AFTER RELEVATION - LETS WRITE A STORY

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kia karoge jaan kar

@JsparrowJ

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

hello friends

as by sbs segment and IF aricle all know the truth behind this

so after this there would be akhda scene for sure

so i thought lets write a story ..on the same

and this os would be written by everyone here

so rules are simple

dont quote

write one or two line not more than that

and follow the story

so add twist turns etc etc

go ahead frieds

so lets begin it with.

"JO reached to her hojra followed by jallal"

continue from here

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susan

@Susan.Dsouza

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

jalal come to jodha and try to touch her and ask her forgiveness jodha say to jalal dont touch me😆continue plzz

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Sush

@Forthislifeonly

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Jalal felt a stab in his heart at hearing THESE words from his mohabbat...But he was helpless here...

Continue pls!!!!😆 😆

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@-ambrosia-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Jodha :kya kaha tha aapne hum aapka faydaa uthatey hain😡..

Jallu :nnn nnn natak tha jodha begum..ya khuda humari maddad kijiye..warna ye to humey kacha chaba jaayengi...

God:beta ab to hum bhi tumhari madda nahi kar saktey...

Jaisi karni waisi bharni...tumne kaha tum hi bhugto..

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susan

@Susan.Dsouza

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

then jalal says to jodha please forgive and i cant live without you then jodha say

ye phele sochna chahiye tha aur apne kya kaha tha tum mujhe talaq doge nikah ke baad🤣

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@-ambrosia-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Jodha:aapne humse kya kya bola humara dil dukhaya humey aapse baat nahi karni..

Jalal :acha vo sab to theek hai..baad mein baat karengey abhi jaldi se humey ek kiss de dijiye chaliye..chumma chumma de de chumma

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susan

@Susan.Dsouza

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

jodha: app hamein chumme ke liye vivash nahi kar sakte chumme ko chodo hamein app ke muk bhi nahi dekhna app yaha se chale jaye shehansha hum appse viniti karte hai

jajal : jodha hum shehansha hai app hamein yaha se jaane ke liye nahi bol sakte

jodha: tik hai hum hi chale jaate hai

then jalal grab jodha hai in background ishq hai wo ehsas ishq ke woh jazbat badal de ye duniya badal de ye halat

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gauriS

@gauriS

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Posted: 11 years ago

jodha: natak natak mai sab kuchh keh diya aapne 😡

jalal: paaa parrr hum to aap ki jaan bacha rahe the😒

jodha: ab humse aap ki jaan kon bachayega😆

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Sush

@Forthislifeonly

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Jalal(now sitting on his knees)-- Pls Pls Pls JodhaBegum!!!!!Humein muaff kar dijiye!!!!😭😭 Hum sachmein aapse beintehaan MOHABBAT karte hain!!!!!!

Jodha-- Per humare liye humare vachan hi sarvada pramukh thi aur pramukh rahegi...Isi karan vash hum aaj hi Amer ke or pasthan karebge!!!!😡 😡

Jalal-- Now crying!!!!!!🤣 🤣