6~*NOT just a passionate affair ~*Pt 45 -Wake up Jalal!

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

not exactly.. they too smiled at me saying "looks like you are having fun".. 😆

Ohhh 😲... is it 😆

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

@varsha di... Sacchii yaar .. Bichara jalal ... He's brokn ..
P.s. Sorry fr any mistks as m thru daddy's mob :D

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---
@varsha di... Sacchii yaar .. Bichara jalal ... He's brokn ..
P.s. Sorry fr any mistks as m thru daddy's mob :D

Haawww 😲papa ke mobile se typing ... baap re ...😆 no mistakes absolutely 😃

haan na ...lashy ne usko completely devdas bana diya hai ... apne paro ke ghum mein 😭

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Hi beheno! Whats up! I bunked college today! Mom just wouldn't let me go because of the rains!😎

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: justlovetv
Hi beheno! Whats up! I bunked college today! Mom just wouldn't let me go because of the rains!😎

hello darling 🤗 ... a very good morning ... I am still awake like an Owl 🤔... btw is it raining very heavily in mumbai ...??😲

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...jaskaran...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

First of all again congratulations!!!!! 👏👏👏for the new thread... and small request plss move the story ahead quickly😭😭... we want akdha romance more😳😳... agar to promise karte ki ye stor part 52 se ahead chalegi.. even after marriage.. to hum ye keh sakte hai.. ki move ur story as per ur own will😆😆😆.. choice is yours😉😉😉...Regarding the chappy... It was amazing😛😛😛... and in the first time out of 43 updates... i felt that renu is such a good friend more than anybody in his group😊😊😊... and jalal leave the exam hall 1 hour before the completion of paper.. its really sad.. i was really crying😭😭😭... really feeling guilty for him.. atleast one time through the message jodha could have just explained all the things🤢🤢🤢...and he atleast would have focused on his study😭😭.. and if u say that he would not have been quiet than jodha could have given him a kasam type of thing u know.. anything is possible.😛😛. and meera is amazing😃😃... atleast now im having a feeling that somebdoy from jalal's group is the stalker.. bcoz he is so close to jodha and jalal.. baaki tere twist ka hum kuch nai keh sakte shraddha😆😆... but plss atleast for now stalker ka chappy khatam kardo... atleast next two update tak... rishab ko kick out kardo. or stalker ko expose kardo...kindly it is a request😳😳😳... i know u must have thought something... but readers ki bhi to thodi bohti baat manni hi hoti hai naa😉😉😉... and while jodha was racconting everything to meera.. it really hurts... this shows how somebody's family can be her own biggest enemy.😡.. she missed him... really cute... his warm... attention.. his new things to be learned by her😛😛.. everything is written really beautifully.😊😊.. .now i really must doubt from where do u find such phrase words👏👏.. really difficult to handle... love uu and update soon plsss☺️... or ek baad to bhul hi gayi .. plss show some role of jalal in the exposure of the stalker... kuch or nai to usse itna to believe rakhna hi chahiye ki jodha achanak se aise nai jaa sakti there must be some reason she left him other than forcefull engagement .update soon😳😳

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Tahniat Ahmad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Absolutely jahnu ... damn my sleep has gone for a toss yaar😭... few days back I was crying for my hair & nails ... right now I am crying for my sleep😭...
Oh sleep sleep ...plz come back to me😆

hair fall?

Nails? 😲 🤣

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

I used to get calls from unknown caller when I was in school on landline ... & then in college ... this one unknown guy used to follow me & thankfully i never had mobile at that time ... & he stalked me for 6 months ... he had good knowledge about me & my family ... but he wasnt that harmful ... yes but one day when I was in panjim for an inter collegiate competition I had seen him their also ... & in one of the party he had come & tried to befriend me ... which I had ignored & one day he even tried to offer me lift from college to home ... I had refused him politely ... I even remember that guys name Asif ...

he was damn handsome & was a law student ... but but but ... my instincts & my mom's nature made me stay out of all this mess ...

he was a good guy ... tried to persuade me for almost a year & then poor guy gave up on me 🤣

This sounds more like aashiq and less like stalker 😆

Originally posted by: divyavm
Loved part 44 writer-e-khaas 🤗
Hello my Take 5 expert 🤗

- Loved how you make Jalal's pain so raw and real ... You make us live his emotions!
Awww thanks 😭
- Loved Jodha's reflection and surprising trust in Renu being able to get Jalal out of his pain ...It was a very interesting detail
Awww..thanks again..
- Loved how you had Jodha open up to us on why she did what she did
- Loved how she was finally at peace with her choices which was critical for her to fight for what she wants in life and How Jalal's words had convinced her of that
- Loved how you described Jodha's yearning for Jalal
Yeah.. she's properly in love...😳

And there you have it , a mini-take 5! 😆 I am in a take 5 mood today. 😆
😆

But the suspicious me is suspicious about the following:
- Why did Jodha have to tell anyone about her plan? Why wasn't it a self-talk? Will it leak?
But it was a self-talk... it was italicized remember... she hasn't told Meera her plans... only glossed over the stuff that happened at her place.
- Why is this professor suddenly in the picture? Why did she have to tell her plan in his house?
She was meant to go to tuition from two chapters pehle se.. remember? I think its another means for her to stay away from the rona dhona at her place... 😆
- Will Rishabh be threatened by the stalker and why is Rishabh not seedha saadha? 😆 I will never foget that one.
Ok... you'll get your answer soon 😆

Don't trust you at all Lashy! 😉😆 But love your writing! 😊
Thanks sweetie.. 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

One was a stupid crazy guy! I said no to him once because I was already in a relationship with my man ..That guy, Samin, was a very close friend.

He became weird! He used to send me pictures of him drinking and smoking. He used to send me dirty messages and call me up in the middle of the night.Later on my dad took care of it..

The second one was my neighbour, Ibrahim..ugghhh! He proposed me after I got married..my husband threatened him..
The next day I went to mom's place and told her everything... My mom called him up and blasted! After about an hour he texted me, you made a mistake!
I gave the phone to mother cause I panic!
She said what are you going to do about it?
He threatened me that he would molest me..
I still have screenshots as proof so that if he does anything in the future, I have proof against him. 😳

Jhanu said what I was going to... the second fellow sounds just as bad as the NJAPA stalker...😭

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
😭 its 4:15 a.m ... I am not getting sleep ... i tried sleeping but could not, so, I prepared hubby's breakfast & lunch ... btw I am so much worried about jalal & jodha 😭 ...when will jalal come to know about jodha's plan ...😭
Lashy mere jalal ka kya hoga

Varsha.. hope you're asleep at least now... 😭

Le 🤗 hope this makes you feel better.