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Barnali

@Paradise_1

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#771

oh another great update...
loved it...
I just love your jodha she is so innocent...
update soon...

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#772

agar main kahun ki I've read the chapter toh?😆

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swatiluthra

@swatiluthra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#773

Beautiful ch Aisha. 😛
Finally u remembered veer the dog, my favorite character 😆 .
I can imagine how real veer feels like, every time jodha mentions puppy veer 😆 🤣 .
Loved the shoes hiding ceremony. N u gave a very brilliant idea, on how to hide the boy's shoe 😆 ( make the bride wear them) 🤣 😆 . Truly yaar, u r just too much with ur imaginative thoughts . Just one word for u " brilliant" .

N jodha is getting a little irritated . Kitna sawal Karti hai, bechara jalal got irritate and angry 😆 .
Aab toh I m scared, jalal has turned into his businessman mood , so he will be getting angry at jodha's child like acts 😆 😕 .
Just hope that jalal is not too much angry with jodha on their first night . 😭
Continue soon dear. 😊 .
N waise I read the ff before u pm 😆

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swatiluthra

@swatiluthra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...
agar main kahun ki I've read the chapter toh?😆

I also read the ch anu 😆 .

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jhansi_chowdary

@jhansi_chowdary

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#775

superb update dear
i remember ur both veers ohk
coming to the update bichara jalal has so many irritating members including jo also
why r u making her so irritating ? bt admired her alot she is soo chirpy
update soon dear

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: -RuthShalini-
u took some many hours too cook only chicken😲

itz a diffucult job

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: chandgothia
firstly pleasure was all mine🤗🤗...and i dnt mind taking up any criticism... lolz!! but seriously, u did a splendid job😆🤗
aish i loved every bit of it...specially the ending...i mean dat was simply amazing...how cutely dese two began der first night... sachim mei??
hope to have a SR next episode 😆😆😆... ummm...i am also hoping😆
the entire thing was damn cute and not at all boring...it was simply amazing... heheh, thanks😆
dat shoe hidding thing was super amazing😉.. thanks to that ad😆
hope to see ur next update soon😛😛😛 nhiii😲

job well done👏👏 you are praising yourself?😲😆😆