~TORN APART~ ch 23 * updated!* 17/7

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Divya Louis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sw123
superb awesome update

Heheh thanx 😆😃

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Divya Louis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: aisha...11110
resh!!! and this was not boring!!😡

Jaldi unres kr 😡😆It was 🤣

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Divya Louis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Aaru9112
Wonderful chappy!!! Pls update soon

thank u 😳

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Divya Louis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Woohooo!! 🥳 Amazing writing!! Really? 😲Loved it!! My poor jodha!! 😭 Ha

How can jalal do this!! 💔 Errr And jodhu's accident!! 😡 Ehh I so loved one thing!! Sorry.. 3 things!! Shalu, anaya n saumya!! 🤣 How did u get this idea!! Lol! They were meant to be a like serous characters now anaya is there so I🤣😲🤣Do continue soon!! Cant wait fa d next update wait for it !😆!![ /QUOTE]

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Divya Louis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Anushka8722
res.. will unres tomorrow😃 Hehe 🤗
great chappy!👏 Really?😳 except Jo's accident😡😡 Grrr😳

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Akanksha Sinha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

awesome chapter ...👏

thanks for long update ...😆🤣

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Divya Louis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA
awesome chapter ...👏
thanks for long update ...😆🤣

hehe thank u lol welcome 🤣

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...jaskaran...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Dekha is baar maine jaldi comment kar diya..😆😆😆. and thank u yaar.. intentionally ya unintentionally tune meri request sun hi li😊.. and u updated before a month😉😉😉.. and i really exited for jalal's reaction.😭😭😭 and bechari jodha..😡😡😡. how much she suffers... hope she is fine...plss update soon😛😛😛... and chapter was awesome.. i love jodha and his father relations.. and how understanding was surya and his family😊😊😊.. hope jalal will not act to bas***d type.. and u will make a happy ending😉😉😉.. and dekha u have not completed the whole ff in only one thread.😆😆😆. love uu and udpate soon... plsss always free to msg like pmm... for chat...🤣add more akdha romance😳😳

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Divya Louis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ...jaskaran...
Dekha is baar maine jaldi comment kar diya..😆😆😆 Finally 😉and thank u yaar.. intentionally ya unintentionally tune meri request sun hi li😊.. and u updated before a month😉😉😉.. Muvah!!!🤗 😳and i really exited for jalal's reaction.😭😭😭 and bechari jodha..😡😡😡Hmmm🤣. how much she suffers... Hmmm😆 hope she is fine.grrr..plss update soon😛😛😛 ERHHH😆 ... and chapter was awesome.. Really!!!😳 i love jodha and his father relations.. Yeah 😳and how understanding was surya and his family😊😊😊.. hope jalal will not act to bas***d type.. Hope not🤣 and u will make a happy ending😉😉😉..grrr!!🤔 and dekha u have not completed the whole ff in only one thread.😆😆😆 Damn it!!.😡😆 love uu and udpate soon... Love u more😳 update??? 🤣plsss always free to msg like pmm... for chat...🤣 Will do yrr 😳add more akdha romance😳😳If any of them are left alive 🤣

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