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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi


then what about this ? update this one also ...😊😊😊

i 'll update this one also and my new one too😃😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago




Chapter 3: Jodha Long Waiting Days.


In morning Jodha woke up finding her dress dori, lehenga's button all to be loosened and she was properly sleeping underneath blanket. She remembered is she was very much tired and slept waiting for JALAL like that only without proper arrangement to sleep. She found windows closed and her belongings jewels and dupatta on sofa. She rubbed her eyes and searched a clock and saw it was too late. She got panicked and said - "10, Jodha mad girl you was so tired. I am dead what, how others will think about me."
She got up hurriedly, took a fine decent saree from cupboard and went to washroom for brush and bath. She came out about after half an hour and saw her room cleaned and Dai Maa waiting for her.
She smiled and asked - "Dai Maa did you helped me last night to make my sleep comfortable. I hadn't slept for 1 week and all I do is cry with my mom and family. I really don't know when I closed my eyes and..."
She gave a pause and asked softly with hesitant- "Where is Jalal?"
Dai Maa placed a milk and butter on table and asked Jodha to sit on dressing table.
After Jodha sat Dai Maa started drying her hair whereas Jodha was having milk.
Jodha continued- "Dai Maa please answer me."
Dai Maa answered caressing her long traces of hair with towel- "Beta it must be JALAL who made you comfortable. He came too late but checks out finding you sleeping all ruined. He was also worried that you didn't have your dinner. He asked me to take good care of you."
Jodha placed her milk glass down and started scrabbling table with her long nails. Shyly she asked - "Did he saw me." She remembered how last she can feel someone very near to her but cannot make it out due to sleep.
She continued hurriedly- "I thought someone is around me last night. So Jalal..."
She gave a pause and asked - "Where is he?"
Dai Maa answered -"He left for office but he will accompany you on lunch."
Dai Maa finished drying her hair and said- "I have other work to finish. I take a leave now from you."
She went from room after drying her hair.
Jodha was little saddened and she ordered to take her breakfast back. All she had is half glass of milk.
She was confused, sad, shocked. She doesn't know what to do?
She got up and opened her window. As soon as she opens a light and cool breeze touches her bare neck.
She saw a garden which was shining in light.
She got out of the room and started exploring each room of and floor of her house. Every where she goes she found one thing to be common- JALAL's photo everywhere. Her eye catching room she found was library. The library was huge with lots of books from around the world. She was checking collections of books Jalal keeps.
The mansion was well decorated as a dream house where a ray of light enters with cool breeze. The back of house accompanied a huge jungle. From library you can see back of Mansion too. She admired house roaming around here and there. Several times she lost her way and also find. It was total bhul bhuliaya ( Maze ) for her.
She was coming down finding Dai Maa calling her name loudly but softly- "Dai Maa."
She was finding kitchen, she turned around and started walking backward finding kitchen, Dai Maa.
Suddenly she banged with something and fell down in someone's arms. She closed her eyes and hides her face with hands.
Her breathe was rapidly racing and her feet was getting cold. Suddenly she felt someone had taken her totally in his arms and started moving. She removed her hand and opened her eyes and saw moving house. Probably from her side it was like house moving. She was about to shout but got surprised seeing at face.
She gulped her water of her mouth and looked at him with open mouth. He carefully placed her in chair of lunch table and said- "You could have fallen down. Where was your attention? If I would have not reached in time you could have fallen banging on some things like sofa or table."
He was talking so casually with her but Jodha was finding it difficult to talk to him as it was her handsome JALAL. Her breathing changed profusely. Her lips got dried and eyes got bigger. She was not getting correct words to put. She keep staring JALAL who have this capability to look cute, handsome, evil, good all at the same time. His eyes speak volumes and his smirk work in his favor positively.
JALAL moved his hand up and down to bring Jodha from her dreams. Jodha got out of her lost world and saw at table placed with food and fruits.
JALAL sat opposite to Jodha. The table was too big for two to eat. Servant came and started serving JALAL. Jodha was seeing food all around while JALAL was seeing Jodha's behaviour. Jodha was too shy and why not after she is newlywed bride and JALAL's casual behaviour making her shyer. Servant started serving Jodha. After serving JALAL ordered all servants to leave them alone. Jodha's body got a shiver hearing JALAL's order. Well though JALAL not spoke anything but admired Jodha who hardly had anything in shy. The lunch was quite affair. After lunch JALAL asked Dai Maa to bring something on her ears.
Dai Maa came with half glass of milk.
JALAL placed milk in front of Jodha and ordered her- "Finish your milk."
Jodha looked at JALAL in shock.
JALAL continued- "I said to finish your milk."
Jodha did as he said seeing that he is pissed off.
JALAL got up from chair and caressed her hair keeping it behind her ears.
He said- "Dai Maa told me you didn't have your food and breakfast properly. Jodha I have lots of commitment to finish. I cannot be here daily but you need to take care of yourself or you will get weak. Also please do not roam around like this that you hurt yourself. Take care, I take leave from you."
Saying this he dried her mouth from handkerchief and headed to go back office. He not even looked back once but Jodha wants him to look back once.
Her eyes were searching for JALAL to turn back. She cannot get what type of relation she will share with him. Her eyes filled with tears whose reason was still unknown to her.
She got up from table and went straight to her room. She hides her face under pillow and started crying.
Dai Maa went behind her and peek her from door. She went ahead and pampered her and make her got up and hugged her. She can understand Jodha very well.
Dai Maa thought to herself and said in mind- "God I wish JALAL never do this Jodha. She is his wife. I wish he gives some time to her and not closed her in beautiful golden cage."
In office
JALAL got call from Adi (adham) -"JALAL Mr. Mehra had arranged her daughter's engagement party in hotel. Everyone invited and a special invitation for you and bhabhiji as special guest in the party."
JALAL answered - "When is party Adi (adham)?"
Adi (adham) - "The party is tomorrow at night 10.00 pm. I had also sent you a party invitation card. He wants to personally invite you but I guess you went to home when he came to your office so he met me and handed this to me."
JALAL nodded and said- "Ya I went to home for a lunch. Ok we be there."
He cuts the call.
The rest of the day was only work for him with asking where about his wife with Dai Maa in middle.
For Jodha it was very long and lonely day. In evening a smile twinkled at her face to meet JALAL again. She wished JALAL to spend some quality time with him.
She gets herself dressed in night wear, silky baby pink sleeveless night gown. She placed her long traces very nicely on her right shoulder. She waited for JALAL on hall sitting on sofa and reading some books that she carried from library. The book title was very interesting- "A Journey of Passionate Love."
Aww she don't whether this feelings for her JALAL was due to because she got married or does she always have this since childhood and got fade with time but she was lot more attracted towards her JALAL. Also seeing JALAL getting so casual and caring on her was melting her heart and also making her shy both at same time. JALAL was getting magical dream that she wants to fulfill by loving him.
It was late 10 and she was waiting for JALAL to have dinner together, she don't know when but again she closed her eyes sleeping since she was too tired roaming around mansion in morning and crying. Once again her sleep not gave her company to see JALAL.
Around 11 JALAL arrived where all servants went except Dai Maa. He came to know how she was waiting for him to arrive for dinner. Dinner was kept as it is on table. He ordered Dai Maa to go and sleep.
He saw a girl sleeping in sofa with book fallen down. He picked up the book and placed it in table. Something pinched JALAL as no girl before waited so badly to meet him. He caressed her head and wakes her up slowly but all went vain.
He gave a smirk and said - "Sleeping beauty."
Her lips were dried perfectly to kiss. JALAL was confused to why he feels something different for this girl when this marriage is just a will for him. Why desire to kiss her when he has no such intention to do. Well he picked him up and took her to bed room. He placed her to bed and covered her with blanket and went to second room to sleep.
The next morning Jodha wakes up early this time at 7.00 am. She got ready and but as usual JALAL had already left for office. The days were getting too long for her to pass. There is nothing for her to do. Beside exploring rooms and reading books she talks with Radhaji, Dai Maa and her mother over phone. But still days remain long for her. Today she had her breakfast, lunch and evening tea all alone. She is perfect bird in the golden cage.
There JALAL remains busy whole day with once in a day asking about his wife on phone with Dai Maa.
It was evening 6 when Jodha was sitting on hall watching tv when Dai Maa arrived with black shinning saree for her. She informed Jodha- "JALAL send this for you. He asked you to wear this tonight for some party."
Jodha looked at saree which was shinning and seductive. She took it and happily went up to get dressed.
Aww she was happy to dream for spending some quality time with her husband.
She wears perfect matching earning over saree and bangles on it. Her light delicate make up adds more elegance to her simple beauty. She was dressed to kill today, her big brown eyes and her blushing cheeks was irresistible for any guy. Her backless blouse with just a dori supporting it was perfect to fuel one man's desire. She was looking very sexy and beautiful and she also took her sweet little time to get ready. But one thing was sure she dressed herself not for party or JALAL's order but she dressed herself for Jalal and only Jalal. She doesn't want to feel her just care but want to live with this care and love for ever. She wants her heart to settle in JALAL's strong manly arms. Her heart beats always race fast thinking about the encounter of JALAL. A simple care had intoxicated her to desire to love him like mad. She wants to love him like mad.


She looks at herself in mirror and said- "Jalal I always wants you the day when I came to know that you will be mine, I remember I was 19 and I was told. I always admire you in all interviews. I prayed for you, I want you to love me like mad. I want you JALAL. Please look at me at least once and answer me am I not worth even for your attention. Can you not even do a friendship with me?"

She admired herself for long and just then JALAL arrived in a room. He saw Jodha standing in front of mirror admiring her.
Her long traces were placed in shoulders exploring her bare back. She saw JALAL arriving from mirror. JALAL caught by her bare back. He saw it from up to bottom gulping it like a drink through his eyes. He removed his blazer and throws it to bed and locked the room. He approached towards dressing table. Jodha was looking him coming there. Her heartbeats raced and her eyes gave a lusty desirable looks to him. She gulped water of mouth inside. She wants him to hold her and takes her to his arms. He was too near and their bodies were perfectly to stick together. Her body can feel the warmth and vibes of JALAL. She folded saree tightly with her hands. He looked at her back from bottom to up and Jodha closed her eyes and looked aside. He turned her around and saw her bare waist from saree. Her sexy looks was perfect for him to be with. He took long breathe and said nothing. He leaned down making Jodha go bend and stand supporting a table through her hands. Their bodies were inches away when he removed his watch kept on table and headed to get ready.
Jodha took a relieved breathe though this was not she was expected. JALAL throughout the shower and dressing up thought about her bare back.

-Precap : Akdha's First Kiss

Done plz read it and do comment😆😆b'coz i'm not going to update it till one week😉😉

Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
poor jodha she really likes jalal but he just married her for the will
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
mrsT.thanks 4 the pm.poor jodha.hpe jalal doesn't break her heart.update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chappy waiting for nxt totally loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting update 😊
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ch mrs. Tokas.
Loved jalal care for Jo. But bechari Jo keeps waiting for ja all the time. 😭
Can't wait for the precap to unfold in next ch 😳

Continue soon dear 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome blossom👍🏼
but next update next week😒
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting chapter.. So for Jalaal it's just a marriage for property and Jo is in a golden cage.. Jo already loves him ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant chapter loved reading it
Thanx a lot fr d PM
Waiting fr d first joja kiss update sooon plz 😊 ⭐️

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