dil AkDha ss chapter 4 UPDATED ON PG 11(closed)

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A new story




This is my first time so sorry for any mistake

Character sketch

JODHA

SHE IS A BIG BUSSINES TYCON .SHE IS A MUSLIM .

LITTLE AGGNORANT BECAUSE EXCEPT HAVING A FAMILY

NOBODY LOVES HRE THEY ALL LOVE HER SISTERE SO SHE HAS HER SELF EMPIRE

BUILT BY HER ONLY SOME TIMES SHE GOES TO HER FAMILY OFFICE ALSO

IN OFFICE SHE IS VERY STRICT BUT AT HER HOME SHE IS BUBLY AND LOVLEY

WITH HER TOW FRIENDS

JALAL

HE IS ALSO A BIG BUSSINES TYCON. VERY ATTIUTED PERSON HAVE NO FAMILY

VERY RICH HAS MANY GIRLFRIEND BUT NEVER SLEPT WITH ANY ONE .HE IS ASO MUSLIM

SHIVANI

JODHAS SMALL SISTER VERY ATTIUTED AND ALWAYS MAKE FEEL JODHA DOWN

GETS ALL LOVE OF HER FAMILY .JALAS PRESENT GRILFRIENS THINKS HE IS ALL LOATO OVER HER AND WILL MARRY HER

BHARMAL JODAS FATHER

MANAVATI JODHAS MOM

MOTI AND SALIMA JOAHAS FRIENDS

ABDUAL JALAS CLOSE FRIEND


Should I continue my frist time so sorry for any mistake
Chapter 1
A girl was moving towards a ferrari she is jodha
Anybody how will see her will get lost in her she is so
Beautiful like a fresh rose with brown eyes. She is going
To office she drives the car her self and reaches office
Every one wishes her and she goes toward her cabin looking forward to a busy schedule

At another part of city a man in 20 very handsome
Wearing a three piece suit gets into his oddi a8
Drived by the driver reaches his office he is none other than
Jala every body wishes him but he rude goes into his
Cabin for a busy day

In same city in a big mansion a girl wakes up and
Sit having a headache because of hangover
She calls a servant and slapped him because he have not
Given him a lemonade, she drinks it every day
Because of hangover after sometimes she gets ready
And goes to Jalal's office
She is SHIVANI in car.
SHIVANI"jala must be waiting for me". Poor girl thinks
Jala is lotto over her not knowing she Is
just another gril for him because of her father's fame
.


Precap. Jala and jodha meets

CHAPTER2

AS SIHVANI ENTERED JALAS CABIN .JALA WAS STANDING SIHVANI FLUNGED

HER AEMS AROUND HIM HOWEVER HE DID NOT RESPONDED BECAUSE TODAY WAS VERY IMPORTANT MEETING DECIDING WHICH COMPANY WILL MIX WITH WHICH

AND HE WANTED BEST COMPANY OR SAY JDA COMPANY (JODHAS COMPANY)

NOT KNOWING SHIVANI IS JODHS SISTERE BECASE FROM A SMALL AGE JODHA WAS LIVING WITH HER UNCLE AND AUNT WHO PAASED AWAY.

SIHVANI"JALA WHAT HAPPENED YOU ARE LOOKING TENSED".

JALAL"NOTHING BABY JUST LOOKIG TOWARDS MEETINGS ".

SHIVANI " WITH MINE NA BECAUSE ITS BEST AFTERE YOURS ".

JALA "DON'T KNOW IT ALL DEPENDS ON BOARD UNDERS WHICH ARE COMPANY LEADS ".

ACTUALY JALAL DID NOT WANTED TO TELL HER THAT HE WANTS MERGE WITH JDA JODHAS COMPANY BECAUSEYES SM (SHIVANIS COMPANY ) CAME AFTERE HIM BUT JDA

AND HIS COMPANY TIED AT FRIST POSITION . AND JALAL WANTED BEST COMPANY

JALA"CHALO BYE MEETING TIME ".

SHIVANI KISSED HIM ON HIS CHEKS

JALAL NOT LIKIED THIS YES HE HAD MSNY GRILFRIENDS BUT HE HAVE LEFT HIMSELF FOR HER LADY LOVE . SO HEDID NOTHAVE ANY ROMANCE WITH ANY ONE

AT JODHAS OFFICE

JODHA WAS ALSOLOOKING FORWARD FOR TODAYS MEETING SHE ALS WANTED TO MERGE WITH JM (JALAS COMPANY )

KNOWING HE WAS RUDE AND AGGNORANT BUT JODA DID NOT BELIVED

BECAUSE SHE KNEW A CHILD WHO DOES NOT HAVE A FAMILYTURNS LIKE

THIS ONLY AND SHE WAS NO DIFFERENT FORM HIM .BAS BECAUSEE OF HER UNCLE SHE LITTLE NICE

JODHA " PLEASE GOD MERGE MY COMPANY WITH JM".

AT MEETING HALL

ALL GIVED THERE PRESENTATION SEPRATLEY

SO NONE MET WITH OTHERE FINALY ALL WERE CALLED AT HALL

JODHA AND JALA SAT BESIDE EACHOTHERE BUT WAS UNNOTICED BY NONE

SOON AN VOICE CAME

"SO AT FRIST THE TWO COMPANY ARE"

"LIKE ALWAYS JM AND JDA "

"I WOULS REQUESTE OWNERES TOCOME ON STAGE". BOTH GOT UP BUT JALA WAS SHOCKED A COMPANY WHO TIED WITH HIM EVERY YEAR WASRUNNED BY A GRIL. HE HAD MAY GRILS WHO WEREBUSSINES TYCONS BUT NONE GOOD AT IT

NOW JALA WANTED SEE HER FACE . AFTER WHEN HE GOT ON STAGE FFRIST THING HE SAW WAS HER FACE' HE LOST IS SENSE WHILE DOCUMENTRY WAS FRIST SAW BY JODHA HE WAS LOST IN HER SIMLE FIGURE BEAUTY .HE CAME IS SENSES WHEN HIS NAME WAS ANNOUNCED TO SIGN ON PAPERS NOW JODHA SAW HIM AND WAS LOST IN HIS SHARP FEAUTRES AND LOOKS AFTERE THIS BOTH SHAKED THERE HANDS BOTH WAS LOSTIN THE MOMENT WHEN BROUGT BY CLAPPINGS...


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