5~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 43 (1&2) THE GAMES BEGIN

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: shazm
Sorry this is not related to this fanfiction but what is this newbie,senior,goldie etc? What is the order of ranking??I am still sort of new here

Ok...I know a little bit...Let me help you...Look at your name 'Shazm' on the left hand side...It is in dark blue colour and below it is written 'newbie'...below there is the no. of comments you have made... Posts 16

The number of comments increases whenever you make new comments...After you reach a certain number of comments...like for example, 500 or 1000 0r 5000 the colour of your name changes, while also changing the title from 'newbie' to goldie, dazzler, sizzler, rockerz etc...In short, you get an AUDHA😉... There are certain perks attached to increasing AUDHA which I have not much clue about...Except that your PM limit increases😊...That's all I know...

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Ok..as much as I'm tempted to comment on 43, I'll do 42 first...😆

Jo is going through hell...can't imagine what it would be to be in her place...everyone's family and most importantly parents mean the world to them, neither can you you go against them and fight nor can you run away! All you can do is try and try n try, hoping your they'll give you a chance, understand your side of the argument..and when none of it works, it's just what Jo's going through..the biggest tightest hug to her!🤗 Wish there was someone in her family who had given her a chance..😭

And plus her bhaiyyas talking crap about the guy she loves so much..there's only so much she can listen to and keep quiet...no wonder she sanpped..she knows her guy is anything but that..!! But again...😵😒

The Jalal-Ammi convo was the cheerful part of the chapter and I loved it..! I always knew ammi had an idea about this, I love her!!❤️ And him..I don't have to tell you..☺️

And the stalker part...well you know you scared me right?! 😒 Reading it at night creeped me out more..😆😆 But really...the choicest of gaalis to that loser!😡🤬

Loved the chapter...and baaki ka chappar chappar I did on the update day na..😆

Now I'll go to chap 43! 😎

Edited by baubles - 11 years ago

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preeti.r

@preeti.r

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Simply wow chapters 👏, fast paced , interesting and as usual awesome , what a twist in story by JO , good plan to use the stalker against rishab and bringing some sense to her family that there are something which are far more important than religion status and society... Your daughter 😊.

Can't wait to see how JO goes about it. Also eagerly waiting to know who the creep is ...plz reveal karo.

But

Felt really sad for Jalal 😕, bechara . Usko Devdas math banana. He should start attending the college again.

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#804

What a chapter!!!! And both the parts were...GOSH!! You know you're AMAZING right??!! The way you write..you make me feel every bit of it, every emotion! I LOVE YOU SHRADDHA AKKA!! 🤗❤️

I was already feeling bad for Jalal when the chapter started...how hapy and excited he was! It made me wanna cry cos it was all gonna go down the drain...DAMN!!! Kept telling...'no Jalal, stop being so happy, nothing good is awaiting you..'while reading it..🥺

And it was even worse than I expected...I anticipated she would end their relationship and tell him it's better that way but this was a hundred times more emo!! She reacted to absolutely nothing he said!!! All curt, rude, hurting replies...hurting him, his pride, his love everything!! No, she wasn't wrong at all and never wanted this, but his condition there...GODDD...it must have hurt so very much, every word of hers! I cried when he literally begged her to not do this...what must he have been going through to have come to this! And it just made me realise all over again HOW MUCH this guy loves her!!!😭😭 He would have NEVER done this if it was not his gal in front of him...who was being so harsh and feelingless and most of all LOST..he couldn't even see HIS Jo there, it really felt like it wasn't her...I was 💔😭 ...

No reaction when he got hurt, giving her the tilak n marriage news the way she did, being so ungrateful by asking him whether she had asked him to leave college, behaving totally unbothered about anything he said, him pleading even! I can't imagine how much effort and self-control it must have taken HER to do every bit of this..and all this to the guy she loves..HER GUY! 😒

But again, Jo is doing all this to trick the stalker and show him that two can play the game! I'm gonna be cheering for her..Go Jo Go!!😎

And somewhere, she wants her family to see what their Rishabh is n what her Jalal is made of of!! And telling Jalal everything about her plan might not have worked, the stalker seems to know everything! And waise bhi, her Jalal is running away nowhere na..she knows he loves her and will always do! It's just a matter of time before they'll be back together...if the plan works that is...till then their love and trust will keep them close as always!❤️ She's putting a lot at stake and playing this game, but it will be worth it..! I love these two!!❤️ *Cheering on for my star Jo*🥳

Ok, now I can't wait to read more...chalo chalo vegam vegam write...I'm waitinggg...n it's not good to keep ME waiting😆😆

Loveddd these two parts too...love you loadsss🤗🤗

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sara

@SARA4444

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

NOOO if at all such thing happens with jodha 😡 then we shall not spare lashy ... we will grind her , bake her & mince her like kheema 😉

exactly di 😆

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: shazm
Thank you @Pals2411

Being a newbie, you are restricted to make only 10 posts in 24 hours, for groubbie it is 20 posts..
the next level is Senior member when you cross 100 posts and then there are no restrictions on number of posts you make in a day.. 😉

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shazm

@shazm

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Being a newbie, you are restricted to make only 10 posts in 24 hours, for groubbie it is 20 posts..
the next level is Senior member when you cross 100 posts and then there are no restrictions on number of posts you make in a day.. 😉

Thank you very much

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: Pals2411

2) SHE HAS GUESSED THAT THE STALKER IS EITHER IN COLLEGE/OR FROM THEIR GROUP AND SHE DOESNT WANT TO TAKE THE RISK ---------- For Jodha, Jalal's safety is her MAIN priority...She has all thru I think guessed that the stalker is someone from college...ACTING JILTED and BEING REALLY HEARTBROKEN are two different things...If she tells this to Jalal, there will be a lot of answering to do...Secondly they will plan and make moves...If Jalal by mistake lets this known to his friend/s or stalker gets a wind of it, then all hell breaks loose and Jalal's life is in danger...By breaking his heart, his group comes to know that Jodha is really a BITCH who left her love for her family and has got engaged...They will keep her away from him...THIS NEWS WILL SPREAD LIKE WILDFIRE...Stalker relaxes from Jallu's side but gets to know about engagement and goes after him...JALAL IS SAFE😉

This is how I tamed my ever questioning brain.. after all acting is acting.. 😆
I finally could convince myself that at this juncture it is a better move, but at a later point of time, when she has some solid clues about the stalker, she can consider taking Jalal into confidence. I'm sure she'd be successful in placating him then.😎

Edited by hemakeerti - 11 years ago

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: baubles
What a chapter!!!! And both the parts were...GOSH!! You know you're AMAZING right??!! The way you write..you make me feel every bit of it, every emotion! I LOVE YOU SHRADDHA AKKA!! 🤗❤️

I was already feeling bad for Jalal when the chapter started...how hapy and excited he was! It made me wanna cry cos it was all gonna go down the drain...DAMN!!! Kept telling...'no Jalal, stop being so happy, nothing good is awaiting you..'while reading it..🥺

And it was even worse than I expected...I anticipated she would end their relationship and tell him it's better that way but this was a hundred times more emo!! She reacted to absolutely nothing he said!!! All curt, rude, hurting replies...hurting him, his pride, his love everything!! No, she wasn't wrong at all and never wanted this, but his condition there...GODDD...it must have hurt so very much, every word of hers! I cried when he literally begged her to not do this...what must he have been going through to have come to this! And it just made me realise all over again HOW MUCH this guy loves her!!!😭😭 He would have NEVER done this if it was not his gal in front of him...who was being so harsh and feelingless and most of all LOST..he couldn't even see HIS Jo there, it really felt like it wasn't her...I was 💔😭 ...

No reaction when he got hurt, giving her the tilak n marriage news the way she did, being so ungrateful by asking him whether she had asked him to leave college, behaving totally unbothered about anything he said, him pleading even! I can't imagine how much effort and self-control it must have taken HER to do every bit of this..and all this to the guy she loves..HER GUY! 😒

But again, Jo is doing all this to trick the stalker and show him that two can play the game! I'm gonna be cheering for her..Go Jo Go!!😎

And somewhere, she wants her family to see what their Rishabh is n what her Jalal is made of of!! And telling Jalal everything about her plan might not have worked, the stalker seems to know everything! And waise bhi, her Jalal is running away nowhere na..she knows he loves her and will always do! It's just a matter of time before they'll be back together...if the plan works that is...till then their love and trust will keep them close as always!❤️ She's putting a lot at stake and playing this game, but it will be worth it..! I love these two!!❤️ *Cheering on for my star Jo*🥳

Ok, now I can't wait to read more...chalo chalo vegam vegam write...I'm waitinggg...n it's not good to keep ME waiting😆😆

Loveddd these two parts too...love you loadsss🤗🤗