Butchered male Character (BMC)..!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Akbar is finished in the serial!..i do not know who this character is and from now on i will address him as Butchered male character(BMC)..if i address him as akbar it will be an insult! after today in my writings it will be BMC!

the great personality Akbar about whom when caucasians speak in documentaries a great sense of proud expression comes on their face and they call him the gem the miracle of mughal dynasty in india..when they write they have nothing but praise and appreciation of his work..and when our film makers make films like mugha-e-azam amd jodha akbar they keep akbar on a higher pedestal that cannot be touched never mind beaten!

...and in this serial not only ekta's writers degraded him to nothing but also humiliated him to the extent that this character to me looks like a beaten puppy and nothing else..and here i bury my akbar in the serial and give rise to BMC..pl do not address this character as akbar warna real akbar ke naam ki tauheen hogi...

wo jiski saltanat ka suraj kabhi na doobta tha
aaj khara hai benakaab teri hazoori mein bina chatt ke
wo jiske naam se dushmann kaamp uthte the
aaj wo ek adna si begum ke aage kaamp ke jhuk raha hai
wo jiska naam hi kaafi tha sajde mein sar jhuka dena ke liye
aaj wo khara hai apne ujre wajood ke aks samet ta hua
kya issi ko natkiye rupantar kehte hain jo kissi ki shakl aur wajood ko hila ke rakh de? ye sawaal mere lab pe tab bhi tha ab bhi hai...
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Rashmi81 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow that shayari is your own creation?If it is yes then I bow down in front of your this "Hunar"
Beautiful it is.
👏
Edited by Rashmi81 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg ye shayari tumne likhi...👏...so beautiful...
Really yaar tumhari shayari bohot bohot khubsoorat hai...
Sach kaafi khubsoorti se likhi hai👏...

Keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice poem for this reel jalal and yes mandy once upon a time his name is enough for enemies to tremble and after seeing the precap mandy my small hope is also destroyed 🤢.In between mandy jo didn't feel embrassment for this over high sky praises.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Argh, seriously, I don't understand the problem here.
It's an effin Ekta show. Historical or otherwise. What else did you people expect? Men only matter for first few months and then they don't matter in any way anymore. TBH, people should never start watching an Ekta show with unrealistic hopes.
Not that I ever watch the show. That is however, not because of said "butchering" and stuff, but more because it's a stale and boring show with no spark whatsoever. And none of the actors are pulling off their roles anymore. Rajat just looks disinterested and his dialogue delivery has worsened.
On topic though, your poetry is lovely.
Edited by Star_girl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashmi81

Wow that shayari is your own creation?If it is yes then I bow down in front of your this "Hunar"

Beautiful it is.
👏



my beautiful rashmi beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder..dil se nikali awaaz rooh tak pahunchati hai..thank u mere hunar ki bhi taarif hui i thought its only jodha's birth right😆

now this is ghalib's two famous lines in response to our wait of teda emperor!

'ye na thi hamari kismat ke wisaal e yaar(teda) hota
agar aur jeete(seral dekhte) rehte yehi intezaar hota'

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ambrosia-

Omg ye shayari tumne likhi...👏...so beautiful...

Really yaar tumhari shayari bohot bohot khubsoorat hai...
Sach kaafi khubsoorti se likhi hai👏...

Keep it up 👍🏼



thank you sweety..tareef ke liye shukriya🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chembi

Nice poem for this reel jalal and yes mandy once upon a time his name is enough for enemies to tremble and after seeing the precap mandy my small hope is also destroyed 🤢.In between mandy jo didn't feel embrassment for this over high sky praises.



😆..thx dear! i agree..expect nothing but just do not address him as akbar!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Star_girl

Argh, seriously, I don't understand the problem here.

It's an effin Ekta show. Historical or otherwise. What else did you people expect? Men only matter for first few months and then they don't matter in any way anymore. TBH, people should never start watching an Ekta show with unrealistic hopes.
Not that I ever watch the show. That is however, not because of said "butchering" and stuff, but more because it's a stale and boring show with no spark whatsoever. And none of the actors are pulling off their roles anymore. Rajat just looks disinterested and his dialogue delivery has worsened.
On topic though, your poetry is lovely.



i think rajat is on the verge of quitting, he wanted to after sujamal track..that is why he looks disinterested!..now look at the track who will be interested in enacting and watching it! thx for the praise of my shayari😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandyg



my beautiful rashmi beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder..dil se nikali awaaz rooh tak pahunchati hai..thank u mere hunar ki bhi taarif hui i thought its only jodha's birth right😆

now this is ghalib's two famous lines in response to our wait of teda emperor!

'ye na thi hamari kismat ke wisaal e yaar(teda) hota
agar aur jeete(seral dekhte) rehte yehi intezaar hota'

Very good.

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