AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct)

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prianka

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Originally posted by: rima4ever
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Wow an amazing chapter,u r a master story teller.
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abhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PP another good chapter.. I knew Jalaal is the tricky guy, meri Jo is so much vulenable.. How he asked to take away his son.. Jalaal knew very well richo is Jo life, she left her lover sanjay , raised his son with much love and affection..

OMG how much cunningly he is using Jo motherly love and richo.. Now JO will agree to marry him, but richo will ask Jo he wants to live with both his parents now.. what Jo will do ? She is going to live with Jalaal as his wife for the sake of Richo happiness...

I knew it Jalaal is just the manipulative guy 😆, phir se Jo phaas gaya ab tho whole life as his wife 😆

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome update dear 😳... The way jalal tricked jodha indeed a great move 👍🏼...The way he controlled himself and gained what he want...Brilliant writings. 👏

Poor Jodha... fear of loosing her son and her vulnerability 😭... Yeah she can't think anything more than her son.😕

So our poor salim gonna meet dad in next chapter? 😳

Excellent dear.. Waiting for next chapter..

Thanks for PM.🤗

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wooow... super duper update,,, but felt its short da..

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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OMG OMG ... should I do a small victory dance or what ... my jalal ... muahha muahhha muahha ... what an evil mind he has 😎... ohhh godd ... but all he wants is jodha ... HIS jodha 😳... so thoda sa politics khelna banta hai na ... to achieve something .. & that something is His Love , His Life , His Jodha ... ... Ufff ☺️ ...

Yaar PPip ... kya chapter diya hai tune ... haaye haaye ... mashallah .. subhanallah👏 ... jee toh kar raha hai tere iss dimag ko squeeze karke pappi pe pappi de doon 😆 ... aaja filhaal bear hug se kaam chala le 🤗 ... lashy , bhaavviii aur jahnu ke baad u r one of my most favourite writer in this forum ... tu abhi samne rehti toh tujhe squish kar deti tight wala hug karke 😆... (P.s - I am giving my honest opinion about u 😳...)

Btw loved the mother -son convo 😭... gosh such an emotional scene it was ... i had tears reading that state of jodha 😭 ... mother's love nothing can beat that ... but one thing that pained me was how did she agree to give rico to jalal re ...😭 ...

i knw what she must be thinking & what she must be going through ... but even jalal is right here , rico is not safe alone with jodha ... what if something like this happens in future ... what if jalal is unable to save rico as he did now , both will be at loss .. jodha will loose her son & so will jalal 😭... though his intention is to get jodha ... through rico ... but everything is fair in Love & War !!! 😳

Sanjay 😡 aarrgghhh 😡... & this lady bheem is unbelievable 😡 ... she is still advocating sanjay ...after what he has done to her son 😡 (okay I understand sanjay's anger ... lekin bacche ke upar kyun gussa 😭 jalal ko hi kidnap karta na😡 ) ... mujhe nahi lagta she loves her son 😡 ... why the hell she kept the baby 😡 ... abort karke sanjay ke paas jana chahiye tha na 😡 ... ridiculous .. abhi bhi sanjay chahiye toh plz go ... give rico to jalal & get going to your lover ,for god sake... if u have so much trust on sanjay

Okay, okay PPip dont get hyper with me for my above dialogues😆 ... I knw i knw jalal is taking a wrong route to get jodha ... but again he is trying to secure her & his son after this fiasco 😭 through rico ... but I dont see any harm in this ... lekin hats off to jalal's mind & ur brain ... kya soch hai 😉 ...

Precap ... i am damn damn damn excited ... shucks !!! PPip u manage to keep the readers glued & u drive us insane with ur looong wait for an update 🤓 anyways ...plz plz plz update asap 🤗 Looove you re ... 😳

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago