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Posted: 11 years ago
The outpouring of heartfelt suggestions that this thread has seen, proves once again the huge number of fans who are invested in Jodha Akbar's future and want it do even better.
I would now like to request forum members to suggest specific tracks that can be aired.

I have a very rough draft for a possible track after Atgah Khan and Adham Khan's death. It is a mixture of history and imagination-

1 Resham decides to avenge Maham's incarceration and Adham's death. Makes an assassination attempt on Akbar, shoots an arrow that pierces his chest. Akbar falls down grievously injured. Basically follow the plot from the movie.

2 The difference here is, because of Atgah Khan's absence, and Akbar's unconscious state, rebellions break out. Todar Mal and Man Singh go into the field to stem the rot. This weakens palace security as there are still some Maham loyalist left.

3 Keep the suspense of who is behind the rebellion. Let some of the rebels enter the palace and attempt to kill, either the unconscious Akbar or Jodha. The Nari shakti episode got good ratings because of Jodha and the other women's fighting. Well, get them in fighting mode once again.

4 The palace attack is repelled but the situation worsens. Akbar sinks further because of infection.

5 The main enemy behind the rebellion is revealed. It is none other than Mirza Hakim. Now that Akbar is sinking fast, many clerics and others pledge loyalty to Mirza. So, fast track Mirza to villain status than what history would suggest or maybe have Sharifuddin as main villain instead of Mirza.

6 When almost all hope is lost, Akbar regains consciousness. He takes full command and soon the rebellion is crushed. Maham learns her last ploy has failed, she dies of depression but in a twist make Akbar care for her in her last days. As, for Mirza he runs away to Kabul as a fully established villain.

What do you think? I know it is a very rough draft and I have not given much thought to it.

I would request someone more talented than me to give a try to making a track out of the Sati episode I mentioned earlier.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

CVs

1.Please recognise Akbar as the Emperor, and give his due respect. Please follow codes of royalty with Akbar and his queens. Courtiers and commoners show more respect. Moti bai should be put in her place and she should NEVER hereafter speak to Akbar as though he is her colleague.
2.Navratnas- Where is Abul Fazal and Birbal?

Still time for them to arrive on the stage.
3.Construction of Fatehpur Sikhri

Still time. In 1569, when Jodha was expecting Salim then Rang Mahal was built in a hurry. The rest of the buildings were constructed after that.
4.Wars- real wars that Akbar planned and conquered.

Budget considerations prevent wars from being shown? Even the last war we had was over in 5 minutes. 😕
5.JJ outings as commoners - more of badal-kajiri kind of lovely romance (this time no Ruqaiyya please)
6.We have had enough and more of Jodha's hunars. Could we have Akbar's now please - his interest in languages, poetry, translations, music, architecture, his sense of humour to others too, apart from teasing Jo about Atifa and Ben

I like Jo's hunars, but would definitely welcome Akbar's too! 😊 Even his not so fine hunars like getting wild animals enclosed for his hunting pleasure. 🤢
7.Better Wardrobe for all esp for Jalal
8. Akbar and Tulsidas - we had MP mention Tulsidas once, but he was never introduced
9. Akbar and MP, Chittore, JJ attitudes during the war, BD support to Jalal (I think this is what the CVs are dreading to show from Akbar's angle and hence opting for the leap.)

Quite possible
10. Jodha and Jalal visit to Sheik Chishti for prayers for heir
11. Toddy and Jalal collecting statistics of crop production in disguise (toddy deserves more screen space)
12. Akbar's spending time with others too in the harem.(else it doesn't look natural and also we will know the difference of how Jo id dearer to him)
13. Any other natakiya roopantar that doesn't compromise on the intelligence or royalty of the leads.
14.Sati abolition and other reforms and achievements
15.ManSingh's closeness to Jalal
16. Jodha and other begum's and HB's involvement in politics
16. Normal family relationships and happiness between Jalal and Jodha and the others in the harem too.
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Some immediate expectations -
-BB delivery

Going by the way her pregnancy is being shown progressing month by month, she still has some months to go? 😉

-When will Shariffu's leaching be revealed and punished (Waiting for him to be trampled by the elephant😈)

This may also never be revealed. Historically it has no basis. Story-wise, it would be embarrassing for Jalal to know that his BIL was leching his wife. Such situations are generally avoided by CVs, unless they run out of all weird ideas for tracks.😆

-MA's role in all miscarriages revealed

This will not be revealed. Akbar continued to regard her well till her death and built tombs for her and her son, in spite of the banishment. Even though there is some hint that he was aware of her hand in his remaining childless for a long time (as per Abhay), not much was written explicitly about it and not much is going to be shown about it. 😕

-What happens to CB and Nigaar? No daughter of Humayun ruled over Delhi

They will be happily settled in the harem and kept low profile like BB these days. Or Nigaar at least will be killed (by the CVs) somehow. 😊


Good post, Sandhya! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RadhikaS0


Good post, Sandhya! 👏
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Really wonderful post SAandhya.. Hope CVS take a look at all these beautiful ideas and avoid any leap..Its really not needed with such brilaint suggestions.. Can we post a llink of this thread to Zee TV website..?

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Posted: 11 years ago

These are the scenes I would love to watch. I had made a separate thread of these scenes. Posting here on Sindhu's suggestion.


Jalal please do this 😆😃

Here is a cute scene I would love to see, we know when Jodha metes out punishment to Jalal, he gets better of her! 😆

Not this time - here is the cute punishment for Jalal


Since Jalal while pretending raging at Jodha had shouted at his kids, 😡 I want Jodha to complain to Jalal that not just her but even their babies felt bad.

I want Jalal to say he loves his babies, she knows that and he did not mean it.

Jodha should say yes she knows now that he was only pretending and he did not mean it that he loves her and their babies. However, the babies do not understand this pretending business they are too small.

So Jalal should ask Jodha he is ready to take any punishment for this.

Jodha should say since he shouted, now to make up for it Jalal has to sing to his babies. His babies need to learn that Abbujaan is not angry and loves them. 😆

Jalal will naturally say he can't sing, he doesn't know any lullabies. Cos he doesn't remember hearing any as a child.

Jodha is the one who can sing well. Jodha should say nothing doing - he has to sing.

I want Hamida Banu to walk in just then with a dhoop to do najar utaro' of Jodha and babies. Hear what Jalal says and tell Jalal that she did sing lullabies to baby Jalal but he was too young to remember. Jodha tells Hamida Banu to please sing it again. So Hamida Banu sings the lullaby she used to sing to baby Jalal. I want to see a very emotional Jalal put his head in HB's lap and listen.

After HB leaves I want Jalal (who can by-heart anything he hears) to sing the lullabie to his babies with very emotional voice. 😃😃😃

Wouldn't that be the perfect thing his babies should hear from their Abbujaan!

I want to see Jalal talking with his babies in Jodha's womb.

Rahim walks in and hears this and he also tell his Chhoti Ammijaan he did not know babies can hear in there, and now everyday he is going to recite a new poem to his little brothers/sisters.

Rahim gets emotional on hearing of Jodha saying he is going to be bade Bhaijaan of the babies.

Rahim wondering if his father ever told him stories like this, cos he doesn't remember.

I want Jalal to tell Rahim stories of Behram Khan, how he was as a father and how much he loved Rahim.

Jalal should tell Rahim cute stories of his father teaching Jalal.

Jalal promise to Rahim that he will similarly teach him swords fighting and everything like his father had done with Jalal.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JAfanCharu




No I don't want Jalal marrying now .As they are skipping history this can be avoided.Abhi itni begum hain aur nahi

Good points Rashmi😉 Make request number 11, your 1 st one please .

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neeshaa16

Dear Donjas,
Thanks for initiating this thread..Lovely ..If we can give CVS some ideas if they are seriously lacking them ..If they are following history the next interesting track would be Mirza Hakim and Maansingh waala..

Who will Jodha support?Initially Jalal wont trust Maansinghn the .. so this will be interesting track.. Later they can show MP ..war with MP .. if they are creating fiction then they can show this..See if you all like it...

Jo going to Amer for sometime after twins death..she is broken so Bharmal decides tpo take her to Amer..then ..she has a fall ..looses memory..all she remembers is that she is going to get married..but to whom ..does not remember.. Hakima or vaid..says she should not be stressed .. her memory will come back in some time..till then dont try to reveal or hurt her.. so Bharmal in a fix.. informs Jalal about her condition..Jalal shocked.. but then decides to go to Amer..Bharmal says she hates Moghuls now.. cannot accept that you are her husband..does not recollect anything.. now what.. will Jalal do..He tells Bharmal he will come in Rajvanhatshi attire... Bharmal tells Rajvs Jo ..her marriage is fixed to this Rajvanshi King..fakes some name.. Jo is not allowed to go out of Palace. ..Now Jalal meets her in his new avtaar..then what will happen...
Any guesses...
Tell me how you would like this totally fictional track.

Yeah I know its silly..but still I wrote it..Pl dont bash me...

This is so awesome idea which suits Ekta'snature too .leads marrying more than one time .
Wow it will be treat to watch RT in Rajwanshi attire once again. jala wooing jodha ,lavish marriage celebration with haldi mehandi and one more SR😉..and the twist would be that jodha is just doing NATAK because first marriage she could not enjoy
Some one plz call zee n JA cv about this idea .Naughty me
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Posted: 11 years ago
1. i want the leads spend some quality time with commoner getup in a jungle.
2. a war track between akbar & pratap.
3. no leap.
4. reduce negetivity.
5. i want another 5 jems already we got 4jems.
6. BB's delivery as soon as posible.
7. lit bit masti between jeeja saali (jallu & shivani or sukanya).
8. teda jallu who kidding jo randomly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The CV's seem to be following history and may introduce a track whereby a servant of Maham makes an attempt on Akbar's life and nearly kills him, like in the movie. We even made scenario in this thread of how this would proceed.

Now, I have another wish. To make a track on the Sati episode too, perhaps one of the sisters of Jodha makes an attempt. How would you go about it? Suggestions please?


Edited by Donjas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Donjas

The CV's seem to be following history and may introduce a track whereby a servant of Maham makes an attempt on Akbar's life and nearly kills him, like in the movie. We even made scenario in this thread of how this would proceed.


Now, I have another wish. To make a track on the Sati episode too, perhaps one of the sisters of Jodha makes an attempt. How would you go about it? Suggestions please?



Maybe Shivani? ...Tejwant meeting with an accident n then Shivani attempting Sati...as they are in Agra in the palace itself, Jalal attempting to stop it will be quite believable...
Edited by ---Khushi--- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ---Khushi---


Maybe Shivani? ...Tejwant meeting with an accident n then Shivani attempting Sati...as they are in Agra in the palace itself, Jalal attempting to stop it will be quite believable...


In the real Sati incident, Akbar had to do a lot of riding and barely got there in time, so Sukanya seems a more likely prospect. Also, in the real case, it was the in laws who forced the woman to Sati.

I will never believe Tejwant's relatives will ever have the audacity to force a princess.

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