SS-Being Devil's Beloved chapter 5 (Aug 17, pg 1)

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Ruthshalini

@Devilicious_ME

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

hwooo awesome update going to read it again😃👏😆😛

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08
RES.. YIPEE second ONE..

anushka u hate it... im loving it.. after all yaar its jalal.. nobody else... i know somewhere in her heart she is also enjoying.. nd your update is really fantastic... nd i must say.. u have improved to the extreme.. your lines give goosebumps.. how silly jodha... how can u sleep in a blanket when u know that jalal has come in ur life..😆😆 he doesnt need to removie your clothes to do anything to u...🤣.. jokes apart... now jalal is going to imprison jodha.. hmmm... but dont u think the update was far far short than what mehak used to update initially.. .abhi to maine parna shuru kiya tha... ki wo khatam bhi ho gaya.. tumhaare teaser ki vajah se.. vo to purana hi udpate lag raha tha.. jab new para to khatam bhi ho gaya... or dusre ff kab update kar rahe ho.. but i dont mind agar next time bhi yehi kardo to.. i will love it...

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

nice update but short dear.. make it longer next time... wil wait for the pm

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Waaoooww ... radhi ... mast chapter ... khup chan !!! awesome ...

This was damn sensual cum scary chapter ... btw she comes to knw that jalal is a vampire ...😲 ... ab toh waat hai iss ladki ki 😆 ... kyunki jalal chodega nahi ... btw was jalal trying to seduce her 😉 ohh god !!!

I liked that part jalal hanging on the roof ... gawd I am imagining rajat hanging on the roof 🤣 ... I loved it radhii ... you are too good writer 👏⭐️

ab aage kya hoga re ...??? jaldi jaldi update de do ... just cannot wait 😃

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Yaar i am more exited for chappy 3 when are u updating.

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Radz

@...Radhika...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: hely
okay..means he wants jo's blood ...??😕will he try to harm jo...
lemon ka flavor hota h lime..next chapter kb de rhe ho btaa do time..😆
plz any fix date,,,radz...
update ASAP...now i cnt wait😉

no re he will not harm her! He's just trying to flirt with her

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: PupCat
no re he will not harm her! He's just trying to flirt with her

flirt kar raha hai??😲 Phir theek hai

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Radz

@...Radhika...

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Anushka8722
Chapter 2 is such a chapter with mixed emotions!
I hate Jalal for whatever he's doing to my innocent si Jodha..

Jodha is also angry at him.. after what he did...

You've penned it down brilliantly di!🤗👏

Thanks a lot for the pm!

Love you

Uhmm Uhmm chhotisi bacchi.. Jodha was na*ed, jalal is on top of her and thres only one blanket between dem!! 😃 Isse hot kuch ho sakhta hai kya?

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

wow!!!! i was just like 'ab kya hoga'...your chapter's each line was a suspense for me...nd yes!!! i like this devilish jalal...very much!!!! may be there would be people who don't like him but i LUV him!!(😆)

i dont know why may be bcoz i luved the way u patagonist his character or whatever...but the chapter was spell bounding👏...u know hypnotinizing...

luking forward for your next update...if possible update soon...yea yea!!!! am greedy(hehehehe!!!!)

but plz try to update it as soon as possible...

nd yes how can i forget thanks for the pm🤗

Edited by aisha.....11110 - 11 years ago