Akdha SS ~ A Journey Of Dreams ~ part 1 updated

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello everyone,😛

Today i am here to introduce my new story
to all of you, i hope many of you have read my
first ff here ie TRUE LOVE SOME RELATIONS LIVE FOREVER
and A JOURNEY OF LOVE FROM MURAINaA TO MUMBAI
and this time i am up with a new concept..

this my first ever attempt in writng an ss 😳

Please share your views on it...If you don't like it anywhere...Please tell me...I will stop it...And...you can give me suggestions on the story... so please read it and post comment😉😉😉

so lets begin with a small introduction this time...this story is about the modern world,

about the changing terms of relations,
and their exploitaions.

'DREAMS' to say it is just a word but if we think
of it deeply, they contains our whole life in it.
you all must have heard these lines a millions of time

dreams are not which you see while sleeping
instead they are something
which doesn't let you sleep

how true these lines are.. really a person lives for his
dream... something which he wants to achieve,
somethingh which he desires from this world.
he could go to any extent to fulfill his desires,
to accomplish his dream.
this was one case...
but why sometimes it happens that your destination
is just a few steps ahead,for which you have lost
everything...and still you prefer to change your
path leaving your dreams behind, for a new journey
which has no destination..

well this story 'A JOURNEY OF MY DREAMS' basically
revolves around the lives of four peoples..
Abdul, Surya,jalal and Jodha
its about their lives, about their dreams and desires.
but i could only pick one of them to narrate this story for you.
so i picked Abdul, why??.. just because i think
i can expain it better from his view.

and and and ..one thing i forgot..
you must be thinking...is it a love story or not?
well for me its difficuit to answer, but i know
you will get it as you will read it.
for the time being i will say, it will define
love in a different way; because when silent
love speeks, it leaves a sigh in everyone's heart.

i hope you liked this concept😳

Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 1 PG 1

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

plz tell me your names if you want pm of this ss whenever i update it😳

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

THE PRESENT STORY IS BEEN WRITTEN IN FIRST PERSON IE A CHARACTOR OF THE STORY (jalal ) IS NARRATING THE WHOLE STORY.
SO READ IT THAT WAY,,,ALL THE PERSONS,PLACES AND FEELING ARE BEING DESCRIBED BY THE POINT OF VIEW OF THE NARRATOR.😃

PART 1

I was brought in a peculiar room, just with two benches in it; in addition to the four walls and a roof. But whatever it is, I love to come here every time, at least there is something new to see. They left me there with my hands cuffed. It makes me feel good that they still think that I can run away. But anyway I just sat down on a bench, as it was hard for me to stand there.

Within a minute He' came in. He' the only person who use to come to meet me from the outside world, since last thirty-five years, after a gap of every two months. But this time he was early, or may be I have got a bad memory. ,..the age factor.
But his view somehow brought a fake smile on my face.

He is a man of my age only, but now looks younger then me, or the other way you can say I look older. He came towards me but there were bars between us, so; I too have to move up to the bars.
He said "court has ordered for your release because of your good behavior, be ready, tomorrow morning you will be out; I will come to pick you."

Ahhh. What a news, for a person who has spent his whole life in prison, can now die freely in the fresh air. He was waiting for my reply, but the words were choked in my throat; it happens when u speaks once in two months.
I moved my lips, with a low voice coming out "how Is she?"
The man smiled at me and said "just the same, as I have told you last time".
I was expecting the similar answer but truly saying my ears want to hear something new.

He nodded his head and said the same words which he always use to say "you love her!!"
Alas!!!... What to reply him, the same as ever, I said "I don't." after a small pause I tried to extend it but before I could say anything he himself extended it "you are not a kind of person who can love anyone, I know." I shook my head, he has got me now.
We have not much to talk about; he left with it, and the peoples who have left me there came again to take me back to my cell.

My cell' the place where I have lived thirty-five years of my life; there was nothing in it, just four dirty walls and a roof which sometimes even leak out in rainy seasons; with a small ventilator on top, from which I can feel the sun but only for an hour a day.
An uplifted platform of about 6*4 feet, which almost covers the half of the cell; with a blanket to cover while sleeping.
But then also, it was mine and I am used to it now; which I am going to leave tomorrow morning.
Tomorrow morning I will be back in the outside world. I don't know is it good news or a bad one that I will again be a part of that selfish world. But yaa one thing is for sure I will miss this place very much; each brick of here have my life in it...

There must be many questions in your minds..., who am I... where I am..., why I am here..., and who was he? Who is she? And many more; but don't worry I will answer all of them, infact we have a whole evening and a night to talk about it. This night won't end so soon.