Humari Jaan Akdha TS

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Humari Jaan Akdha TS
Chapter-1

[A/N] Okay! It has been long since I made a post here.I feel so weird today,saying that I no more connect to this forum or this story like what I used to..though I still watch the show sometimes and I am very active on SH Forum.I didn't even want to complete this but Jaskaran wanted me to so here I am.I hope you all would like it and I Love you all.[/AN]
Chapter : 2
She felt her throat getting dry and her hands got sweaty her breathing became abnormal as she began to breathe heavily.Sweat drops formed on her forehead as the figure started moving closer to her.She quickly grabbed the dagger which she had hid under her pillow.She tried attacking the man but in vain as he held her arm tightly,his nails digging in her soft flesh and he covered her mouth to prevent her from shouting.

She knew it wasn't him..That wasn't his touch.She held his hand in front of the sacred fire.She could recognize his touch in a billions.

But then,who was he then?

She bent over him a little and recognized him to be Sharifuddin,Jalal's mister.

The man tightly grabbed her and picked her from the bed and dragged her out of the khema. Jodha fighting all the way but couldn't move properly as he was much stronger..she pulled his dagger from his waist belt and held it near his neck threatening him to leave her there and then.He left her shocked and as soon as she got some space she attacked him and drew the dagger deep on his arm..He slapped her and the force was so much that she landed a few meters back.Thinking that she would hit the ground in no time,she closed her eyes shut but 1 second..2 seconds..40 seconds..passed.But she felt as if she was hanging mid-air.

She opened her eyes to find herself in the arms of her handsome husband 'Shehensha Jalaluddin Muhammad'

Tears brimmed her eyes as he made her stand.She threw her hands around his neck.she knew he would come.She hated her from the bottom her heart but she knew he would always be there whenever she would need him.The moment when he filled her parting with vermilion and when they walked around the sacred fire and took vows to stand by the other through thick and thin.She decided there in his arms to start afresh that's what her mother asked her to do back in Amer.

She slowly parted herself but no longer the king pulled her again into that boe crashing hug.


"and..I am sorry for this..That Sharifudin..I won't spare him"he spoke the former lightly and gritted through the latter.
"Don't be."she sighed.
"I want this marriage to work..at least we should try"he said.
"Hmm.."was all she could manage to say.

She grew to respect him that day.And they lived happily ever-after.

[AN] I wrote this in a jiffy.I am sorry Jaskaran if I couldn't match up with your expectations but I didn't had any ideas..I am sorry!

Please Review People! Appreciation/Healthy Criticism/Suggestions all are more than welcome!
Please hit the Like Button! and do Review![/AN]

Love you all!
Sheetal😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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me first to comment awesome dear😳
plz continue soon. waiting for next part😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Mrs.Tokas--

me first to comment awesome dear😳

plz continue soon. waiting for next part😳😳


Sorry,But It's Over! The End!!
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Originally posted by: Little_Muffin


Sorry,But It's Over! The End!!

really i want to read more😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Mrs.Tokas--

really i want to read more😭😭


He he..I will if I get some good response!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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im so sorry dear.. its res... my internet is not working.. im not available 2moro.. but will comment on monday a big one.. plsss dont be angry😊..nd thanks for updating.. thanku thankuuu
UNRES

First of all im going to beat u up😆😆😆 why such a small one... chalo koi baat nai itne der baad meri ek request ke baad ... its a honour...😊😊😊 and the update is wonderfull...a nd the sharifuu... he is to arrogant.. cmon .. he slapped my jodha😡but thank god.. HE.. THE HERO.. came on time..to save her... i love her.. how she always push him away... but she can't let anyone else come near her exept him... she hugged her.. as she felt first time relief seeig the emperor.. the update is lovely.. and dare to not continue... plsss update soon... and im sorry sorry for the late reply.. as i was busy in the counselling.. but next time aisa nai hoga pakka...😛😛
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its nice dear...looking interesting...u should continue...
i m sorry my net is slow so my like button is not working...
bt sacchi u should continue yaar...and PM me when u update next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

its nice dear...looking interesting...u should continue...

i m sorry my net is slow so my like button is not working...
bt sacchi u should continue yaar...and PM me when u update next...


Hmm..I will think about it..as my practicals are going on and my exams are going to start from next month..Only if time permits..I would continue..
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I will see..
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I miss you so much Sheetal 🤗
Old forum days.. you are one of my oldest n first frnds over here...
amazing write up as always yaar 🤗
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