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Originally posted by: chandgothia

Amazing write up mrs.tokas...job well done...simply loved it...eagerly waiting for the next update...update soon...make it as romantic as u can...loved it...

Super excited for the next one...update soon...

Originally posted by: dharshu

Pariii!!! 🤗 Such a cute chapter!! Loved it!! Ur precap!!! Awww!! Cant wait!! Update soon!!! Thanx fa d pm pari!!! 🤗

Amazing chapter, so Jalaal is possessive about Jo and the way he hurt Ruku for scaring his wife and warning her.. Jo is also posessive and good that Jalaal wanted to take JO outside & Jo is is happy she is going to spend some time with each other outside..

Originally posted by: --Mrs.Tokas--

thanks arpita 😉 yes that note was for you dear😃 i'll update soon😆😆

Chapter 7: The imperfect date with perfect end

JALAL and Jodha on car,

JALAL was enjoying riding the car and thinking about his surprise. His rejoice let him get lost in thinking about the surprise but he was also careful for driving. Here Jodha was enjoying the journey and admiring each nature beauty, houses, shops and everything they are passing through like a small girl. More than surprise Jodha was enjoying the journey with no tention for destination. She was very happy to finally go out with JALAL and her happiness can be seen with her blushing cheeks and shining eyes.

After some time of admiring a continuous nature beauty she looked on JALAL's side finding him lost and smiling. Jodha loved this sight of her husband but a mischievous butterfly was roaming on her head and also too lost while driving can be dangerous.

So she moved near JALAL and shakes his shoulder while saying -"JALAL"

Aww JALAL was wide awaken and broken to sense. He saw the place and said shockingly abruptly - "Freaking goodness, what I have done?"

Jodha widened her eyes and started giggling, she got an idea that JALAL went too ahead in his day dreaming.

She holds her giggle and said teasingly, "I wonder how you work."

JALAL looked at him furiously and gave a fake angry smile - "Keep wondering - Jodha in wonderland."

Jodha said more teasingly shaking his shoulder for his attention -"Or how about JALAL in wonderland, sounds great, we also saw a demo now."

Saying this she started laughing.

Aww her tease was making JALAL goes angry, he took you turn and started driving for place he left behind.

He gave an angry and furious looks to Jodha signalling him that he didn't liked the joke she said.

Jodha straighten herself and stop laughing, she said - "What can I do? At least I woke you up so don't give me this angry looks."

JALAL said angrily-"Ya all are my fault and you are innocent. "

Jodha folded her hand like agreeing and said teasingly- "Good you accepted your fault."

JALAL stopped the car and looked at Jodha with furious - "Jodha do you think is it a joke. We are way ahead from our destination plus we are very far away from residence area. If you look around us you will find our car in middle of lonely jungle. It's already after noon, when we will reach our destination and where we will reach our place, this all is not as cool as seems to be. Once the day will break and night falls which will be soon because it is half passed day this all nature beauty which you was admiring will turn out to be a dangerous place. You will not even feel like looking at them. So if you don't mind to stop teasing me and keep quiet for a while so that I can drive faster than it will be helpful."

Jodha looked around this time and she was influenced by JALAL's word and now she realised he was right, the place does look lonely to eat away all travellers. She gulped some water from bottle that they brought and she dried her sweat.

She looked at JALAL and moves near him and asked lovingly - "JALAL btw where were we need to go."

JALAL answered quickly without breaking his eyes from road-"Mohammad hotels."

Jodha was shocked and opened her mouth wide. She shouted like mad -"What"

Her what' was so big that JALAL almost lost his balance on car and got hit by tree making his car engine goes hot. Now he knows that his car will work no longer, he looked at Jodha with very angry and furious looks stiffing his nerves and hand. He banged his stiff hand hardly on car's side and closed his eyes to control his anger. Jodha was scared and nervous looking all action of JALAL. He turned around Jodha and saw her making puppy baby face. He got more furious by her baby face. He kept bending on her while Jodha kept going back.

JALAL said - "Jodha why so big what, I mean I told Mohammad hotel and not some weird place so you got so shocked."

Jodha explained- "Actually I saw while coming Mohammad Hotel and thought to ask you up but then thought why to trouble you by showing your working place even on Sunday. But seriously we were going there and thinking it not the reaction came out."

Jodha smiled lovingly and pampered JALAL's shoulder enquiringly- "JALAL I am Jodha... Jodha... your wife to whom you take care of, right remember na."

JALAL saw at his shoulder and looked at Jodha asking her from eyes to remove her hand. Jodha removed her hand and both straighten.

JALAL holds his head from his hand, he cannot think at a moment. His head was spinning as he was with beautiful wife at middle of jungle. He leaned and rested on his seat.

He came out of the car and Jodha came behind him, she was scared. He saw the car which was useless now and looked at Jodha and said teasingly and rather taunting- "Wow, so Jodha remove your kurta, we will romance because that is only left for us doing here."

Jodha looked him shockingly and asked - "JALAL are you serious?"

JALAL went near Jodha and started to act as if he is removing her dress and said - "What you think so?"

Jodha went back and said stammering- "JALAL please stop scaring me."

JALAL holds her near him holding her waist and started approaching her. Jodha closed her eyes and she was scared thinking that is his husband is serious to make love in middle of jungle at time when they are stuck.

JALAL took his lips near her ears and softly bite her and said- "This was your punishment for your big what."

He left her losing her balance a bit but not so much that she falls down. She saw at him finding him giving smirk. She gives him angry and sad looks both at same time for his mischief.

She leaned down on car facing straight not in mood to face him. JALAL giggled and said - "Good it will make you silent and that will give me some rest to think for our next action."

She gave no reaction showing him that she is angry with his mischief. JALAL was laughing over her act. He shook his head childishly and smirks while seeing her.

He took a phone and saw there is no network. He moved his phone all around for network but cannot find get a network in his phone.

He ordered Jodha while walking ahead- "Jodha I am here in search of network, I will not go far but please you sit in the car and close the windows of the car."

He even forgot for second that his wife was angry and without seeing her back he started walking all lost for his network.

He went ahead a bit too much searching for his network, he finally found a network and he called Abdul and explaining said him that he lost a way for some consequences and his car got stuck, he also explained their location from hotel and cut the call relieved a bit. He was lucky that Abdul was in hotel so that he will not take as much time to reach here. He came behind and saw his wife not leaning on car. He sensed something dangerous and he got all reason to get scared when he found his wife not on the car.

He find all around finding his wife nowhere. He started searching her like mad and his fear was increasing. His level of patience was also increasing for Jodha. He shouted her name like mad and now went inside the woods to search for her.

JALAL was scared and running here and there, he was breathing heavily and now his body was not giving him any support to run and search for her more. The woods were making the place lonely and dark and this was making him scared. He was cursing himself for everything. He stand still now taking support of nearby tree from one hand and pressing stomach from his other free hand. He was breathing heavily and he bends down looking to ground. His sweat was touching ground. He thought of phone and then also realised he needs to search for network and if he even searched the network then her wife phone should also have the network, then he also realised he not even have her phone no. thanks to his every time ignorance to this relation.

His eyes now became red and first time he realised the importance of her in his life. He cannot even think to why and when she became his so big obsession. He straightens and looked around the woods giving last glance for Jodha. He falls down on his knees shouting Jodha. He was angry and sad both together. Just then he heard a voice of her wife's laughing loudly teasing him. He turned around finding his wife coming out from one hidden long bushes.

She came near to and now JALAL stood up looking at her angry. He stiffs his nerves as badly and saw Jodha giggling and laughing all around him.

She said him - "This was my pay back and a better one than you. I seriously got you."

JALAL saw her all around and he caught her shoulders tightly and pinned her very hardly on tree giving her pain. She shouted very loudly - "JALAL"

She was yelling in pain and she saw JALAL whose eyes were now red in pain. He brought her near him and said - "I felt same Jodha. This is not your Mumbai or home where you can keep teasing. This is me your husband Mr. Jalaluddin Mohammad who himself don't know that how much enemies he earned in his whole lifetime and some of them gifted from elders. This is JALAL who had thousand affairs and thousand people who is jealous of him."

He holds her shoulder tightly and brought her near him and said her very angrily - "You know what for you be in any danger name is enough, Mrs. Jodha Jalaluddin Mohammad. Did you got it clearly and you hell scare out of me Jodha."

Saying this he left her harshly falling her down rubbing her back towards harsh thick tree woods. He got rashes on her back and her kurta also torn in middle small small one making her bare skin to get rash from tree.

She was crying very badly while falling she looks up finding JALAL very angry still, he stood her up without noticing that her back is getting more rash from trees. He not even know that her wife's back got hurt so badly, he was lost in his anger.

JALAL holds her shoulder giving her hand marks harshly, he brought her near him and said - "Jodha I told you don't bring my worst side out from which even I scared of."

Saying this they looked at each other. Jodha was crying for leaving her and JALAL was angry, soon he realised that he gave her pain by treating her very harshly. He left her and saw Jodha crying in pain very badly. He tried to touch her body to carry her in his arms back to car but he noticed the rashes she got the moment he touched her back. He touched her back all everywhere giving her pain with every touch. Jodha was yelling by his touch. He notice by his touch that how badly he hurt her and her kurta was also destroyed to hide her completely. He was lucky to have his scarf, he removed it and tried to cover her but Jodha defended JALAL to do so. Well JALAL knew his wife was not wrong but even he is more stubborn than Jodha. He covered her back from his scarf.

She was breathing heavily and he took her in his arms, his touch was giving her pain in the back and she was yelling. Seeing her condition JALAL's heart was paining inside somewhere. He cursed himself inside for her condition. He made her sit on the back sit comfortably and he sat in the front.

She was fuming in the pain and anger. JALAL was checking on her in between. Then Abdul reached there after about a long hours. Abdul rushed to them for their help.

He instructed him to call the mechanic and ask them to pick this car. Then he carried Jodha in his arms and went to sit to the car which Abdul brought. Jodha was angry and seeing other side but JALAL was possessively carrying her.

They reached the hotel till late night. On the way he had picked up one white gown for Jodha from one of the random shop.

JALAL instructed Abdul - "Abdul I am taking Jodha to the resting room. Get our dinner ready."

Abdul nodded his head

Then he carried Jodha again all the way to his room. Everyone was only staring them to make Jodha embarrassed. JALAL was walking unaffected with all the staring eyes on them.

On their way the mysterious manly eyes was also staring them or rather keeping an eyeful watch on them.

JALAL made her stand on the passage and opened the door of his resting room.

JALAL said - "This is my personal room over here. Come inside we will stay here tonight."

He drags Jodha inside with him.

JALAL said - "Get freshen up here. I will send your things with a maid just take them. I will also send some ointment for you to apply on your scars. Take your time and come down. I will freshen in some other room."

He left her there. She looked around the room. It was quite decent room with all the necessary things. Jodha thought in her mind - "He is quite rich but a heartless man."

She remembers his behaviour back on the jungle. She felt sad remembering it. The tears started trailing from her eyes automatically.

Then she heard a knock at the door. She instructed to come inside.

She did not bother to see who it was and just turned around to go to the washroom. She knew it must be some maid that JALAL was supposed to send.

Still she looked turned her eyes sideways to see who it was and yes she was some maid.

She said - "You can leave after keeping my gown and everything here on the bed."

The servant nodded her head agreeing her. Then she went to the washroom

When she went inside the washroom the maid removed one folded piece of paper and kept it on the table near the door. It was written Please read Mrs. JALAL'. She smile mysteriously and went from there.

After freshen up Jodha came back and wore white gown. It was lose white gown which covers her up entirely. She breathed reluctantly and went to the dressing. She started combing her hair with the comb lied there. She knew it is her JALAL's personal room.

All the while she only thought about JALAL and JALAL. The night was only getting darker with thunder appearing always.

Shiver ran down her spine hearing the thunder. She came to her sense from JALAL's thought and heard the door knob. She looked behind and found JALAL standing there.

JALAL asked - "Are you ready for a dinner."

Jodha looked at him with anger. She said angrily - "I am not hungry."

JALAL looked around controlling his anger.

He said - "Jodha Jalaluddin Mohammad you are angry on me but not on the food, right. Come soon and don't force me to."

Jodha fumed and said raising her voice a little - "Me to what JALAL? Tell me what you will do?"

JALAL closed her eyes and then said opening it - "You left me no choice."

He came inside and carried Jodha in his arms. Jodha said - "JALAL please stop forcing me." She hit her fist on his chest and tried to come out of his grip but all efforts were vain.

JALAL said looking at her - "I know the day was bad Jodha and I can't go back to make it right. But I was scared seeing you missing from there. Jodha I can't see you in pain. I fear to lose you Jodha. Jodha our date may be went kaput but for God sake can we end it in good notes to start a new fresh."

He looked at Jodha passionately waiting for her reply. Jodha stared at him for a good minutes and then said - "Can you keep me down. I can walk till the restaurant."

JALAL smiled and said keeping her down - "You are sweet Jodha."

Jodha said - "That doesn't mean I had forgive you. Let's go."

They went down to the restaurant for their dinner. They sat on the table but the strange pair of manly eyes was only staring them. He had worn long jacket and a round long cap. He stared at them for few minutes and left from there.

JALAL kept looking at Jodha and she was restlessly moving her head everywhere. Everyone was staring at them. Jodha said looking at him - "Everyone is seeing us can you see down."

JALAL said - "I can't take my eyes off from you."

Jodha said stretching her nerves - "Yes you can't take your eyes away from me now but there back on the jungle you can leave me alone."

JALAL answered without taking his gaze of from her - "I was searching for the network Jalal. Anyways leave everything and have dinner."

Jodha said - "There is no food in our table."

JALAL said - "They are bringing."

Jodha said - "I am still not hungry."

JALAL said - "I know how much hungry you must be?"

Jodha said - "Why you want to argue with me."

JALAL said - "Why don't you listen to me?"

Jodha was about to answer when the waiter came with the food. He kept the food nicely and serves them. After that he left from there.

JALAL said - "Start."

Jodha said stubbornly - "I don't like either from this."

JALAL looked around and then drank a water in one go. JALAL said - "Do you want me to feed you like a baby."

Jodha looked at him and said softly but still firmly - "I want you to treat me like a wife Jalaluddin Mohammad."

She started him firmly. JALAL too stare at her.

Then breaking the eye lock JALAL said - "Please don't make a scene here."

Jodha looked around and realised their place. She took a long breathe and drank some spoon from her side of the soup. Then she said - "I am done."

JALAL stared at her and took a long breath. It is needless to argue with her now.

He said - "Ok let's go." He too hardly drank some spoon from his side of the soup.

Jodha said - "Why you are not hungry? The way you were saying food food I thought you must be too hungry."

JALAL said - "I am full Jodha Jalaluddin Mohammad. Come let's go."

Jodha stood up and walked back to her room without waiting for JALAL. JALAL followed her back to the room.

He locked the room and turned around to see Jodha sitting stubbornly on the bed. She is so stubborn. Then without saying anything Jodha went to the washroom. The night was only getting darker with thunder storm.

Now JALAL turned around and unfortunately saw the folded piece of paper written - Please read Mrs. JALAL'. The heart started slamming out of his chest. Who the hell can write this letter to his wife? He was about to open when he heard Jodha's footstep. He immediately kept it inside his shirt's pocket and turned around. Jodha came out of the washroom and headed to the dressing table. JALAL stood there silently when he saw ointment this time lying on the bed.

He walked towards the bed and saw the ointment unpacked. He said looking at Jodha - "Haven't you applied it yet."

Jodha said coming to him - "Shift I want to sleep."

JALAL said - "Not before you apply this ointment."

Jodha looked at him and said - "I am sleepy."

JALAL said - "Why the hell you are so stubborn?"

He forgot about the piece of the paper till now.

Jodha said - "Why the hell you are so rude?"

He caught her from the shoulder and said pulling her towards him - "Jodha will you put it yourself or I have to strip you down to put it."

Jodha said with equal anger - "Go ahead to strip me I am your bloody wife."

After hearing her JALAL said calmly leaving her hand - "Jodha can we sleep peacefully. Jodha we cannot keep fighting entire our life. We have two ways first move together forgetting everything and second to keep fighting over same issue. Jodha I believe to move further and rest is up to you."

She keeps staring at him for good minutes and then politely turned around. JALAL opened the ointment and applied it on her nape.

She yawned on other side. She said - "I am sleepy now. I want to sleep." Without waiting for his answer she went to sleep on the bed. She groaned in pain when rested on the bed but sleep took over her eyes soon.

JALAL nodded his head and turned to keep the ointment somewhere. He removed his shirt and kept it somewhere. He called the Abdul and instructed him something about the morning.

Then after everything he turned back to see Jodha fast asleep. He went to sleep beside her. He lied on the bed and stared her. He remembered his day with her. It was indeed an imperfect date which hadn't planned but still he had her beside her at the end of the day. There is some spark between them which holds them together every time at end of the day ever after major fights. He holds her hand and brings it near her face. He keep staring her innocent baby sleeping face. Then he left her hand and covered them both with the blanket. He turned her around and made her sleep comfortably on his arms making her face to place on his chest. She was comfortably moving in his warm bare chest. She knowingly or unknowingly wrapped her hands around his chest and both went to the sleep peacefully. This was first time rather even after so bad day and date that they were romantically close with each other.

Precap : Akdha's passionate Sr

first of all sorry for the mistakes guys. So howz it a longy shongy update as i'll not update till next week😆😆and for the precap you have to wait for one week as i' ve to think before write this part ☺️

Originally posted by: arpita1226

But I didn't black mailed you 😲

Originally posted by: abhi786

Amazing chapter, so Jalaal is possessive about Jo and the way he hurt Ruku for scaring his wife and warning her.. Jo is also posessive and good that Jalaal wanted to take JO outside & Jo is is happy she is going to spend some time with each other outside..

Originally posted by: arpita1226

Where is the update

No way I am going to wait for 1 week that also for sr I want it this week only coming to update ya it was long romantic filled with passion and mysterio and who were keeping an eye on them

Originally posted by: --Mrs.Tokas--

not that one dearie but second one with was above title😕