with same love + an extended home.. bless them both.. lucky chaps.. 🤗

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: lashy

Now now... my DEAREST DEAREST tomboy... no aansoon 'imagine hugs!'😳
I'll come back to your reply in detail...but first this!

Wait a sec - you asking how she woke up?
She woke up because of Jalal's repeated never-giving-up efforts re...

See - once he's reconciled with 'life' and its unpredictability after bhaiyya's sermon, he picked up the pieces and started living life on more normal terms. But Jodha was always there.. part of his everyday routine too...
So he kept up with office work, police chakkar, phyio appointments, ammi etc...
and also this (we get to read about his new routine - in the physio's clinic) means he goes to her everyday... spends an hour with her... talks to her... plays her the clip...

Just enough time. To get to the hospital for his 5:30 - 6:30 pm daily catch-up session. To chat with Jo about his day. Play her their favourit-est video clip.

It was that video clip that helped her come out it..
that's why her first lines - the ones she wakes up telling the nurses - are the lines from the clip na

'I want to celebrate my 63rd birthday! (with Jalal)'
😳
Only, it didn't happen overnight.. or a week... took a month... but it was 'healing' not 'magic' remember!

P.S. also the whole thing becomes a circle/cycle... Jalal was about to delete that video clip during that break up - which he didn't... turns out that birthday clip was her 'favouritest' sentiment in the whole wide world! 😉

I thought this video clip would help in bringing stalker out, but it didn't.. so it was bound to bring Jodha out of coma.. finally one open end closed.. now, diamond ring and shirt.. pineapple halwa, as we discussed, let's give the chance to sasuma.. 😆

by the way.. what about robbie's painting.. is it also going to resurrect? 😉

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: al_pal
varsha is going to love abdul now 😆

I have no ummeed.. upar se, if she doesn't yell at everyone for being missing when Jodha regained conscious, that is more than enough..

hospital hours, office, work, all these don't count for our varshu.. 😆

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Divi stupendous take 10.. and a bow from me for each take.. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Rashmi81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Shradz,

I was a bit busy with pre Diwali shopping .You know all that stuff we need to bring for making Diwali goodies and all.So I started reading your update at 11.00 in the night and has just finished at 1.30 in the night.So tomm ,I will write my long comment.Because I am going to read it again,can't just get enough of it ,yeh dil maange more.I was so so so so so so so so impressed by these two updates so I thought to write a chotusa comment before I retire for the day.

These were the loveliest chapters thinker - e- Khaas .Love you just love you for them .

And first I was very angry with you that you put my Jo in coma and her long soft beautiful tresses too gone,😭But now I am not angry after reading the entire thing.😛

And renu Kya kam thi Jalal ke liye, jo yeh physiotherapist bhi ...,... 😡

I thought Ruku ke baad Aatifa aa gayi.😡

Anyways I just love you and this my special Jalal..And tomm will write more,

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divyavm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: al_pal
divi today is party day ,take 10 😊.you said it all beautifully
Cherry on top was race of life 👏,mention of parallel was beautiful we all search for some symbol like jahnu also found one Green light .
Men you girls think so differently and pen it down so beautifully ,I am glade I joined to this beautiful group of people ,love you all my desires.
Keep this energy with you all the time and keep on smiling my dear.🤗

Thanks Pals ... glad you liked it
It was Lashy's beautiful writing that inspired me
Desires? Autocorrect going on? 😉😆
Yes, I will try to keep my energy up ... you guys all help me with this

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divyavm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Thanks so much Vani. Do drop by when you can ... or else I completely understand if you are busy. I too cannot do a daily take these days. Or else, feel free to leave a like if you read it ... and I will know you read it . Take care.

Originally posted by: Bobby13
I am doing good Divya. I was too busy with Office and house shifting. We shifted to new house recently and was busy in setting up the house. Still watch Jodha Akbar and still visit forum. But read only selected posts which I am sure does not upset me. I generally can not take too much of one sidedness and hence scared to read posts here. I read your posts whenever I come across one and always loved them for your fair take and positivity in them. But could not respond to it and I will try to change that now onwards.