Akdha SS ~A Secret Crush~ Ch.5-Pg.123 *THREAD CLOSED.* - Page 101

Originally posted by: swatiluthra

Anu 🤗 ... Vaise how long u take to update 😆 ,Bahut long...😆 but it was worth the wait ... I know!😳 Loved jodha apology n the holi interaction between JJ 😛 ,.she didn't apologise! 😲😲 .. Wonder why u decided to stop at that moment 😭 😆 ...

maza aaya isliye..😳

n happy holi anu ... Know it's late ... But still 😛 ...

happy belated holi!🤗

Chalo abhi get back to writing the ff 😆 n update soon

haaw😆

Thanks for the pm 😊 no sorry no thanks in friendship #103 🤔

Wow 10 pages more & thread finish

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

kya update hai yaar!!

I know😆

it's simply amazing!!!

Aww.. thank you!🤗
last part was awesome...

I know...!😉
why did you have to stop there anu???

it was fun, thats why..!😳
update soon!!!!

I will!😳
want to read what happens next...

they won't kiss, thats for sure!😆
thanks for the pm!!

No sorry no thanks in friendship#104
continue soon!!!

I will..!😳
will be waiting for your pm!!

awww..😳
and at last sorry for the late comment!!!

No sorry no thanks in friendship#105

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

waiting for the update

Originally posted by: dharshu

Anuuu!!!! 🤗 Ash!!!!🤗First of all am so so sooo sorry fa being late!! Its alright re.. I know you are a busy gal!😳 And i haven't commented on many of d ffs!! I owe an apology to all ma favourite writers!! Woh kya hain na.. Am too stressed wid ma project works!! I know sweetie, no need to explain!🤗 And.. Coming to d update!! Whoa!! Anu.. Ur writing skills r amazing!!! You'll make me blush!😳😳So amazing as an experienced writer who have published many successful pieces of work!! And I am definitely not like that..😆 U hav always been amazing in writing.. I don't believe this..😆But.. Ur english.. The words u choose.. The personifications.. The way each sentence was framed.. Everything have improved.. I mean.. Ur writing feels like that of a matured person.. Not of a 12 yr old!!! But I am a 12 year old!!! *pout*😃Ohh yea.. I hav not said about the update still!! well I am waiting for that..😳Well.. It was as usual super cute!! Umm.. Actually more than that!! I know! 😃 Loved how jo n chirag were teasing moti!! These 3 r too funny yet so caring frns!! That they are..😳 Loved it!! N jo cares fa moti alott!! She hav hidden all her pain from moti n suffering all alone just bcoz she doesn't want moti to b worried fa her!! Hmm.. She really cares for Jodha naa.. he couldn't see her like that! 😊But.. Moti wud feel even more bad if she gets to kno dat her bestie was suffering all this alone!! Yeh bhi hain.😃And.. Moti's one sentence about jalal made jo wander like a lifeless person!! It brought back the memories..😭How much she loves him!! She loves him verrry veryyy much!😳 And the letter she wrote.. And d way he found out it was her!! Awww!!! Cho cuteee!! Aakhi maine likha tha..😆 His smile n her reaction for that was lovely!! Meri tarah?😆 Yes.. As she said.. It was d first good thing happened for them!! N.. This director.. Goddd!! Even though he irritates jalal.. He is d reason dat ja n jo met again!! The director's a nice lad! 😳 Its coz of him dat jalal got drunk.. But it led to better circumstances! I soo agree!🤗*lol* really.. Jo gotto kno d soft innocent voice of the otherwise stern jalal only coz he was drunk n not in his senses!!! She knows him really well..😉And of course.. U r sooo grt that u stopped d update at THAT point!! Haina.. I knew I am great!😆But actually.. Its gud!! I dont want them to disgrace themselves in public woh toh tab naa when they'll kiss!😈(that too at this point of thr relationship where each hav so much negative thought about the othr)!!! But still.. Can't wait for things to unfold!!! dekhte hain ki kya hoga.😆Update sooonish ms.gazini!! 🤗I was ms. Perfect yrr😆

Originally posted by: yurimehta11

sorry for replying late Anu Very nice chapter 👏 👏no sorry no thanks in friendship #106 😡loved it to the core BFF chirag moti and jo convo is too good they are such a nice people and caring friends that they are, definitely!😃 but Jo jab ja k baare mai soch rahi ho to dusron k efforts useless hai I agree..😳 Jo ka idea mast tha chit chodne wala Ja k caar pe that was MY Idea.. *possessive*😆 I feel Ja also feel for my Jo attraction hai naa..😉 lets see what is next holi party is superb hats off to Abdul and abhi for fooling Jalal warna itna mesmerizing moment create nahi hota jo ja mai jo ja ka toh harr moment mesmerizing hota hain! but you stopped at exact point bahut chalak ho gayi hai tu I am a chalak lomdi!😈 ab jaldi se update karna umm.. naah!😈

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

HI ANUSHKA...😃

Akanksha dii!🤗

SEE AS I HAVE PROMISED I HAVE READ ALL THE FIVE CHAPTERS...😉

I looove you sooo much.!❤️

CHAPTER ONE WAS MORE THAN AWESOME...👏

Awww..😳

IT WAS FANTASTIC...😃

Sacchi?

STARTING WAS AWESOME... WITH JALAL'S MOVIE...😳

Jalal ki movie!😳

AND THE FEELING IN JODHA AWHILE WATCHING HIS MOVIE WAS AWESOME...😉

Jodha is lattu over him!🤗

CHAPTER 2 WAS ALSO MINDBLOWING...👏

I don't believe this..!😆

HALAKI AKDHA KA 1ST MEETING UTNA ACHA NHI RHA PAR PHIR BHI...😭

takrar mein bhi pyaar hota hain..!

HE IS AGGRESSIVE BUT AT THE SAME TIME HOT + CUTE...😳

He is damn hot for me... only mine!❤️

LOVED IT...😉

And I love him..!🤗

HOW MUCH JODHA LOVES HIM BUT HE...😃

He is damn awesome..!☺️

PHIR BHI JODHA KO DEKHTE HI KHO GAYA...😳

Jodha hain hi aise..!😳

AWESOME...👏

Glad you loved it!🤗

AND NOW COMES THE THIRD CHAPPY...😉

Glad you are loving all this...!❤️

LOVED JALAL'S AND ABDUL'S BONDING...😃

They are best buddies!

AND ALSO I LOVED THE CHARACTER CHIRAG...😉

Chirag...!

HOPE KI JALAL KO USSE JALAN NA HO...😆

Ho bhi sakti hain!😆😆

AKDHA KI SECOND MEETING BHI WAISI HI RHI... SHIT😆

I know...😆

JALAL BHI NA CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT TOUCHING HER...😆 😳

tumne bada notice kiya yeh? 😆😆😆

AWESOME CHAPPY...👏

thanks a lot sweetyheart!🤗

JODHA'S AND CHIRAG'S BONDING IS ALSO MAST...😃

Chirag...!😳😳

LOVED THE BEACH SCENE...😆

That was mast!😆

AND NOW THE FOURTH ONE...😊

UFF! THAK GAYE HAM...😉

seriously you read it?? Main toh bahut lazy hun itna padne ke liye😆

OMG! YE HAM KYA DEKH RHE H...😉

kyaa?😲😲

JALAL SAYING THANK U...😳

he is a nice guy yrr!😆

UNBELIEVABLE...😲

believe karlo?😆

BTW BEACH PAR DONO EK DUSRE KA AWAZ NHI PEHCHANE KYA...😉

I had a nice long explanation...

Why did Jalal not recognize-- Woh ekdum tabhi neend se utha tha toh was feeling too groggy to process who is that girl..😆

Why did jodha not recognize-- easy.. Jalal ne toh kuch kaha hi nahi tha.. bass whisper kiya tha woh bhi 1 ya 2 words😆😆😆

ANYWAYS... AND WHO IS THIS TO WHOM JALAL IS MISSING...😡

guess karo..😆

THE CHAT CONVO AND THE MALL PART BOTH WAS AWESOME...👏

Aakhir likha kisne tha?😃

AND NOW COMES THE FIFTH CHAPPY...🥳

Mera favorite!⭐️

THE BHAANG...😳

ahem..😆😆

OHHO!!😉

Ahem ahem..😉

BOHOT MAZA AAYA... 😆

mujhe bhi!😆

BECHARA JALAL CAN'T CONTROL HIS DESIRE...😳

Uff! He is soo attracted to her! ☺️

LOVE THE PASSIONATE PART...😳

mee too!❤️

JODHA WAS ALSO AN EQUAL PARTICIPANT...😳

bilkul..!😉

BUT TUMNE MAIN TIME PE END KAR DIYA...😡😡

I know..!😆😆

HOPE KI JALAL KO YE SAB YAAD RHE...😡

I don't think soo.!😆

AWESOME...👏

awww..🤗

MINDBLOWING...👏

ab main kya bolun?😳😳

UPDATE SOON...

I will!😃

AND CONTINUE FROM THERE ONLY...😳

Woh bhi I will!😳 bass kiss ki guarantee nahi hain😆

AND THANKS FOR THE PM...😉

Dosti mein no sorry no thank you.. #107!😆

YE MERA AAJ TAK KA SABSE LAMBA COMMENT H...😃

I am so.. soo damn overwhelmed!🤗

ONLY FOR U ANUSHKA...😳

Love you sweetyheart! ❤️

LOVE U...😳

Mee too!🤗

Originally posted by: rexniko

Loved the update ...their relationship ...cho chweet😊😊

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

Love you meri ash!🤗

@Bold!

I remember dat i changed ur name to ms.perfect.. But still.. I luvv d first nickname i gav u!! So.. I will call u ms.gazini n ms.perfect.. Both!! 😆

😆

Originally posted by: hely

it was an amazing chappy

Palak didu! Thank you shooo much!🤗
i liked jodha moti n chirag's bonding BFF..😳jo is really lucky she has friends

Moti and Chirag are very good friends, !😳
jodha is taking step for amend his relation with jalal it was good

she wil be the one to take the first step!😃
jalal is also thinking abt jo..but want to ask u kya ab woh jo se angry nahi hai kya..??

He is...!
i think he is still angry bt now he is drunk so his mind is not working😆dts y this romance😛
Yup..😳😳

chalo kuch to achha hua😳but u stopped here jb kuch hone wala tha to😡
Kuch nahi hoga..😆

Now JJ romace is in Hangover😆
>>😆

when he will awake from this druken state m sure he will regret what he have done with jo..

He might not..😉

still he hates jodha ..plz Anu...make them friends..at least😳

I will re.. don't worry!😃

update soon 2 week is vry long plz try to update soon naa😛
I will..!😳😳

this time u dint pm me y...??

I must have scrapped you then..😳

Will send you a pm/ scrap you the next time!😃